Dark Mage Quick Brushing Guide

The writing is good, but the plot is deliberate and the feeling of tearing is serious.

The author tried his best to give the supporting characters flesh and blood and add soul. However, the actual effect is that due to the extensive description of the supporting characters, the protagonist loses its own distinctive characteristics. The supporting characters are also half-protagonist and half-supporting. Because the author clearly knows that he is a supporting character, it is impossible to make him the protagonist, but excessive shaping can only give him an awkward positioning with unclear positioning. If it were the same two protagonists as The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, it would only need to emphasize the little demon hunter a little more. But this book is not. In this way, the characters will appear confusing, the protagonist will be diluted, and there will be no real sense of immersion. Moreover, there is no need to forcefully suppress the protagonist in the current fast-paced novel format. The best way is to follow the settings of Diablo III, one for the world, another for hell, and then heaven. In this way, there is no need to stress the length of the level. You can also insert desired branch lines. For example, the war between the human world and the demon hunters. Hell adds originality or you add the devil or other hellish forces in the middle. Or maybe it's just a dark setting where the demon can't be killed but can only be sealed. All of these will do. Forcibly suppressing the protagonist's level is a rather embarrassing way of writing. It's not that there's no writing method, there is, it's too cliche. This is the writing method of early novels. Looking at it now, many familiar settings in the past only make the novel unpalatable.

It was really tiring to watch, especially the part about the sacrifice, the scholars were so depraved, and then the protagonist was still listening to him, and finally he was about to make a move, but the woman on the side interrupted again, and when he was about to take action, he was interrupted again by a villain, and then there was a water count. There were a lot of words, and then the villain just kept talking to himself without doing anything, and Roy rushed up to make trouble and deliver potions to the villain... I don't know what the author was thinking when writing these chapters. I only know that I was exhausted from reading, and it didn't feel like I was chasing the book anymore.

The setting and plot are good, but the battle scenes are really annoying, and others are fighting with enthusiasm. The protagonist is dragging his feet, only thinking about gaining experience, and following the crowd in action. It can be a very enjoyable book, but seeing the small town battles feels more and more boring.

Can you speed up the pace? When I play the game, I have to be a tool to follow the plot, and you guys have to be a tool to follow the plot. Introduction Every second, every second, the plot is grinding away. I think those who read your introduction and read the book should come to see the protagonist take off, not the kind of friendship between elementary school students in a small town.

Maybe the author thinks that your writing is very careful and well written, but I am really tired when I read it. There are a lot of things that I have to figure out by myself, and where is hunting water ghosts written?

Hasn't the protagonist played Diablo before? Why doesn't he know who Leah and Kane are?

What about the male protagonist? What about the male protagonist? ! In the whole process up to now, except for the beginning and later, which turns into Roy's plot, the male protagonist has become a supporting role.

When I saw Chapter 85, how should I put it? There were loopholes in the plot and the pace was too slow. I didn't feel much refreshed when I saw Chapter 85. This is too bad. Come on, author. .

The most powerful thing in the real world is the barrier set. If you get a cultivation belt and a destiny fragment, you can directly stop the time and then break into pieces.

Don't copy the otherworld skills from the game, as they will appear weak. Your skill in the game, a meteorite shot, has a larger killing radius than a real grenade thrown by someone. Your arcane missile, which is shot once a second, is stronger than anyone's revolver that can empty the magazine in one second?

Quick brush? Did I misunderstand the meaning of speed grinding by lowering the level at the beginning?

What world is this background in? The author has not said yet. Did you say dark? There is also the White Wolf and the Eternal Fire. You said The Witcher 3 also has Dark Wanderer and Leah.

The article bar of Qidian, the introduction, the title of the book, the author writes a cool article, a top abuser, suppressing the pig's feet, suppressing first and then suppressing depression, suppressing, suppressing, the whole book is complete

Can't the protagonist absorb experience in a wide range? Then why do you want to take risks alone, just form a family team to level up, can't you just gain experience alone? As for the reason, it is normal for a family-derived war knight to mutate into a killing mage, right? There is no war without killing

Author, you wrote this chapter saying that you felt playful, but do you know? The chapter you wrote tells the story of the character you created. Everything collapsed, okay?

I hope he is a real master, rather than relying on system skills to get by.

More than ten people ran towards the protagonist who was 50 yards away. Why did the protagonist kill more than ten people in one second and they didn't even get there? This is single-target damage. Is this enemy walking on crutches?

There is a big bug in the new season of Diablo 3. The server is stuck, causing the demon hunter Ice Swallow to receive a huge increase in damage, easily dealing hundreds of thousands of damage. Some players are calling for all players to delete files and restart the season to show "fairness". Some players feel that anyone who uses bugs to level up will be banned. Why should other players pay the price for players who use bugs? But in the current situation, I feel that Blizzard and NetEase are pretending to be dead, "As long as I ignore it, there will be no bugs"

It's a pity that the Phoenix suit will be cut into a dog next season.

A small town sacrifice would tend to encourage people to quit, and the plot is very complicated. . Strangeness

Doesn't the Witcher's fire regenerate quickly?

I took a look and found that quite a few people in the town were persuaded to quit. I came here to read the online article. With the way you wrote it, I might as well read the plot introduction of Diablo 3.

I feel that the author should not be lazy and use the name of the original game to eliminate some of the criticism. After all, it is a normal person who has a name after seeing the various game backgrounds that keep appearing in the book. As a result, the protagonist looks like someone who has had his prefrontal lobe removed and has no reaction at all. He will be disgusted. And he didn't look at it in front of him. When it comes to the protagonist's memory being blocked and harmonious, the whole reaction is like a brush that doesn't read the plot, but many inner thoughts emphasize that he knows that a lot of this world is related to the game The plot is completely separated from your setting as the author. By the way, less than five chapters after meeting, I didn't expect that you dared to kiss the human body of a big pineapple.

Are there any other d3 books? Can anyone recommend them to me?

First of all, let me explain that I listen to books, and every time I hear about Drizzt, I think of Tristram...

Can you help me recommend some Diablo novels?

Is there such a profession in Diablo 3? Paladin, Witch Doctor, Mage, Demon Hunter, Barbarian, and an Undead. What is the Secret Art?

How do you make Kanai's Box legendary equipment in Diablo 3? I don't know how to use it at all.

I'm typing, I just read the comments, thank you...