You Said You Were a Fake Celestial Master, So What's This Tongtian Talisman?
说好假天师，你这通天箓咋回事
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- Completed
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- 287k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
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- 4y ago
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130Chapters
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12.6kFans
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I still suggest the author do more research and lean towards traditional Taoist practices. Don't make it sound like an online game character unleashing skills. At the very least, the Nine-Character Mantra "Lin Bing Dou Zhe Jie Zhen Lie Qian Xing" should be included, along with overused Taoist phrases like "Ji Ji Ru Lü Ling" and "Fu Sheng Wu Liang Tian Zun"—these are phrases even old Hong Kong…
The part with the fiancée was a bit cheesy. The purpose of hiding his identity wasn't clearly explained. Everyone in the virtual world knows him, his friends know him, and even his closest girlfriend and lover say they don't want to reveal their identity—what's with that?
The synopsis alone is poisonous! School beauties, fiancées—basically anything involving hooking up with women is toxic. Women may be able to set up many schemes, but these schemes only make people nauseous, ending the story solely on women, devoid of any real scope.
The Confucian school has existed from the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods to the present day, and the current head is the 77th generation. Did your 300+ generations start with the Upper Cave Man? The founder of Taoism, Zhang Daoling, was from the late Han Dynasty...
The subject matter is novel, but it also has many flaws. To put it simply, when a new system (Taoist magic) emerges and only you know it, it's like an ordinary person inventing a warp drive.
I think it's best not to define the protagonist as the only Taoist. I know the author wants to highlight the protagonist's uniqueness and is also cultivating Taoists, but if strange events are happening all over the world, and the protagonist's area is in such chaos every day, what about the rest of the country? Every country has some kind of foundation.
Another example of overconfidence; charging money after only 30 chapters.
Honestly, the idea was alright, but something felt off, so I decided not to watch any further.
At first glance, it looks good, and the beginning is alright, but it gets worse and worse as it goes on. It uses the same template repeatedly; even movie scripts aren't written like this. The outline for the dough is already there, but the cooking time is insufficient, and it lacks ingredients and proper heat control. The concept is good, but it needs polishing.
They've run out of ideas; all they have left are disgusting plots.