I Can Pick up Proficiency

The author's writing is good but the pace is too fast. I think this book should be called (The Life of a Social Animal after the Plug-in) Dog Head. It can be seen that the author has just written a book, and basically uses the outline to write. Normal novels will not establish a relationship with a female character so early, nor will I have children so early, and the "plug-ins" written by the author are said to be very useful, but their presence is very low, that is, they only come into play in the later stages. Overall, this is a well-written book (people at the bottom have plug-ins and change themselves through learning and hard work).

Life is not easy. Reading a novel can relieve the stress, but you remind me all the time that you are finished 🙂

The pace is too fast. Make a bet, this book requires eunuchs

The subject matter is good, and there are few novels similar to reality. Write slowly, without process and precipitation, and don't become strong all at once, otherwise you won't be able to write in the middle and later stages. Come on, I hope your book will get better and better.

I'm not optimistic about this marriage partner. I don't know how long it will last.

It feels like this is just a narrative manuscript. The plot content is dry and not rich, the time span is too long, and it is a bit nonsensical, but it has to be pulled together. . .

It's still good, but the other skill points you recycle cannot be added casually. There should be skill points dropped everywhere on the street. It can't be said that they must go to a specific office. You can write about programming, music, and performance. If you have money, you should consider some personal hobbies. You can't just go to work and write programs all the time.

What's your theme? Cool? Make money? Daily? In love? The more I read, the more confused I became. Why did I get married just because I wrote it?

This rhythm is over before it's even released.

Why am I here looking at a person's chronicle of working, getting married, and having children?

The pace is too fast, mainly because the author has no idea what he wants to write and just keeps a bunch of running accounts. When it comes to the top, it's all about other things. From urban life to urban superpowers and then to spiritual energy recovery, the span is too big. If you can't write anything, it will be a waste.

It is recommended that the author slow down the pace, bring out the special features of the protagonist, strengthen the protagonist, and provide richer emotional descriptions.

The plot is pretty good, but there is no rhythm. The supporting characters are completely different. There are many places that are not written in depth.

Cut it off and reopen it. The writing is quite good.

It feels like the author has sent out the outline. 🙂If Mingyu had written this, it would have cost ten thousand chapters.

I just saw the official recommendation and saw that it hasn't been updated for a day.

The author is a newcomer. For this first book, let me imitate others first. Goldfinger is good, but unfortunately the plot is a bit confusing, there are no conflicts, and the characters cannot stand up.

This novel feels like just reading the outline, but it's really fun, hehe. There are no levels in the evolution of this book. You can learn from the League of Legends anime, and whether the system has been fully utilized. I can't write novels and will beep. Generally speaking, it is about refinement. It should be able to complete a million words, and it can be a few million words through the world. I don't have any good suggestions. Great talents, please work hard.