I Ate the Elixir of Immortality

It's so annoying. It's high school again. The world structure is different. It's still the previous education model. Is it okay to have some brains? The previous filial piety and integrity, and the imperial examination have disappeared with the progress of the times. Will the modern education model last for thousands of years?

The author just wants to suppress the protagonist and give him an invincible golden finger! Compare the results to other protagonists of the same level of Goldfinger! The speed of rise is simply too weak! For example, if someone uses your cheating finger! It only takes a week to overwhelm the entire universe! Anyone who covets you will be directly pushed and defeated! This kind of rising speed is logically correct! Don't tell me that your state of mind doesn't match your strength or anything like that. Please ask others for the evolution of life, and it's not just about increasing your strength! Since life evolves, your mentality will become different as you evolve! Naturally, you can control it as you wish! But you, the protagonist, are still hanging around among ordinary people! It's just that the author wants to suppress the protagonist and goes crazy! Didn't you say that as the protagonist's realm increases, the speed of increasing his longevity will increase? It's still increasing tenfold! Then it would be great if the protagonist directly consumes his life span to continuously improve his realm! Is there any secret technique or something missing? Wouldn't it be easier to do this when your realm has improved? Take it over and it will improve to perfection immediately! In this way, the protagonist only needs to calculate the lifespan difference, such as how much lifespan it takes to advance from this realm to the next! As long as the longevity is enough, it will be directly upgraded! Then can't the protagonist become stronger at the speed of light? !

Your name and profile make a big tree fat like a fish! ! !

Do you think that if you open a new vest, others won't know about it? Innocent! ! ! I hope I won't be a eunuch this time. Collected!

The front part is okay. I'll give you a longevity plug-in. Overall, it's a good product. But since Shouyuan has given the innate spirit an independent lifespan, even external objects have to have independent lifespans, such as the secret treasures, pets, etc. That the protagonist has trained himself, and they have begun to poison and stretch their hips. Shouyuan is no longer Shouyuan, but has become a universal energy like the "power of faith" of Tiger Balm. If the hook is too big, Shouyuan is just like the name, only the "Shouyuan" skin is left, and everything else has changed. This wave of poison is still acceptable. After all, the author's writing is good. Keep reading. However, later on, we will create a "second world", which is just an online game. In one fell swoop, the blood-soaked and tearful story has been reduced to a "expressionless, unwavering" vernacular text. Later on, we will use Shouyuan to set up the second world, which is completely to serve the protagonist's cheating. I think the cheating is not big enough, so I will continue to play it and make it a brainless and invincible cool story. Only then will everyone like it and collect and subscribe for monthly tickets. The layout is small, the writing is invincible, and the invincibility is hooked. After all, only a few people like this model, a niche. You have inadvertently eliminated most readers. It's enough to hang one, neither too big nor too small. The rest depends on the protagonist himself. He spends his growth period around hanging. The protagonist who becomes successful in the later period will be invincible even if he doesn't have to hang. Having the hang is the icing on the cake. It's invisible and invincible in the early stage, so there's really nothing to see. Anyone with a "brain" can become the protagonist. The protagonist is no longer the protagonist, but the plug-in is the protagonist. It gives people an impact of "If I want to have this plug-in, what protagonist do I need? I am the protagonist." Then it becomes really boring

Personally, I think what I wrote before is still okay, but when it turns into a virtual online game, I think it's exaggerated. It has become a virtual online game, and the style has changed too much. You must know that most people who can see the back prefer the style of the front. The style of your fantasy virtual online game has changed too much. Readers who stayed from the front may not like it. The second bad thing, in my opinion, is that this virtual online game only wants to get benefits, but does not want to bear the disadvantages. The benefits of the virtual world are so great, and one death only deducts a small amount of life. And writing is like playing a game! Fantasy online games, the style has changed so much! Just want to get benefits, but don't want to take responsibility! Writing is like playing a game! I said I couldn't accept it.

Even though I am immortal, my lifespan is still going up and down, increasing or decreasing. What does that mean?

Adding an online game would be too discouraging!

The protagonist is afraid of death. Why should you practice if you are afraid of death?🙂

The beginning was not bad, it was a cool story about upgrading and becoming stronger, but then it got mixed into the online game... There were too many elements... The plot created a sense of separation. I just accepted the investment and got into the story of becoming stronger with krypton life, and then jumped back and forth between online games and becoming stronger with krypton gold. Not everyone can be like Yoshihiro Togashi and forcefully join the plot of Greed Island without collapse. Online game elements were added too early.