The Warden of the Marvel Universe

It doesn't make sense. The Abominations belong to the military; even if they were defeated, they wouldn't be imprisoned in the protagonist's prison. It feels like the prison was just a plot device, so everyone was locked up there.

Um, this was recommended by Mi Doubi, let me take a look.

I just came from some funny person, but this is too childish! 🥵

The first chapter is inconsistent; it starts with a squad leader, then suddenly becomes an instructor. Didn't you check before issuing it? Marvel fanfiction always talks about how dangerous things are, how ordinary people can't survive, so how do other characters survive? If you're afraid of dying, why would anyone kill you if you moved to the countryside?

This idiom is completely illogical and harmful.

For a similar genre, I recommend the One Piece series, starting from Impel Down, I think it's called something like that 🙂🙂

It's a bit mind-numbing (maybe because I've watched too many suspenseful Cthulhu-themed novels, and I feel there are quite a few logical errors).

It's borrowed from One Piece: Impel Down, but your writing feels a bit disorganized.

The dialogue in this article! Does the author live in society? Is there no interaction?

Wow, the author's name is something else! Are there still living rabbits in Chengdu? Don't they make rabbit heads anymore?