Lord of the Nation: My Building Can Speak for Itself

It's a novel angle, I like it very much, come on, the author However, there is a plot that feels a little unhandled, a little routine and stiff, so I woke up and posted it again In Chapter 21, the construction elf wakes up and breaks out to help the protagonist through the difficulties. The plot is okay, but if the construction elf wakes up and breaks out when the protagonist has just used skills and is full of courage to go up and fight, there will be a little anti-routine comedy effect, which is more in line with the current atmosphere of the whole book. The phrase "people who dare to hurt me" will be more convincing and make the building elf more arrogant. If the original text saves the situation at the end, there will be a question. After being beaten so many times, doesn't it feel a little late? There is also a problem with the control and layout of the entire battlefield. Hey, the hero behind the monster group, why doesn't the protagonist come to help when he wants to behead the monsters? I didn't attack the protagonist, it just felt weird anyway.

It's okay, If you keep the fun writing later while continuing to lower the protagonist's strength, this book is basically very good. Lords of the Nation must first be positioned as a cool novel, and the protagonist cannot suffer too many setbacks. In fact, the strength should not be too strong. Try to reduce the protagonist's strength as much as possible, but it must be reasonable and cannot be suppressed by a weird high-dimensional mechanical deity. Finally, the strength of the human lords must also keep up. It is best to give them some luck, but the description of their luck cannot be too long. This creates a sharp contrast.

The ideas are good, the writing style is quite cute, and the world view is a mixture of Invincible Heroes and League of Legends. Two recommendation votes were cast.

It shouldn't be added to the League of Legends setting. The name looks like it can be tolerated, but the word "water" is unbearable.

Have you entered the palace? 🙂

I set up a race Stallion Skills. Crossing with better animals can further improve genes, such as dragon Behemoth, which can make the offspring more powerful. The demons and succubi are hybridized with animals.

More than 20,000 words. . A lot of votes😠

Boss, there are always unscrupulous people who want to harm me and have a hand in everything. Please consider the archer battalion that refuses to recruit? Do you know about the Plate Archer? This is the inheritance of archers from ancient times and cannot be lost. Dayi once asked Zhang Hui (the fifth son of Shaohao). Later, the four evil spirits that Dayi led his troops to eliminate were all Zhang Hui's cousins; Later Dayi accepted an apprentice, Pang Meng. When he left the army, Dayi told him that there were only five people who were better at archery than you, so you should not mess with him. As a result, Pang Meng asked Dayi if he killed them all, would I be the best in the world? Then he was the first to start chasing Dayi; Later, Pang Meng also accepted a disciple, Hongchao. He heard that the master had killed the master, and then said that I would avenge the master, so that I would be the best in the world; Later, Hou Yi went to Xia, and Hou Yi's adopted son and state minister Han Chuo killed Hou Yi's body, chopped it into meat paste, and added poison to cook it. Meat cakes were then given to Hou Yi's tribe to eat; Later, a man named Mi from Hou Yi's tribe fled to Youge and took refuge with Shaokang. Finally, Han Zhuo, who was over 80 years old, was taken out of his bed and dedicated to Shaokang, and Shao recovered from summer; So, it is very reasonable for my archers to wear plate armor, right?

It would be nice if I didn't write about the alliance. The more I look at these heroes, the more uncomfortable I feel. There is always a sense of familiarity. It's uncomfortable when I can't fully integrate them.

The author's writing style is the kind I like, it's interesting but not excessive. Overall, except for a little less word count, it's pretty good.

If you can speak and think, you will have feelings, and if you have feelings, you will have rebellion, so there will be ruthlessness in the way of heaven.

It would be great if the storyline in League of Legends didn't happen. Let's start Water League now!

Did I miss it? Why does it feel like there is no part of the content, for example, where do those books and information come from, what is this master about, and are there mission rewards?

The idea is very good, and if you have three golden cards, it's pretty smooth, and that's the prompt. I think it's a minor poisonous point, that is, your house feels that it has become more beautiful, so it tells you that there are three drawings under the bed. Why didn't the house itself tell you? Talk about the beep coming out? There are also water wells and the like. I feel that this prompt sound is a minor failure.

Recommended book "A riding and slashing system with you"

Author, you are a real sister-in-law, and you can drive just fine🤫🤫🤫

What is written around Chapter 22, an embarrassing batch

Not bad, but the protagonist is a native of a different world line, which makes people less immersed (￣ー￣). I don't know the natives of League of Legends.

This book is one of the things that the guide gave me after the Spring Festival! Although the author is level 1, his writing style is pretty good, and the story is novel. It combines the "clichéd" "Global Lordization" with the "clichéd" "League of Legends" to create some "qualitative changes." The plot is not too bloody, and the rhythm is good; the occasional small humor is also good and not embarrassing; I have not found any particularly bad chapters so far, which is particularly worthy of praise! Summary: This is my favorite work, please support me, the author!

Very well written but too slow

Thank you for the ending. Cheers to the author. The book is good. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. I think it's worth ordering. I'm looking forward to the next book.

I hope the author's next book will be more exciting🥳

Tower Defense: Public Enemy, if you're not a book reader, you can read it.

I haven't updated it for so many days. It's probably too late, so it's time to say goodbye.