Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Prompts

After reading Chapter 28, it seems that the plot and writing style of this book are all OK so far, and there is no plot to subdue one's wits. A few suggestions: 1. Whether it is the title or the comments, we can see that the selling point of this book is the golden finger. In other words, most of the readers who come in are here for Goldfinger. So the frequency of golden fingers must be high and it must be comfortable. A plot like the one where you are not kidnapped by Goldfinger and rely too much on Goldfinger and ignore precautions is really unnecessary. 2. The protagonist's perspective and the reader's perspective are two different things, and the reader's perspective depends on the author's description. If the author describes a very good girl and often gives her a shot, the reader will easily fall in love with her, but if the protagonist does not intend to be with her, it will be very uncomfortable. So if there is no good ending, then describe the woman in a disgusting way, or give less scenes. 3. No matter how the mainstream of Internet literature changes, it is still based on pleasure, and few people like to watch sadistic characters. So there are less frustrating plots. If there is, there must be rewards, that is, if you want to advance, you must suppress it first, instead of just suppressing it. For example, it is okay to be hunted, but you must take revenge and be happy, or you may get some great opportunity because of it. Of course, as for the above points, if the author doesn't care about the number of fans and insists on writing about the feeling of being a mortal, then just pretend that I didn't say anything.

Is this chapter a lie? What has been updated? Just to get a starting point?

Update soon

I feel that the writing is quite solid, but could there be less obscene descriptions every time I meet a female nun or a woman with a good figure who comes to my door? This is an article about cultivating immortals. Your desires are aroused at every turn. How lousy is your xinxing? Since you don't plan to do anything else, it would be more popular if you take the opportunity to improve your personality. This is what men should do if they don't need to show off. Since he is portrayed as a decisive and calm type of killer, don't let his character fall apart. Personal opinion, don't worry if you don't like it!

I read Chapter 17. Mining and Seizing Opportunities were written very well, but the old man who wrote the subsequent Attack and Sutra Pavilion was very poor. The reasons are: 1. The golden finger is an opportunity reminder, not a danger reminder, so the mentality and IQ of the protagonist are not there at all. 2. The old man only said a few common sense that everyone knows and did not provide the protagonist with reliable exercise information. For example: asking the protagonist about his needs and then recommending exercises. The protagonist was so grateful and speechless.

I think meaningless pretense and slap in the face are obsolete, and the only way is to be honest.

The foundation for cultivating immortals and the land of wealth lovers. Old Devil Han had raised a cauldron even when he encountered the Ping Jing, not to mention that he and Ouyang were both off during the Blood Trial. Wealth is first, love is second, and law and land are the last. Nowadays, many people who write about mortal life are not good at writing, because they cannot handle the problem of Taoist companions well. Afraid of being locked up in a dark room? Just don't use Taoist companions throughout the whole process, and then the writing will collapse. Think carefully about how to write it. Don't be the gods who have no women in their hearts and draw their swords. If cultivating immortality is all about immortality, then what's the point of cultivating immortality? When you should be carefree, be carefree. Don't be timid. It's really boring for a eunuch to become a mortal.

When I read the character design in the first two chapters, I thought it was a fairy, but when I went to the store to buy something, the deacon greeted me directly, I wanted to give up. It would be good if you can have a maid to introduce the purchase in the middle of Qi training. A deacon must build the foundation anyway, so this can be tolerated. If you were to be followed and hunted when you went out later, you were still near your own sect, so what use would this sect and Fangshi be? Who dares to trade there? Moreover, the protagonist has been born in two lifetimes and has been practicing in the sect for five years. He is not a novice like Han Li. . .

Mortals are cultivating immortals and want all kinds of things!

The writing is good, I hope to come up with more stories, please work hard

The start is a bit like Yunshuizong Zhang Qingyuan, but he brings a proficiency panel, and yours is a prompt panel. The family background is similar. Both parents died and sold off their assets to practice in the sect. It just depends on whether the book you wrote is as good as others. I am still chasing the current one.

It's too cliche in the back, polish it a bit, or else they'll all be gone

You are not imitating proficiency, you are copying it.

I feel like I can't stand it anymore! ! ! !

Where should I go

Forehead. . The killing of snakes in Monkey Mountain is a little bit poisonous. I won't go into the specifics and you can read it yourself. It would be better if you write it all as dead. It is natural that the two brothers and sisters were killed by the protagonist. Then he said that he would live for them, and then blamed others for their deaths. Everything was caused by that woman. The women were just doing the same thing as him, talking about useless things. When he found out the situation, he didn't even say that he was prepared to escape with his life. Why should he say that others trapped them for a few breaths to escape? It's not the same. When he found out that Snake was going to be promoted, he could have told him earlier and immediately escaped for his life, and then let them all write to death. Even if one or two came out alive, there would be no reason to shout and kill. He had said everything that needed to be said and left it to fate.

I'm a eunuch, my investment is about to be cut off, it's really Xiuer, Tianxiu...

You can read this book without thinking. Except for the first few scenes where the male protagonist is playing house, everything is fine.

Overall it's pretty good, but can the big principles be analyzed less? Only when there are stories can people be moved. This book of big principles uses a little more pen and ink 😁

Damn it, uncle, I knew I couldn't stand it after subscribing. I don't know how many books have been like this.

Author, I think the novel is very interesting. But can the protagonist not become obscene when he sees a woman? His character has collapsed (book friends who have read my comments, don't get me wrong. The protagonist kills decisively and kills both men and women. The book is quite interesting) I have PTSD now, and I wonder if I am suffering from misogyny. I just want to watch the protagonist pretending to be a woman, get out of here, unless you portray her well.         ，

I want to try writing a novel, but I don't know what the market is. How many grades can an author like this get?

Shouldn't we find a place with a volcano? Majoring in fire, he ran to a place with water to set up his nest?

As for Senior Sister Bingpo Jian An, didn't we agree that after building the foundation, we'd go on a treasure hunt together?

The recommendation vote is given, please update it quickly

Really TMnb, where did Ning Yuanjing go? Where is that genius with the Nine Yang Body? Didn't it say that all three major sects have Nascent Souls? Why did it become only the late Jindan stage later? Didn't Senior Sister An say that she would accept the inheritance together with the foundation builders? I write whatever comes to my mind, it's really TMnb.

You are completely copying "Cultivation Begins from Time Traveling Three Years" and the plot is exactly the same as what he wrote. You copied it and changed it a little. You copied it exactly the same, and the writing style is also a lot worse.

By the way, does the author have an outline of the updated content? I haven't read it for a long time after reading Chapter 100, and I can't remember the plot 😭

It's a very good book. The author should update it.