The Movie and TV Wanderer

It feels awkward to keep writing about foreign worlds and intersperse domestic ones, in my personal opinion.

The subject matter is excellent, but the system has too much screen time. Many parts explaining the system can be removed. The cheat system doesn't need to be explained too clearly. The protagonist and the reader only need to know that the system exists, that it allows the protagonist to travel to different worlds, and that there is a lottery every time.

The best time-travel story, in my opinion, is about being a financially independent person in the real world—not too much money, not running a company, and having as many women as you want is irrelevant. You have to complete the missions in the world you travel to, but selectively, assuming the system doesn't punish you.

The beginning was quite good, but the flaw lies in the subplot of "My Deskmate." The relationship between the protagonist and Zhou Xiaozhi doesn't make sense, especially since it's just a mission. Human emotions can't be faked; they can only be imagined.

The protagonist has it too easy and faces too little pressure. Instead of practicing shooting, artillery, learning combat, and preparing for anything, he has the leisure to run a company and have fun. And he's not short of money ╮(╯_╰)╭ Does he even know how to parachute, dive, survive in the wild? Is he proficient in weapons, drone operation, etc.? Are the time bombs, machine gun ammunition belts, and magazines loaded? In some ways, this protagonist is utterly useless.

The realistic elements are a bit weak, the female lead's character isn't likable, and the protagonist is a bit of a sycophant. Try to avoid writing realistic stories; the results might be better that way.

I couldn't hold on! I died from the poison around chapter 60! Just a quick rant! The beginning was okay, but once the female lead appeared, I couldn't keep going! I skipped through the real-world part! The female lead's first arc was alright, but after she returned, instead of training herself and improving her survival skills, she started a company, had a melodramatic romance, and all that other cliché stuff! I couldn't take it anymore! I'm dropping the book!

When it comes to women, it's best to say and do less to avoid making mistakes; focus your main energy on the task at hand.

That was amazing! I couldn't get enough. Keep updating!

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