The World Is in Chaos, Starting from Wulin Gaiden

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The three novels written by this author are all quite satisfactory. There is nothing outstanding about the protagonist. The protagonist is always talented. The others are as talented as the protagonist. The protagonist has good temperament. The others have temperament as good as the protagonist. The protagonist is strong in martial arts. The others are better than the protagonist. It is a strength to be able to write the protagonist in the three books to be as good as the supporting characters. To be honest, I have wanted to complain about this author for a long time. Thinking that it is not easy for him to write a book, I will not subscribe or at least leave a negative review. But recently, I have not been able to read many Zhutianliu, so I picked it up again. Finally, I want to complain again: Author, please don't write any TV series such as The Legend of the Jade Emperor in the future. The mythical characters in it are too interesting. I have read your last novel, because you made the protagonist as useless as the supporting role. It's such a brilliant place, so I didn't subscribe, collect or read it. After finishing the book, I read the ending chapters again. The performance of the Xianxia characters was so good that I couldn't help but read the first chapters of Tanhualang's book again. In the end, the protagonist was written like the supporting role, which was quite satisfactory. I was very disappointed at the time. I read the ending chapters again, and it was still the same as in the Legend of the Jade Emperor. I sincerely hope that the author can write this book well and make the protagonist more prominent, or the author can refer to how other people write Zhutianliu.

Whether you can beat the Sunflower Acupuncture Hand in overwhelming numbers depends on whether Guo Furong or Guo Juxia uses it. Whether you can clamp Xiao Li's flying knife with one finger of Lingxi depends on whether Li Xunhuan uses it or Li Huai

This is the first time I have seen a protagonist practice light kung fu so that he can step on the snow without leaving a trace and making a sound for the sake of Hua Man Lou.

In fact, I personally think that Wulin Gaiden can be linked with Magic Phone, so that the time and space travel group can be completed, and the pattern can be opened up.

In fact, the author's writing is quite good in all aspects, but there is one thing: it is obviously some very powerful martial arts skills, and the protagonist's performance is very impressive when using them, but it just doesn't have the artistic conception of the unique skills. It feels like ordinary skills have been left out.

When I watch Gu Long's drama now, what impresses me most is: the inflation is so severe that millions of taels of silver are easily lost. They simply don't regard silver as money!

Indeed, I have wanted to complain for a long time. Brother, hybrid species are not necessarily sterile. You two books always say that they are sterile. In the last book, it is normal that lions and camels cannot mate. The problem is that ligers and ligers cannot mate. The problem is that people can still have children with tigers and lions. Ligers and lions give birth to ligers. In other words, the lion and camel king in this book can just find a female lion 😅

Is there a possibility that Afa is the Supreme Treasure - Sun Wukong, and Li Xunhuan is the Erlang God - Yang Jian.

Taking people through time travel is the biggest failure

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The Tang Dynasty is really boring to write, just for the chicken thing!

The protagonist is written like a spectator, but the author spends a lot of effort to describe the emotions of people around him, like being constipated but unable to get rid of it.

It feels like the heroine of this author's novel, Chun Chun, is the protagonist's collector. I prefer one or several female protagonists who can follow the protagonist all the time, rather than having several female protagonists in one world and then being thrown into the same world.

The author's novel is interesting when the protagonist's force value is not high, but becomes boring when the hero's force value reaches a certain level.

The biggest overlap between the three books is that neither martial arts nor mythology has moved away from the concept of people-centeredness. The key is that this concept is summarized by humans in a world without demons. Do other intelligent races in the mythical world recognize that humans are the most valuable? Heaven became the biological mother of the human race, and other intelligent beings accompanied the prince to study. Many so-called myths and fairy tales collapsed at this point.

I've read a few chapters and found the rest to be okay, but the author is not very good at describing the martial arts scenes. There is no sense of devastation from fists to meat swords, and the visuals are not strong. I suggest you study the battle descriptions of Martial Arts World Adventure. Generally speaking, the level is above the standard. I have found an author who writes good martial arts scenes.

How did it start out as a martial arts story and end up feeling like a cultivator later on? I feel like I'm off track.

Firstly, accepting a disciple does not bring any benefit to the protagonist. Some female characters are not as good as accepting a harem. Secondly, the protagonist is the best in every world. As a result, he has to take the initiative to accept a disciple. And they may not appreciate it. He is just hot-faced but cold-hearted. Finally, the most important thing is that the plot of the master-student relationship is really awkward It can be seen that the author wants to write it more interestingly. , But the premise of writing like this is to write about the relationship between master and apprentice. It gives me the feeling that strangers who are not familiar with each other make random jokes like acquaintances who have been together for a long time and have experienced a lot together, but in fact they have no emotional basis. This sense of separation will make these plots very awkward, including Lu Xiaofeng's plot. It is also very awkward because of this.

It's an old problem. In the middle and late stages, it's just fighting and fighting. The plot is dry and it's all about fighting. Everyone has to go through several tricks.

I remember that there is a saying in the biography of Yue Quan that when the Emperor of the Song Dynasty burned his watch to worship heaven, he mistakenly wrote the Jade Emperor's jade as "king". The Jade Emperor was not happy, so he sent people down to earth to destroy the country of the Song Dynasty. This is Jinwushu.

The writing of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty is not very good. I feel like I have no feeling at all. The more I read, the more tired I become.

The first world was okay, but the plot arrangement of the second world was almost the same. It felt watery and boring!

I watched Zong Wu Shen Chao very well, but for some reason I wasn't interested in the previous two books 🙂

The next book won't be about police officers. . .

Well, the writing is pretty good, but there are a few comments.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommendation, multiple female protagonists, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, now connected to Inuyasha world

Beautiful, love watching. I want to see the author write about the little boss

American Police: Starting from Killing Through Deadly Curves Everyone is welcome to read, comment, and make suggestions and criticisms.

I feel that these three chapters are better written: Wulin Gaiden, Qin Shi Mingyue, and Tang Dynasty Double Dragon. After finishing the Wind and Cloud chapter, I skipped reading later because after the Wind and Cloud chapter, I just became a cultivator and had nothing to do with martial arts. Overall, it feels good