The Overwhelming Force That Covers the Sky and Suppresses the Eternity

In fact, people who are found to be from foreign lands will usually keep an eye on them. It would be better if they could extract information and coordinates. However, the protagonist came up directly and asked if this was China... In Zhetian, Ye Fan rarely said or even said anything about his hometown...

This is my first time writing a book, and I can't control the rhythm well. Please pay attention to fellow Taoists. This book has reached the 18th chapter. The preliminary foreshadowing has been completely completed. The protagonist has been humble for too long. I feel a little suffocated when I write it. Now I am finally on the road to defeating the gods and Buddhas, and I will rise immediately 😡😡😡

The advantage of this book is that most of the characters and plots are original, but the disadvantage is that it doesn't feel like covering the sky. The flavor here does not refer to the plot or characters we are familiar with. But style.

{"NickName":"It takes a lot of thought to choose a nickname","UserId":229577619} Oh, let me get straight to the point, thank you fellow Taoist for your advice. After writing for such a long time, I have also reflected on where my writing is not good enough and where I have shortcomings. Let me summarize it through your comments: First of all, the author is a pure newcomer, and writing novels is purely out of interest. But when I started writing, I realized that it was too complicated, and sometimes even a complete novel The plot is unclear. I was originally full of confidence in creating a parallel world with a grand scene like Zhatian, but unfortunately it is difficult to control. However, I have made some progress. I no longer think about where to write, and now I start to write an outline. Otherwise, I find that I can't even remember the pitfalls within ten chapters. Secondly, when I was creating the character, I didn't have a clear idea in my mind at all, only a general outline, and I wrote whatever I wanted to write. Many times, readers felt that the difference from Zhetian Taste was the creation of the protagonist. My portrayal was not clear, and it was far less domineering than the original Ye Fan. I had a good idea in my mind, but I couldn't write it out. Then, in terms of plot, it does not show the concept of combining meticulousness and grandeur at all. Some parts of the book written by Chen Dong seem to be on the water, but the words written in this way make people feel more comfortable and smooth. Every supporting role and minor character that appears is just right, with no sense of dissonance at all, and is very smart. As far as I'm concerned, it's basically all nonsense and the characterization is extremely stiff. Then, there is the writing style. I myself feel that my writing is too polished and incompetent. The most important setting for writing a novel is to make it cool. I don't know it at all. I am exploring now. Now I forcefully add some slap-in-the-face plots. I feel that I have some experience, but it may be embarrassing to watch. Finally, the overall writing of this book is not very coherent. The main problem is that I finish it every day. When I continue to write the next day, I have to think about where I wrote half a day ago. There is no overall idea at all. I write in a hurry, and it feels like I am forcing myself to write. Alas, writing a book is not as easy as imagined. I really don't know what the talents of those big guys who become gods with one book are. Anyway, I am groping on the way forward. Please comment and correct me, just leave a message below, I will accept the teachings with an open mind.

Li Daozhen (also known as Emperor Xuan, named because he was born in Taoism, also called Yidao Tongzhen, a true Taoist cultivator) Gender: Male Age: 800,000 years old Cultivation level: Peak of the ninth level of the Red Dust Immortal, belonging to the realm of the Half-Step Immortal King (that is, only half a step away from the Immortal King!). Origin: A lineage of Chunyang, an ancient star in China, who came to Beidou in the post-mythological era and is currently living in a strange world. (He is an earth traveler, and he was also in the Huashan Chunyang Taoist lineage in his previous life) (In addition, he obtained a treasure called the Gate of the Heavens, a treasure that can travel through the heavens, and has the same function as Gu Shaoshang's Heavenly Projection Mirror) Immortal Way Heart Method: Chunyang Emperor Sutra Reincarnation Scroll, Dao Palace Scroll, Four Pole Scroll, Dragon Transformation Scroll, Xiantai Scroll, and Red Dust Immortal Scroll. Divine channel methods: Tiangang 36 methods, Earth Evil 72 methods, Five Elements Thunder method, Five Elements Escape method, Great Five Elements Magnet Divine Light, Great Five Elements Extinction Divine Light, Five Emperors Divine Fist, Four Elephants Seal Technique, Pure Yang Divine Light, Pure Yang Seal Technique, Pure Yang Forbidden Breaking Technique, Great Shift of Two Realms, and Nine Secrets of Covering the Sky.

Where is the timeline where the protagonist is? Was Ye Fan at the same time?

Damn it, they pull a coffin in Kowloon, you come to a memorial altar, I still don't understand it,

Have you had it cut? The writing is quite good 😥

Mortal body. Practicing with an ordinary mortal body (not a mortal body like Number 10 and others) without any constitution?

What is the black technique? Is it the Emperor's Sutra? Or is it a ruthless person's early creation? Or is it the emperor's sutra of a certain demon emperor in the Eternal Demon Cave?