My Room Leads to the End of the World

The subject matter is very good, but what the hell is it like to give out 40 shares at the beginning of a company? Is this something done by someone who owns a high-tech post-apocalyptic world?

The subject matter is very good, but the author's writing is too confusing.

Otherwise, don't write about women's emotional dramas, and if you do, don't be so hypocritical. Women are lying in front of each other and doing nothing, so who are they pretending to be eunuchs? Poisonous hair

The subject matter is good, but very poisonous, very poisonous! When I saw 40 million, I sold 40% of the shares. I just don't want to read any more. Then the plot goes from east to west. What do you think!

The subject matter is good, but the more I write it, the more confusing it becomes. There is no logic yet. If anyone can pay to read this, I'd better rewrite it as soon as possible.

I heard the introduction is good? But the author's writing style is very poor and the writing is messy and not easy to understand?

It was good at first, but then Amelie came out and I couldn't understand it. Goodbye

What a mess. As long as the CPU is one generation better than it is now, it will be enough if the foreigners are killed one generation at a time, and we will just engage in black technology.

What did you write? I erased it.

I saw it crashed, it was too messy, so I deleted it.

You have changed the exciting parts so that you write vaguely, and you have written very detailed about the exciting parts that should not be exciting. You might as well just outline it for everyone to see! !

The writing is messy, messy

Xiaobai article, after the identification, the protagonist actually does not have his own army, nor does he have a country that he controls.

How did I get on the list because my writing was so messed up? My editing skills are limited.

It's a pretty bad start! Apart from anything else, there are so many ways to get money, but this is the most rubbish one. Oh, it's just rubbish, isn't it?

When I read Chapter 17, I had no intention of reading it, regardless of whether there was a twist or not. It was so disgusting that the pig's feet were so damn rubbish.

I admire the author very much, he is completely using love to generate electricity!

Otherwise, sort out your thoughts. The subject matter is good. However, the writing was very messy, at least, I felt it was messy when the nine fighter jets from the Tower Kingdom came. If you are in a chaotic place, then fifty people are very weak. If you are in a peaceful area, fifty people are too many. From here on, it's a mess

I checked Chapter 46 and can't continue. The plot can be unreasonable but not random.

I have actually been looking forward to someone writing about this subject well. Although there is a suite in the end of the world, it is not perfect, but it is indeed a relatively balanced way of writing between the two worlds in this type of writing.

My layout control ability is extremely poor. Is it possible to take one step at a time? Why do disgusting people or self-abuse appear? This is a common problem among intellectuals and artists. The simplest one is the small feet of ancient women. They have deformed and perverted aesthetics. Only those with mental illness can have such reactions as masochism and masochism.

I want to ask, there are so many high-tech artificial intelligences in Doomsday, and all kinds of mechas are available? Why not get off the planet? There are many high-tech technologies that have not been given examples, and smart terminals have been integrated into the body.

Chastity pants + can't help but strike up a conversation when seeing a beautiful woman + then want to have sex + stop for your own reasons at the last moment = bitch, too disgusting, not manly at all, the male protagonist's character cannot be tolerated, there is no problem in putting this kind of character and emotional description on the heroine and the supporting role, but it's disgusting if it's on a man. If you wear chastity pants, you should have a cold personality, so isn't it good to write about women chasing after you? I encountered a bad male protagonist, a cuckold male protagonist, a dog-licking male protagonist, and a male protagonist with bad views, all of which received negative reviews.

This novel feels like the moment a nuclear bomb was dropped. It's over. Looking at the back, I feel like my head is empty. It feels boring.

Let me ask the author, is it okay to write this book as Zhutianliu? In the apocalyptic world, after upgrading to a certain level and adding a world of extraordinary martial arts (technological martial arts), low-level warriors can break mountains with one punch. This can be written in more than two million words.