I Sell Zanpakutō in Tokyo

I hope this book can have a stable outline. Then try not to pigeon. Because pigeons get used to it and there will be problems. No book can appeal to all readers. If you want to be a great master, you must first have your own style, and secondly, you must persist

Write down your favorite character, Japanese name or Western name, Zanpakutō name. The original one requires additional abilities. There is a high probability that it will appear in this book. PS: Forget about your own country, the market situation prevents me from getting involved with too many people and things in my country.

As of now, the only thing that makes me feel bad is the selection of the God of Death. If you think about it this way, few of them are combatants, all of them are high-ranking officials. There are other team leaders who can give up their team members at will. I believe that no boss dares to do this. So far, I have only seen the protagonist as a tool man. I feel that there is no big difference between having and not having one.

The writing is too casual, and you are a bit too cool to pretend to be awesome.

Quite boring. I drank half of the drink and suddenly realized it was a few days past its expiration date. Not to mention wasting a bunch of book coins, this book was also cut The plot is confusing. I have read so many behind-the-scenes books This one is the weirdest. It feels like the protagonist has become a tool man. Call it salted fish. Those supporting characters kept dancing. Write a group portrait and write it in a confused way. No foreshadowing. There is no reversal either. The battle is written like a running novel. It would be okay to say that the protagonist is an ordinary person. I don't believe that the protagonist didn't notice the little actions that the supporting characters did on their own. Even if they didn't know, they felt it, right? It feels like I'm constantly testing. Not a deterrent at all. When the time comes, they think you are not awesome and want to overthrow you. What should they do? Both sides are engaging in a meaningless war of attrition. Then, if you can't beat him, you will be subdued. Playing emotional cards with you or something like that. Either everyone is the enemy, or they are homeless. I tolerated it before. The protagonist's sword can enhance his strength. I don't care who I gave it to. It's all leeks. A little action doesn't hurt. , But his identity was exposed later. The skills are packaged for others, but I don't understand them. Although it is your cousin who is looking for you. You yourself said you don't care. But you have to at least show your attitude. This is so easy. , Won't the higher-ups despise you? No price paid? Don't tell me that billions are just paper on which numbers are printed. Later it became more like a game world. Kill monsters and explode equipment. What

The subject matter is quite good, but there is no core at all. The protagonist doesn't even know what he wants to do. Sometimes it feels like I want to write about campus, and sometimes it feels like I want to write about the daily life of youth and love. You can first set a goal for the protagonist, such as reappearing in the Soul Society or the Serenity Garden. Become a veritable Spirit King (Japanese version of the King of Hell). After all, your title is related to Zanpakutō, so it attracts Shinigami fans. It's perfectly fine to write around this goal and theme. Although many people also write about this theme, the protagonists are different after all. Most of them directly manifest the original captain. You are looking for a new captain for the Zanpakutō. The personality can match the original Death, but you can make up your personal experiences as you like (it depends on the author's level). It is very promising if you write it carefully.

In fact, the Flower Sky Crazy Bone should be one sword instead of two. Shunsui divided it into Flower Sky and Crazy Bone in order to hide the Eight Mirror Sword of the Ise family, and Kuang Gu was responsible for hiding the Eight Mirror Sword, so at least the Flower Sky Crazy Bone currently distributed by the protagonist to others should be a single sword rather than a pair of swords.

The protagonist's role is too small. I've read several books recently and they all look like this. They have been updated for several days in a row. The protagonist doesn't even have a name. It is said that the protagonist is more like an NPC who connects the stories.

You're done now, if you don't write two hundred chapters in your next book. I will definitely not come back to see it. Who can bear it?

Zanpakutō does have strengths and weaknesses in certain aspects, but the one who is stronger at the captain level is the captain, not his sword. The sword should not be used to choose the captain. Besides, there are many Shinigami who are as powerful as or even surpass the captain. What about the masters chosen by those Zanpakutos?

This subject could actually be more interesting. For example, every owner of a Zanpakutō has a story background. The protagonist comes into the world to sell knives, but is reborn to watch all living beings. He occasionally ends up pretending to be cool, describing the stories of selling knives one after another, and finally connects them together. Of course, this not only tests the author's writing skills, but also his experience...

I feel like the writing is very good. It's about group portraits. I'll write two chapters for each character and then switch to other plots. I'm going to write about the main character. There's no specific description of how much he's improved or his strength. Could it be that I read it too early and the plot is still foreshadowing?

The protagonist's apparent identity is too strange. . Not even a Zanpakutō? How about coming to take down Zangetsu? . .

It's time to test the author. I always have at least 1 million words before I can start reading. I'm most bothered to wait for updates. Generally, 2 million words will definitely be read. You're still too little, too little, and considering your previous eunuch performance, it's even more impossible to read it now, so I'm waiting to see if I've gained weight in the end? You are still the eunuch

I believe you again. If you are cutting, I really don't dare to chase you.

You can't just fight Xu. Since he calls himself the God of Death and kills one or two scum, then there's nothing wrong with him, right? It is best for everyone to have a long life on their heads. After the Quiet Spirit Garden is built, reincarnation can begin. Aren't there people with super powers? Those guys use their own abilities to escape death. Ordinary people can't kill them anymore, so they rely on the God of Death. Moreover, the hierarchy is too solid. Those who have the captain level can be captains. If they don't, they can only be captains. If you can be a minion, you can use Zanpakutō in the early stage to build the foundation and complete the division. Then, except for the captain-level Zanpakutō, the rest will be dealt with briefly. You don't have to make up abilities. Even if you need them, there are only one or two, and they are also the goods of the big boss. The main plot is still promoted by those captain-level Zanpakutō.

There is no turning point between your paragraphs. As I look at it, I always feel like I missed something.

The good Soul Society turned into a copy of the game

For a moment, I couldn't tell whether I was in the anime section or at the starting point.

Emm, the idea is good, but the writing skills are a little bit poor. I feel like I should be able to read it happily, but I can't. It's a bit uncomfortable.

Damn it, how could I raise it to death?

Don't you think it's too easy to become a Shinigami? And if you don't become a Shinigami, it's just death. There is no other punishment at all. And I don't see how these people can master spiritual pressure in a short period of time and start to unlock it.

The protagonist was discovered now,?

So far, Death is just a mass-produced and wholesale superpower tool to everyone, not an identity. The only difference from a firearm is that it is more powerful.

Don't cut it, don't cut it, I'm really scared

Will the author plan to write about the power of Quincy in the future? According to the setting, the Soul King will also use the power of Quincy, as well as the Perfection Technique, etc.

The subject matter of this book is very good. No one has written it before. Work hard and become a super god.

The last book ended inexplicably

Just one chapter? ? ? ? ! ! ! !

The sudden Arrancar. Basically, it can be said that you encountered the final boss in the Novice Village. I can't understand why you are so anxious to speed up. This Arrancar, given the current situation, may not be able to be defeated by the captain in a one-on-one fight if it develops for another year.