The Devious Gunner of the Steam Age

I feel unhappy and aggrieved, and I don't even regard the protagonist as a piece of cake Can I kill the money-greedy woman and take advantage of the protagonist who doesn't understand anything? This kind of person should be tortured before killing him.

The family is very rich in transportation, but the protagonist has to make money on his own😓😓😓

I have made a world map, CAD draft, but I don't know how to make a textured map. Can any book friends help me? Thanks!

I suddenly looked at the title of the book, The Explosive Gunner in the Age of Steam

It's a bit poisonous at the beginning. You're hiding in a corner with two people across from you. If you don't attack one of them first, you'll be discovered with a sneer? How is this written?

The writing is fair, but there are no golden tricks. The protagonist seems to have average talent, and he always feels that he is not very smart in front of women.

The background and style of the entire book, including the organization of the clockkeeper, and the characters are all similar to a certain book Since you want to copy other people's settings, don't make a ladder. This word is not as good as the original word nondescript both serious and serious.

This book seems like the author has put a lot of effort into organizing the system, imitating a certain book and having his own characteristics. I like similar world backgrounds, the steampunk era, and books about European voyages and colonial wars. There are very few good ones. I hope the author will stick to it.

The author How about killing off the protagonist's family and making the protagonist take a bloody revenge How about becoming an orphan completely? It's better than writing the protagonist as a rich orphan, right? I see that your introduction is a novel about aristocratic development The protagonist has a family at the beginning I thought the protagonist could use the family's money to develop his power In the end, the protagonist used the family's money to buy various equipment and hire companions And then when dealing with the enemy, he plunged into the enemy's lair Then he told our readers that even the supporting characters knew how to cooperate with the family forces. Use steam weapons for protection. Then a group of thugs with various weapons such as steam chariots and steam rifles forced the protagonist and his hired female companion into danger. What happened next and how to deal with it. It's really uninteresting. Or let the protagonist become an orphan and live in ruins. Or, how about not letting the protagonist deal with the enemy like an orphan?

What's going on? I feel like the villain or other characters are mentally retarded. But if the villain is mentally retarded, why should he be alive? If so many people are dealing with him and he can still survive, then he shouldn't be mentally retarded.

It's okay to introduce poison, the same cover

Not so good, the three golden chapters were not enough to attract me. Goodbye…next book

The setting is very good, but the content seems to be the same as the underworld cultivating immortals, except that the sect is replaced by the government, and every good person in the world.

An extraordinary organization, so bad? They're all beaten to a pulp, and I haven't seen any support yet.

The story is not rigorous. . . No more complaining

All orders are given, come on, author

Is the introduction really not poisonous? ! 🧐

Finally back on track, hurry up and improve your strength. You can be more detailed about improving the protagonist's strength and ability. You can also have more diversity in abilities and make it more detailed and interesting. Also, update soon! ! ! !

The villain seems to be a fool, and he and the protagonist are fighting against each other in the arsenal. They have to design against humanity!

Is this about a time-traveler? When I first time-traveled, I didn't want to do this. I also didn't want to do this. Also, why did I give away something I bought with pig's feet and still owe money? It's inexplicable.

How should I put it? The writing is so mysterious that many chapters are difficult to understand and leave too much suspense. Anyway, it's brain-burning!

Adjust it well. Adjust the rhythm. The writing is actually good, but the rhythm arrangement and baggage are a bit unreasonable!

Recommend books from the building "I hope you also have the same attitude towards cultivating immortals" Author: Ling Yezhizhi "Douluo Zhiwanxiang Douluo" was also written by him, it is quite good.

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