A Trader Across the Heavens, Starting with Bright Sword

After reading about a hundred chapters, let's chat briefly. First of all, I would like to mention the overall evaluation. Newcomers can read it, those who like cool writing can try it, and old bookworms can make their own decision after trying it. It's a bit poisonous, but not too dense. You can check it out if it's resistant to poison. This book is a relatively common anti-war arms dealer type novel recently. This subject matter is relatively niche, but because it is niche, there are not many choices for book friends who like this style, and there is basically a guaranteed number of readers. Reading this book, you can clearly feel that the author is not sophisticated enough and is a bit blindly following the trend. I am not maliciously targeting the author. I will briefly describe the problems that I can find as a reader, and let's discuss it. First of all, let's think about why books about being an arms dealer during the Anti-Japanese War have been so popular recently, especially in the world of bright swords. In the past few years, there have been popular novels about killing enemies and exploding equipment and novels about resisting the war and engaging in military industry. One problem in both novels is that it is difficult to control the intensity of the golden finger and the reaction of the social environment at that time, which makes it easy to cause drama. The core idea of ​​being an arms dealer in the world of Bright Sword is basically the same as the above two types of novels. They are both about killing enemies and completing tasks to get rewards that span the ages. Why is it so popular? After reading several different novels and comparing them, you will find that some authors are very smart. They marginalize and blur the original protagonist/Goldfinger, and mainly describe the plot of Bright Sword. After all, Bright Sword is also an excellent work, and the characters in it can also support the heavy responsibility of the protagonist. Therefore, the one with Goldfinger Instead, the protagonist became the golden finger of Li Yunlong and our army. The focus of creation was mainly on the newly attractive character Li Yunlong. The protagonist with the golden finger was written as a tool man to reduce the number of scenes, dilute the influence of the protagonist, and focus the readers' attention on the plot of the sword, reducing the sense of drama. This is very smart and important, and it can make up for the lack of writing skills. Comparing it with this book, you will find that this book describes too many plots about the protagonist, including gun battles, gangsters, emotional dramas, and the responsibility of fighting the Japanese. The protagonist is too much of a show-stealer. When Yang Cun fights Yamamoto's special agent team, two people can beat a group of people. Li Yunlong is of no use. The sword is purely a gimmick. It is all about the protagonist showing off his power. What is the difference between killing enemies and exploding equipment before? Once aesthetic fatigue exists, it will be difficult to continue watching? Moreover, while writing about the world of Bright Sword and the main world at the same time, the plot is too scattered and the readers' attention cannot be unified in one place, which will make people feel that there is a hammer here and there, and there is no order. It is not as attractive as those books that focus on the world of bright swords and downplay the existence of the protagonist. Second, there are some problems with character creation. Whether it is the female weapons expert named Su or the French-study doctor named Zhang, there are certain problems. For example, you introduced them as very professional in the background, but their questions were too casual, and their professionalism was not revealed at all. It felt like they were just Like a child having a tantrum, I just don't like you. Such a character is very offensive, and the author gives too many villains to our army to play, which is also a taboo. It should be that there are relatively few villains on our side, and most of the mentally retarded villains can be played by other forces, such as the Japanese or Yan Laoxi. Writing our teammates to be so mentally retarded will offend people, and writing the villain to be so unprofessional will also cause drama. And the most important point is that they are all our soldiers, soldiers of the Eighth Route Army. Author, do you dare to be so photorealistic and not afraid that you will be slapped with a label that vilifies our army's anti-Japanese image? You are still a student of Bethune. Others try not to rely on real people when writing. If something happens, they just call it a fictional character. You are really not afraid. Third, he is not careful enough. Let's take Li Yunlong as an example. He used the method of using a broadsword to write the same thing twice in a row for more than ten chapters. It is too confusing. Secondly, when Chu Yunfei comes, you can show off the assault rifle and the three-three system. Li Yunlong has a good face, but he is not a fool. How can a qualified military officer hide his strength without knowing it? Do you still not know the strategic and tactical significance of certain things? The intelligence system of Yan Laoxi and the Guo Party is just a sieve, one-way and transparent to Japan. I won't go into details about other things like the indiscriminate priority of characters. I hope the author will grow up soon, so I ran away.

This book is a little bit toxic, I guess it will slip away in the middle. The author is a military novice, and there are so many amusing details, such as calling for rocket launchers to cover within the range of a submachine gun. Instead of suppressing firepower, the heavy aircraft fired at the 38-meter cover. He had no idea about direct fire, deflection, range, and shooting range. He only made a fuss. It's almost impossible to watch in the city. People with hundreds of millions of dollars are bleeding on the streets. It seems that hundreds of millions are a power coin. The working elites with millions of dollars of salary kneel down and pray when they go out to eat in Diaoyutai. The boss with an annual salary of one million is absolutely retarded. Such as advertising auctions of first- and second-level cultural relics, business cards and arms smugglers, don't worry, don't ask, don't collect taxes, just ask. I haven't accumulated enough information, and I haven't looked up enough information. Please book first and listen to the results.

Through this book, we can identify that the author is a pseudo-military fan. The arrangement and use of military equipment is very confusing, and the logical thinking related to firearms and equipment is too novice 😅 I suggest that the author go to the military museum to supplement some common sense when he has time! 😅 Although AK is very good, the reality in the book is that our army needs a large number of Type 56 semi-automatic rifles, which is more suitable. You can also use the 56-and-a-half prototype Soviet SKS semi-automatic rifle, which is available anywhere and is super cheap 🤭

AK and other advanced weapons during the Republic of China era, are you sure the People's Liberation Army can afford them? If it is disarmed, wouldn't it be more difficult for Japan to use it as an elite force? If you really want to help, you might as well build some bullet production lines, explosives production lines, medical and pharmaceutical production lines, and some high-yielding crop seeds. Engage in some advanced thinking (not just politics, philosophy is thought) and engage in international affairs.

I haven't read it yet, so I subscribed to a chapter specifically to post I only read the introduction, which is a well-used introduction. I thought that the entire independent group would be invincible with just one AK tutu tug, and they could defeat the little devils. So I have a question here: The independent group has a lot of AKs, how to deal with the bullets? I count 1,000 combatants in the Independent Regiment. As a base number, I count 4 magazines and 120 rounds of bullets. Plus reserves, the Independent Regiment must prepare at least 200,000 bullets for a single battle. Do you know what the concept of 200,000 bullets in the Eighth Route Army is? In 1940, the entire Eighth Route Army's ammunition reserve was not enough for 2 million rounds. You and your regiment destroyed one-tenth of the entire army's ammunition in one battle? At that time, the arsenal in the Eighth Route Army base area could count on one hand the annual bullet production capacity of 200,000 rounds; the annual bullet production capacity of the entire army, including reloading ammunition, was estimated to be less than 2 million rounds The production capacity of the arsenal in the Eighth Route Army base area had to be expanded five times to be able to support a full AK regiment. Even if you have an arsenal, where will the raw materials for making bullets come from? The Eighth Route Army has almost no capacity to produce new bullets, and most of them are reloaded from old cartridge cases precisely because of the lack of raw materials. Can you still afford it? Do you know that what the Eighth Route Army lacks most is "money"? Is it possible to use the border ticket to buy things from the protagonist? Selling only ak without selling arsenal, ak is just scrap metal. Sell the arsenal, but the Eighth Route Army has no money to buy it at all Even if you give away the production line for free, the Eighth Route Army has no raw materials to make bullets. So either continue to sell or send raw materials, or give Balu the equipment and technology to mine raw materials. Then there is still the problem, the Eighth Route Army has no money. If you don't sell it for money, but give it away, then what did you dump? This is to create a complete set of basic industrial industries for the Eighth Route Army from scratch. If it can do this, then the book can be regarded as a good source of food. If you just give ak and you can burst, it will still be a mindless and enjoyable novel after all. It would be better than another novel with the theme of bright swords. Others do not sell weapons and equipment to the independent regiment, but issue missions to the independent regiment, requiring how many Japanese soldiers to kill and what military rank.

The author is a puppet military fan. What kind of stinger do you use for propeller planes? See how much modern penicillin costs (there is a professional unit). How much did penicillin cost during the Anti-Japanese War? Bring three sacred books with you!

Bazooka. . . , That kind of rocket launcher? Germany's Iron Fist? American bazooka? Or the Soviet RPG-7? These things are not called rocket launchers, okay? They are all recoilless rifles.

It's a bit poisonous. Doesn't the author know that the Anti-Japanese Aid Communist Party and the Harem Stallion novels are incompatible?

TMD recommend a 20,000-word book and read it with a hammer

Let's change the name of this book, and call it The Sword of Time and the Dog Licking for Free. It's understandable that selling weapons is cheap, but I don't understand giving them away for free. Is there another arms dealer so uneducated? Just describe the protagonist as a brainless fool.