People Are in Fantasy, I Set Off an Internet Trend

One thing can be seen from the few comments and discussion posts in this chapter. It is not that good, and it is far from the Magic Internet. The plot of this book is too long-winded and not attractive enough. The main character is given spiritual stones for free which is also a big complaint. Finally, it is a void satellite. Even the first-grade warriors mentioned by the author cannot find it. The communication range is only one county?

There is a typo in the first chapter. Please correct it.

The new book is about to start, let's have some fun~

I came to see you write about the Internet. It's not that the first ten chapters you wrote were long, watery, and novice about just one thing.

If you haven't read it, just look at the title of Chapter 10 and you'll understand. It makes me sick. I really don't understand that you have traveled through time. No matter whether you want to lie down or become stronger, you must at least have a brain, right? I have more than 3,000 points and don't want to improve my own strength. I don't want to change my skills and share them on the forum. I go to a brothel and see an injustice on the road. Draw a sword to help? That's fucking outrageous

When I read the title of the book, I always thought it was about developing the Internet and changing the world. But after I entered it, I was still the main character who was surrounded by people. I really had no interest in beating people to save them. I just wanted to see the development of the Internet, but it slipped away.

It is recommended that the author focus on the structure of the Internet. There is really no need to write about real conflicts. The main reason is that the writing is awkward and avoids the important.

After the trial reading, how can I put it, when I first read the title and introduction, I thought it was a group drama about the Internet changing life, but it turned out that it was still an old cliché written around the protagonist, and the logic was not smooth. It seemed boring and could be used as fodder.

Receiver, saint label. The problem maker.

Let me put it this way, after reading 60 chapters, I feel that the author has his own ideas in the general direction, but he has not yet learned the essence of behind-the-scenes flow (i. E., Group portraits). The content is still a accumulation of old routines with the protagonist as the main perspective (in fact, even if you put some content on Goudan instead of the protagonist, you can get a lot of points). Readers can understand the follow-up after reading a few paragraphs, and the protagonist has lofty ideals but the things he does cannot withstand scrutiny. But there haven't been any particularly bad points. I can only say that you can read it when you are short of books.

A level 1 account that introduces poison and water every day

The writing is very vague, as is the case with most newbies.

The character of the protagonist is the character of the author, and people are taking advantage of this without even realizing it. 🤭I can make as many friends as I can.

It's an idea I like, but it's a pity. . . .

I thought it was a mafia trend developing behind the scenes, but I didn't expect it to be a death plot in front of the grave.

The chat group goes back and forth and just writes about Goudan. Is anyone else dead? The protagonist doesn't grow old. Just a tool and a person behind the scenes will be fine.

Author, let me give you a suggestion! Now that you've set up the internet these! So why do you still call him? It's called the Internet! Why don't you give him a fancy name? It doesn't look like you have any IQ at first glance! If a second time traveler comes, he will recognize him in minutes! Choosing a noble name will not only make you look classy! It also seems that the author is more intelligent

The points are given by the protagonist. As a result, 100 points can be exchanged for a spiritual stone, which is one tael of silver per point. I want to know, are the points directly exchanged for the system? Then are the protagonist's points the same as ordinary people's points? Why can the points given by the protagonist to ordinary people and the system points be exchanged? Even if it is exchanged, it will make me confused if you don't explain it. The important thing is that 100 points can be exchanged for a spiritual stone. If you post a post for 10 points, does that mean that the basic economic unit of society in the future will be silver, not copper coins?

I hope the author will not give up and at least finish writing 🥺🥺~

It doesn't feel like something new before your eyes, it's still an old system and an old story. Let's take a look at the magical world and create the Internet.

Two people are in conflict with each other because of an outsider. Where does this sense of generation gap come from? The more detailed the plot is, the more poisonous it becomes. It's like giving hundreds of thousands to others, and you may need to give millions more later.

After reading the first thirty chapters, I talked about construction a few times at the beginning, but then I never got involved with the Internet and kept talking about my own development path. Maybe the author wrote a lot for the sake of foreshadowing, but the plot progressed too slowly, the strength did not increase a lot, and the effect of harvesting points was not obvious. People who are impatient will be discouraged after reading it, but if the development momentum is still there, you can still take a look.

No need to wait, the author has found a job and won't write anymore

This book is useless, I suggest the author not to write it.

It has always been strange. There is already a cultivation system. Why should I buy the Internet? I can deduce a concept by myself, and then connect it to the Internet. The Internet will naturally be realized, and other people's insights can be sold. How wonderful. Why should I stupidly climb the technology tree? Is it necessary?

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Come on, author, I recently thought that with the Internet being so developed, the online literature system is rarely written in depth. The author should hurry up and start a new genre.