Number One Scholar in Brocade Clothes

I haven't read it since I saw Sun Salt, based on what I've seen in these few chapters. The protagonist's grandfather, Jinyiwei Qianhu (the fifth rank), the eldest uncle, the deputy Qianhu (the fifth rank), the second uncle, Baishen, (the second uncle's white body? Unreasonable), the deceased father Baihu (the sixth rank), the head of the house is the mistress, and the protagonist's grandmother. It is not stated clearly that the protagonist's family has been separated, so the plot of taking back the protagonist's property and store assets in the previous chapters becomes increasingly unreasonable. The first point is unreasonable. There is no separation of families and no permission from the head of the family. How can the daughter-in-law go out and make a living in public? The reward from the court should also belong to the protagonist's family business. The protagonist can just take the reward from this room. How can we allow our legitimate daughter-in-law to live outside with her two children? What's going on? The second point is unreasonable. In the family, the protagonist's grandpa Qianhu, the boss and deputy Qianhu, the third eldest brother Qianhu, and the second eldest son are white? The head of the family has an official position, the eldest son has an official position, the youngest son has an official position, but does the second son have an official position? Isn't this bowl of water held too levelly? Boss, the descendants of the third child have an iron rice bowl, but only the second child does not. Isn't this a cause for trouble? The third unreasonable point is that the protagonist is illiterate at the age of seven. The Jinyiwei system in the Ming Dynasty was hereditary. His father was a member of the Baihu family. The protagonist automatically joined the Baihu family when he reached adulthood. A child destined to start as a sixth-rank official cannot read at the age of seven. How little does this family love educating and cultivating their children? How big of a mind does his mother have? Not only do you want to be a hundred households, but you have to be literate even if you are a low-ranking imperial guard. To sum up (I think I haven't found all the unreasonable points, typing is tiring and hurts my brain, so I won't list them), with these understandings, from the beginning to the end of the book, there is no plot that is coherent and logical.

If you can't tell a good story, don't tell it. Who would be disgusted by writing about an evil woman? The characters are all as stone-like, with no inner emotions reflected at all. Readers read novels just to kill time, so why do you reflect your reality into novels?

It's really torture to watch Zhu Hao punches hard externally and is cowardly and licking the dog internally. The person who tortures me the most is not Mrs. Zhu, but Zhu Hao's mother. She is mentally ill to some extent, and her masochistic constitution is inherited from Zhu Hao. Even his uncle has not yet understood it. He was always in a hurry and rushed to everything. After his grandfather said two things, he began to miss the feeling of being a licking dog. I guess that the life experience of the protagonist was forced to be brought out, and it was probably not the Zhu family of Jinyiwei, but the blood of other Zhu families. But regardless of whether this is done or not, the plot is already torturous enough now. I have ordered them all so far, but I really don't want to read the latest two chapters At this current progress, it will be good to write 600 chapters until Zhu Hao reaches adulthood.

It's really a bit witty. Let's just write about the Jiajing Emperor period. We have to make up something like the Zhu family. The internal conflicts in the family are tense. If Empress Dowager Zhang really wants to deal with Prince Xing and prevent the people from Prince Xing's palace from inheriting the throne, there are many ways. Why does it need a family like yours to do it? It's nonsense. Then the novel is very watery and dragging, and the character of the main character's mother is also quite outrageous.

After writing four hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a child, and the pace is so slow. Is it likely that it will take a thousand chapters for the prince to ascend the throne? The amount of watering is outrageous, and the characters' relationships are so cunning and dark that it's extremely dark! Not recommended!

The author is simply poisonous. The character of the protagonist is too bad. He keeps setting traps and poisoning children for profit. What the hell, no wonder you are confused.

Bastard Cao De What is the author's purpose in writing this book? Mr. Zhu is done torturing her and just wants to skip it The more she writes, the more disgusting she becomes.

The writing of Tang Yan is not good. It makes people feel awkward while reading. It seems that the IQ is not enough and the EQ is too poor. The protagonist is always boring. I hope it will not be written like this in the future. This is the only regret of this article at the moment.

I support the author 🤓, but the pace is too slow, come on😊

Now that we have written popular songs, we can include majestic songs with ancient historical backgrounds such as Serve the Country with Faith, Farewell My Concubine, Borrow from Heaven for Another Five Hundred Years, Who Will Remember Who in Thousands of Years? Of course, you can also write martial arts songs such as "A Laugh in the Sea", "Swords Like a Dream", and love songs in small love tunes, which can be mixed in.

The writing is good and worth looking forward to.

I have read Chapter 50, but I haven't read the rest yet. I personally feel that the protagonist is portrayed using too much skill, rather than Tao. Of course, it may be different later, but if the protagonist's acting style has always been based on conspiracy and exploitation, then the protagonist's pattern will be small. He can only become Li Linfu and others, but cannot become a prime minister like Fang Xuanling.

Finished it, overall it's okay. But there are two problems. One is that the progress is too slow, there is no main line, and it is a bit delayed. The other is that the characters are very obvious in facial makeup and intelligence. It is suggested that the author should take a closer look at the main line and speed up the pace. If you continue like this, you will really not be able to control the content and will have to rely on your wits to maintain it.

I had a lot of fun reading the novel. It's hard to resist such an extremely torturous plot in the early stage. The writing is good, but the plot is not that good. The protagonist is only 7 years old. How long will it take to fight?

Let me remind you, what you want to see is the disgusting protagonist who is still alive and kicking hundreds of chapters later, the old lady Zhu family. The protagonist can drug others at the age of 7. Why can't he drug the people of this gang? Secondly, in the middle period, the protagonist is rich and powerful. Is it difficult for you to find a few desperadoes? Is it difficult to drug poison? Is it difficult to find a few robbers? This whole family is just a poor family. Is it difficult to kill this family? This book is extremely poisonous, so remember to avoid lightning. It is extremely disgusting and very watery.

When I saw the introduction, I wanted to say, what is the use of being a close friend, teacher, classmate, and benefactor? Even if you are his father, you will not show mercy even if you kill him.

I don't dare to sell private salt, but I dare to sell snowflake salt? Aren't you afraid of trouble from the court if you reach the tribute level?

After reading more than forty chapters, I was disgusted by the family line. It's not that the author's writing is not good, it's the description that makes it even more disgusting. Then I read the comments and the chapter names, and realized that the latest chapter didn't address the family line? May I ask the author, what is the point of writing this line, to create a conflict plot? In fact, the author writes very well, and his writing style is worthy of a master. But I feel that these plots are suitable for family ethics dramas, and there is a market for them to be made into TV series for aunties to watch. But after all, it is not suitable for online writing. After all, people are not reading books to feel aggrieved. You cannot finish a conflict every day, which will lead to people reading half of it and feeling frustrated for many days. It will take a day or two to resolve this aggrieved plot. This will cause your readers to sometimes feel uncomfortable reading your book, and then abandon the book. As a matter of fact, after all, the author is a master, and I am not teaching you how to write a book. I'm confused about whether to continue reading. After all, I've only seen forty pictures, but I still haven't resolved these matters by chapter two hundred.

Why do the books you write make people so painful to read? I have read dozens of chapters, but after reading the comments, I have not finished more than 200 chapters about a broken family! The protagonist's father was married and established a family before his death. After the separation, the two families have a son, and even if they are ruined, they can't suffer from her. As soon as the real estate and shops are sold, it is over. If you go to do business elsewhere, Ming Dynasty merchants can also take scientific examinations. It's just a Thousand Households that doesn't live up to its name, how can you stop it? More than two hundred chapters have passed and it's still not resolved. How do you want to write it in the future? Author, why did you deliberately write it so disgustingly? Write something disgusting and show it to others? You use the so-called "family name" to slander the protagonist arbitrarily. The readers are all taking the role of the protagonist. The more you read, the more frustrated you become.

I can trick the prince out of the palace and push him into a pool and then save people without being exposed. I can trick the prince into a fire and then save people without being exposed. I can't assassinate an old woman without an escort. It's a bit filial. You said that Zhu Niang was a foolish and filial person in ancient times. You, a time traveler, dared to push the prince into the pool, but you didn't attack a grandmother who was an enemy of you and your parents? Either you make the protagonist a coward, or you make the protagonist ruthless. What's going on if it's written that you hit your friends hard and shrink back to your enemies? (Although the Crown Prince is a child, it is easier to expose, okay? How can a child keep a secret?)

After reading Chapter 10, I no longer want to read it. An old lady, in order to take back a shop, tried her best to frame her daughter-in-law. She doesn't treat her daughter-in-law and her grandson as human beings. There is something wrong with her

Jiajing is by no means a kind person, he is also a white-eyed wolf. So this book is a trap in terms of material selection. Why not write about Hongzhi? In the early stage, he fights the eunuchs and nannies, in the middle stage, he assists the benevolent ruler in regulating the civil servants and nobles, and in the later stage, he trains the willful naughty children. A 3 million book is worth it.

The emperor Jiajing was mean and ungrateful,,,

Anyone who knows a little bit about the history of the Ming Dynasty knows the hereditary household registration system established by Zhu Yuanzhang. Jinyiwei is a type of military household. They can only engage in farming and military affairs and are not allowed to participate in the imperial examination.

I watched dozens of them, and the plot was too slow, and quite disgusting... The old woman and her second son were just as cold-blooded, but the protagonist didn't know whether he was too kind or too stupid... She didn't believe anything the protagonist said, and she thought the protagonist judged you with the heart of a villain. The child's belly... If the protagonist and his second uncle hadn't made it clear what he said, he might not be that bad... I don't know that waiting for the protagonist to get the title will have to wait until the year of the monkey. The rhythm is really written bit by bit, day by day... I don't know how many thousands of words will pass when the protagonist reaches adulthood...

I, Jiajing, stand taller and steadier than you.

This is the first time I see the protagonist who is the benefactor of White Eyed Wolf. The entire Ming Dynasty Zhu Houcong's family was famous for being ungrateful and seeking revenge. Starting from Zhu Houcong, he and his descendants told the world that being loyal to their family was courting death.

If I continue writing like this, I have no choice but to give up. I can't stand it anymore. The key point is that after so many chapters, I am still a child. I have just started to take the imperial examination. Brother, can you speed up the progress? Or should I prepare to learn One Piece? Let's update it in 10-20 years.

It's too stupid to describe her mother. Of course, she may not be smart and short-sighted, but it has been proven so many times that her children's behavior is better than her own, but she still keeps questioning this and that, which is outrageous.

Why do you want to make the protagonist's mother so stupid and useless? Don't talk about ancient times' foolish filial piety. From ancient times to the present, who has not taken advantage of parents' wool to support their children? No matter how filial you are to your mother-in-law, can you compare with your own son? When you are young, you obey your father, when you get married, you obey your husband, and when you are old, you obey your son. Why did women in ancient times become stiff after having a son? Because The son is the one to rely on for the rest of his life. If he dares to rob his son's property, let alone a mother-in-law, his own father would dare to turn against him.