I Was Unemployed, so I Had No Choice but to Try Sleeping in a Haunted House.

I would like to give you a suggestion. While the book is still new, it is best to change the setting of the heroine (although I don't know if she is the heroine, but I will call her that for now) before she dies. The heroine was drunk and raped by several people during her lifetime, and then she couldn't bear the insult and committed suicide in red clothes. Generally speaking, the heroine must have been very resentful before her death, otherwise it would not be like this. But the problem is that after the heroine died, instead of turning into a resentful ghost, she just looked like a stupid girl. She never thought about revenge. In fact, this is not too poisonous, but the biggest problem is that the hero accepted her, okay? And on the third day after we met, we spent the night together with the female ghost. According to this plot, a female protagonist appears within a few chapters, and there will definitely be more if the plot progresses later. So, if the setting before the death of the first heroine is not changed, a large number of readers will definitely be discouraged. After all, not everyone can bear it. If you are too lazy to change it, just kill the woman who appears now, and there will be no problem.

Give up, what do you mean when you keep writing about fighting Shui Lao Zhao? ? Boring? ? What's more, when the Japanese meet Yu Dayou, isn't the first image of him running away? ? I'm so speechless when I go shopping with someone. The most speechless thing is the fighting. I have been fighting since I paid for it. I deserve the bad grades.

Looking at the introduction, you can tell that the writing is wrong. Gatling goes to fight dirty things. Why are you running around with Gatling in your hand?

This book is too white, I can't stand it anymore

Why can't Mao (*￣m￣) invest? The cliche storyline is a bit fun and it's pretty good to watch without thinking.

I always feel that your writing style is strange, but I can't put my finger on it.

It's outrageous that your agency specializes in introducing haunted houses... How can there be so many haunted houses in one city? There is also a dedicated person in charge... 🤫 I think it would be more interesting to remove the intermediary and let the protagonist do the digging himself.

The writing is quite rubbish, and the title is completely inconsistent with the text.

No one can write such a good book. The system has no sense of existence and the things provided are dispensable.

There are almost 400 chapters and only nine discussion posts. This is too miserable.

It's well written, but I haven't written any "other novels"

I wrote a heroine to death, had sex with two women and never wrote it again. As a refreshing novel, this is actually quite a failure.

Keep it up, author, I'm optimistic about you

Not bad, much better than what the studio wrote. Have its own characteristics

The plot is so embarrassing that I have no desire to continue reading.