Obito in the Marvel Universe

I've read a few chapters, Marvel plus DC? Are you itching for a beating?

What you wrote is... A mess. Let's not even talk about the incompatibility between the two worlds. Just take the Greek gods and Norse mythology as an example; they're at odds. In the Marvel universe, Earth is on the World Tree, for crying out loud! Bringing the Greek gods over here will only create conflict with Rune King Odin. There used to be an old Avengers team on Earth, and Odin was one of them. Do you think he'd give the Olympian pantheon a good deal? Thor calls you brother???? He'd be lucky if he didn't kill you. It's like fighting over territory. Odin used to be Earth's protector. Even Thanos only dared to come after Gu Yi and Odin left. And the subsequent major events were the same. You think you can conquer Odin with just Wonder Woman, Widow's Island, and a distant Amazonian tribe? What was Zeus thinking? Conquering Odin with your genitals? If he doesn't give in, he'll take Hela's name. Even if Odin softens, the other Asgardian gods won't agree. Hela would have to fight her way up the mountain. The Frost Giants would be laughing their heads off. Finally, we can form a united front. There's Jormungandr, the Big Bad Wolf, the four sisters, Heimdall, and Loki. Six of the nine realms (including Hela's underworld) would love for all the Greek gods of that other world to die out. How dare you? Just because she's your foster mother???

If you're going to include soil, then so be it. Why the 'zero burial' nonsense? Speechless.

What's so interesting about Obito? I really don't understand some people's logic. How can someone who plotted to kill his master and mistress, and who orchestrated a world war, be forgiven? And what about Itachi Uchiha and Orochimaru? These people can all be whitewashed. This kind of thought process is truly toxic.

🙂I'm more inclined to think this belongs to a chaotic free-for-all universe. Many characters in the book seem to have been deliberately made less intelligent; even Batman, with his intelligence capabilities, didn't know Tony Stark had created the Mark II. They didn't even know the protagonist was marching on Atlantis, which felt disjointed and uncomfortable for the reader. The plot and character descriptions also deviated somewhat from the original settings. Plus, this all-powerful Akatsuki is just too much! Most books gradually unfold the world-building in the first fifty chapters, explaining the protagonist's goals, their understanding of the world, and the relationships between characters. It's about development and growth. But this book just jumps straight in! The protagonist is invincible—the villains are blind and just watch him develop. When in doubt, the Akatsuki solves everything. During major events, aside from the protagonist's group, other heroes are always either slacking off or being sidelined by the protagonist. The characters around him are just given superficial backgrounds. It feels very shallow. I wish the protagonist could slow down and properly explain the development plans and future strategies of those around him and the Akatsuki's authority in the new world. Why not just focus on farming? You need to let your readers know what kind of person you are. You're not a machine. You have feelings too (although Obito is definitely not someone you can empathize with). Read Yui's Deathstroke a few more times. He's a big shot in the comics world; he's basically involved in all kinds of popular and niche American comics.

It's alright. Is it readable? It's readable, but it's messy and disorganized. Keep it up, author! (ง •̀_•́)ง Don't abandon the project; finish what you started.

Or you could go to South America. Many Hydra agents (German-affiliated) went to South America after World War II. There are plenty of good things there. Or you could try your luck near the Himalayas; you might run into an old acquaintance.

Captain America's serum is a good thing. Or maybe it's part of the Marvel Cinematic Universe strategy after WWII. The later you get there, the better stuff will be gone. For example, Star-Lord got picked up by an alien spaceship. What if you replaced his music player with a Northeast folk opera? Hehe. (A small stage, yo-yo, two people jumping around! 🎶) What if you lend a helping hand when the West persecutes mutants? (If you're a mutant, then I'm not saying anything.) Magneto and his kids are treasures. And Principal Chauvin is also a treasure. If you come late, you'll have to beg for his attention. Bucky's (smack-smack) Roaring Commandos is also worth getting. Or maybe you're unlucky enough to be in Hydra in 1945! Then it'll be like the Kuomintang in 1949. You should run to the US and infiltrate S. H. I. E. L. D. As soon as possible. You can chat with Captain America in the elevator about "Hail Hydra." If you're too late, you'll be executed. Or maybe you can work for the older generation of Soviet leaders in Europe. A special guest at the Red House. Be Black Widow's instructor (note that the leech potion is a treasure) (the benevolent father will likely like you. Be loyal!)

In the DC universe, if you want to thrive on the magical path, you'd better stay far, far away. It's the kind of life-borrowing spell. In layman's terms, unless you're a demon god's representative, using magic comes at a price. Stay far away; using powers outside this world will likely get you captured and studied by some curious bigwig. And then there are the Kree Elders and their ilk. It's best to stay far, far away. In the DC universe, let's not even talk about the distant ones! Just Dazai alone is difficult to deal with. And then there's the Joker—of course, the Joker is Batman's toy. We can stay out of it, but in the main universe, that would be a disaster. One thing after another. As for Brainiac (the Ghost Universe's AI), don't even think about the multiverse. You need to integrate the power of your own universe first. Nobody cares about you, and you're talking about the multiverse? You'd be flattened by the will of the universe long ago. Even if you're not flattened, there's the Moon Goddess, Lucifer, the Anti-Monitor, etc.—I suggest you don't mess with them.

Honestly, the Naruto characters are alright. But something just feels off. It's hard to immerse yourself in them; it's too scattered. It's like a peach orchard in one corner and a fishpond in another. You could have planned ahead in both DC and Marvel. For example, you could have set things up in Gotham during the time Bruce's parents were assassinated. Go to the metropolis and discuss philosophy with Lex Luthor before Superman arrives on Earth. (Lexus isn't necessarily a bad guy; he's a bit of a Earthling racist, but essentially still for Earthlings). Go fight alongside Green Arrow. Go on a dungeon run with Arthur in the ocean. I don't recommend overly harem/womanizing stories. Harem/womanizing isn't suitable for DC; too many women mean more trouble. Because DC and Marvel are too mixed and chaotic, with one supernatural being after another, even the Sorcerer Supreme in Marvel got fed up and quit (▼皿▼#). Don't even think about harem/womanizing. If you don't have the life of a scumbag like Kang, don't be reckless.