Dragon: I Am the Lord of Disaster

Let's ask some questions first. First, the most important disadvantage is that there are more and more typos starting from chapter 40, and the further I go, the more I let myself go... Basically there are typos in every chapter, and the reading experience is very poor. I am too lazy to correct the mistakes... If it was the first book for a newcomer, I would not be so harsh, but as the author's third book, there are so many typos, which makes people doubt whether the author wrote this book carefully. Second, regarding the dragon nature (silver), don't mess around again. If the emotional drama (and other non-main plots) cannot promote the development of the plot, it will become a very big poison point. If you blindly think about OOXX and write content that is obviously contrary to a harmonious society, at least this book will be put into a dark room, and at worst, the author will be put into it 🤫. Third, exaggerated words of praise and the like are fine once or twice, but one more stroke will suffice. Repeated emphasis can easily arouse people's disgust. In the end, it is easy to fall into the situation of endless memes and plot collapse. The author should be careful. Fourthly, I have seen the prototype of the struggle for hegemony in the world of farming. First of all, I would like to remind you that it is easier to deviate from the main line and cause the plot to collapse. The author should pay attention to controlling the length. Don't forget the main plot as soon as you go to another world, as if you inserted the old story into a mini-novel, or simply changed the novel. There are not many articles that change the world when written like this. (The Wings of Frost Golden Finger was initially designed to serve the fast-traveling genre, and the overall writing style favors fast-traveling rather than the world, so there is no collapse in this regard). Next are the points for improvement First, there is nothing to say about the golden finger setting and strength division of the novel, but try not to use too precise numbers in terms of time and space, otherwise there will always be people comparing these settings with reality. If it is not possible, you can just create a set of units yourself. . Second, the division of power in the mainland is a bit simplistic, especially when new characters and new forces appear and are explained later, giving people the feeling of being improvised. It is also recommended that the main forces that will appear in the future be mentioned when introducing the world.

Can you delete the pseudo-dnd? This is not called fake, this is called nothing.

Mixed blood reduces lifespan? The setting is weird, and people of mixed Asian and European descent have a particularly short lifespan.

It is quite outrageous that the legendary dragon has a lifespan of only 3000, and in mixed blood it is only 1/10. Even 300 is too little, right? If it were set like this, wouldn't the number of elves be less than 1,000?

Whatever

Daily poisoning, really good, pour me a eunuch book

How to say it? I never imagined that such works exist now. Lowered the offline again.

There is a one-meter silver dragon written at the beginning of the first chapter, and there is another red dragon gene in the second chapter.

Just don't write a chapter if it's such a small update.

These two chapters are a bit baffling. Why keep the Pope?

Mixed race shortens lifespan? This setting is a bit confusing. As long as there is a mixed-blood dragon, no descendants will be pure-blooded.

A reward of 100 book coins should be regarded as a big encouragement to the author. After all, we are also old friends. I hope you won't dislike it.

Is it a dark novel? What is the character of the protagonist?

Are there any dnd novels that can be read now? Please recommend books 🙂