Elf Special Commander

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Apart from logic, there is nothing wrong with this book. Logic is the biggest flaw. Reason for joining the army: To protect the country and join the army, I am very speechless. I would rather say that I was framed and had to join the army to avoid the crisis. After all, the country is in a terrible state. Recruit: Directly targeted, fasting and high-intensity training are constantly occurring among them. This is to kill people, not training. Battlefield: This is the biggest highlight of this article. I can't deny it, but I just want to say that the new recruits come directly to do the work of the special forces. This country is in such dire straits. The overall layout, the protagonist is fighting in the army, no matter how strong your team is, what's the use? The country is corrupt and powerful is in power. Can it be solved if the country's strength is high? You know the mythical beasts, but you don't have an elf in your hand. Are you kidding me? Must I claim it?

I suggest you just write a wolf-warrior type of military novel, and don't mention the elves, which would be really awkward. When writing an elf novel, don't mention heavy themes about country and nation, as it doesn't match the warm and warm growth style of the elves at all. The star source you wrote about is not worth protecting, so you might as well let the protagonist revolutionize it.

1. The author does not understand psychology at all. A normal person would already suspect that there is something wrong with the top management at the beginning of the draw, and would not be stupid enough to continue to follow. It is already good to not cause trouble and not jump to counterattack, but what if you continue to target and directly counterattack? 2. The author doesn't understand the human body at all. Super high-intensity exercise, training and punishment, let alone a top student who just joined the army, even if he recruits an ordinary soldier in the army, he can't thank you. He doesn't give him food, drink or rest. He laughs to death. Ordinary people are put in ICU on the spot. Soldiers also have to be weak for a long time, and may even suffer from hematuria, exhaustion, moderate to severe dehydration, hallucinations and auditory hallucinations, insufficient blood supply to the brain, soft tissue damage, lactic acid accumulation in the muscles causing extreme soreness, weakness, and cramps, and other states. Not to mention that the human body in the Pokémon world has been slightly strengthened. 3. To hide and cultivate the seeds, the first thing should not be full pressure, but to lay the foundation first. What can we talk about when our life is almost gone? You can eat and drink less, but nutritional supplements are added secretly rather than nothing at all! 4. It has the assistance of legendary elves and is a sacred beast with a position. It is stronger than ordinary mythical beasts. It has the qualifications to negotiate with the country instead of becoming a virgin. 5. If you don't know how to write about women, it's best not to write about women. If you don't want a female protagonist, don't deliberately add intellectual dialogue. You will make me think that your protagonist is not a top student but a waste like a mother's baby. I don't want to say anything else, that's all I saw, I left, I won't be able to write well after that, it's like this when I go out, don't expect me to wait to see him grow up, because the protagonist is not a simple child.

I can only say that many people like you can't stand it. Since the national army is like this, and it is still a vassal state, it is like the national power is already weak and the army is in such a bad state. What can be saved? It's so small.

A country is now a vassal state, it doesn't have any mythical beasts, and its military is still in such a mess, what kind of future does it have?

The subject matter is good, but the biggest problem is that you have this kind of corruption in the military. . . . . It can only be said that the army is like this. Can this country be saved? Why would the protagonist join the army under such circumstances? And in this case, can the protagonist's friends let Larulas be picked up? Are the people in this country stupid? What's more, the elves issued by the army also include an injured Kati dog? If you want to make the protagonist more difficult, why not just choose a character with a low racial value? I gave up after reading the first 4 chapters. Even if the protagonist grows up in the future, what is the point of being loyal to such a country and such an army?

What is this about? When I read the introduction, I thought the protagonist's country was similar to a big flower plantation. He joined the army with all kinds of friendship and passion. But what the hell happened? Did he enter a small Japanese country?

Writing military, is your country worth protecting? You know, not every country is like China. The military in countries other than China is more of a profession. Please forgive me for not accepting that the protagonist does not take advantage of his own advantages but joins the army with first place results, is suppressed by military connections, and maintains such a corrupt country. I hope the author can attract his own readers. Goodbye

I don't know why the author couldn't think of it. It feels quite nonsense. At the beginning of the training, I stood in the hot sun for several hours without lunch, ran 15 kilometers long, and skipped dinner. Still have the strength to clean and sleep. It's also outrageous

Why do officials who are bigger than the protagonist have no brains to target the protagonist? Others make mistakes or are targeted for irritation, but the protagonist keeps silent and is still being punished. Then the reason is whatever. Bah, you are making a grudge! It was really unpleasant to watch. He was targeting for the sake of targeting. He practiced until he was exhausted all day long without even giving him anything to eat. I really feel sorry for the protagonist. The top student went to the army to serve as a soldier and ended up like this. Not to mention the key training targets, I only saw the protagonist being innocently targeted, so I stopped watching!

The idea is great, but the beginning is too discouraging, and is it necessary for a country like this to exist after the military has become so corrupt?

I don't understand why the protagonist is regarded as hope, and he goes to the battlefield within a month. What can the protagonist lead? A country needs to regard a rookie as hope, just because he was the first in theory when he was a student? Or something, and with all kinds of targets, I personally feel that there is no way to save this.

Many people can't stand the first 20 chapters. The main character is said to be abusive but not clearly stated, but it is said to be for the purpose of cultivating the protagonist. What kind of special forces are trained by being hungry every day? Let's not talk about the country. The protagonist aspect alone is very discouraging. You can't cultivate it openly, you can do it secretly, right?

From the subject matter, it is clear, but the more you read, the less attractive it is. Here is the summary, if you don't like it, delete it 1 The protagonist and others were robbed of the elf's "first choice" and all had no temper 2 The protagonist was inexplicably targeted by the instructor, and had no temper at all, but this is understandable 3 The protagonist's comrades maliciously targeted him, then counterattacked, and was targeted again by the instructor 4 The protagonist just said that grandpa did not let the spread of Sanshou, so he taught a few close friends Although they have a good relationship, they don't know the other person's details at all 5 When they got the information, they were suspected of being the heroine, and they sold the protagonist. There was no specific discussion before the action. The protagonist said that he would sell her when he was found out, but there was no 6. He was suspected of being the heroine or the main female supporting character, and took advantage of his girlfriend with him These are the big poisonous points that were discovered after reading less than 30 pictures. The author may have put effort into arranging the plot, but he did not avoid the poisonous points at all. Maybe the writing is not enough, maybe this is the plot.

It was very frustrating to watch. How can I put it this way? After getting acquainted with a mythical beast like Latios, he was still struggling in the military camp and was repeatedly targeted. The country was also corrupt. Why didn't the protagonist have the idea of ​​​​revolt? Only by cutting off the carrion can we usher in a new life. It was indeed a bit uncomfortable to watch.

The idea of ​​modern Chinese history + Pokemon war is very good and deserves recognition. But why must we guard this devastated land so firmly? The protagonist is a time traveler and has a natural sense of alienation, which is very suitable for readers to take in. The analysis shows that certain people or things happened in the protagonist's life in those 16 years that made him determined, which made him persevere in such a sadistic situation. Shouldn't you have written this reason out earlier? The previous chapter was so cruel that most of the readers were gone. Those who can persevere are warriors. Who cares which nook and cranny the author has buried. Before you give this reason, this protagonist is a holy mother in our eyes.

The author's choice of subject matter is good, but it is too irritating in the early stage, and since he wants to serve the country, he must at least make people feel that he has saving value. The author has been saying that it will be fun to write in the future. There is a ghost. If you don't change it in the early stage, no matter how many updates it is, it will be in vain. The character of the protagonist is not established at all. It is weird and there is too little description. It is better to add some environment and portrait description.

The golden three chapters at the beginning directly persuade you to quit. A country's army, the protagonist is a man who is the number one in the elf palace. After joining the army, he is troubled by a playboy? ? ? Ning, it's okay. Not to mention that you've been well-educated, but you still get offended by others. I can't understand it.

It is very easy to destroy the United States. Just send the author to the United States to become a special forces commander.

This book has been withdrawn a long time ago, but he came up again when searching for books. It seems that the popularity is still there. Thinking about the persuasion to quit in the first dozen chapters, I feel that the protagonist is a cannon fodder who was captured into the army (set it in time travel, otherwise it will not be able to explain the knowledge. If the local aborigines have this degree and still treat them like this, the country is already rotten, and you will not join the army if you are patriotic). The boss takes pleasure in abusing priority talents (the protagonist does not eat, drink or rest for several days, but his physical fitness is better than others, and he goes out to cause trouble at night. He came from some academy where the reincarnation of mythical beasts came from. Anyway, I am speechless). The elves just grab a bunch of them and give them to people. They are just cannon fodder anyway. The so-called mission is better than nothing. They are not expected at all. Of course, there must be control methods, otherwise everyone will definitely run away immediately instead of completing the mission so seriously. Not to mention anything else, others have summarized it very well. This is definitely not foreshadowing. It is to strengthen a certain emotion. This often appears in romance, but other people's flaws are easily ignored. Yours is not a romance novel.

The author's level is worrying. After reading the first few pictures, Shen Nong was poisoned. How dare you join the army? How can you adapt in advance? A day of high-intensity training is all about not eating. Haha, people who read it want to laugh. There is no normal basic logic. 🐔

High-intensity training without food is really outrageous

Don't look at it. It's too poisonous. It'll kill people.

Could it be that you have taken a fancy to someone, given him a heavy load, but not allowed to eat, and chosen the only sick elf at the end of the queue? Why don't I teach you a person who can better reflect the added burden? Let alone the dying Kadi dog. Since it is an added order, why not be a dying Spearow? It is still a good elf. You can cure it and use it until the end. What kind of burden is this? If I give you a garbage elf, no matter how you cure it, it won't make you stronger. It's perfect until you use it to the end.

Why are the elves distributed to recruits so weird? You are not an ordinary elf. Each elf has different habits and skill pools. If you work together to conduct unified training, then an army will have all kinds of elves, just like a modern army with a square formation, but the soldiers will have all kinds of firearms. In a modern background, is it difficult to breed a non-rare elf? Even as a small country, is it difficult to breed one or two family pets? The first and second elves are unified, and the following elves can be conquered by themselves. Also, you don't really think that people can live for seven days without eating, so you treat the male protagonist like this. That's seven days while lying on a corpse. Try it under high-intensity training. You can't stand it for a day, and you still fancy the male protagonist. It's life-threatening! If you don't write that the male protagonist is favored by the senior management, we will simply think that the male protagonist has offended the senior management and will be targeted. Good guy, as soon as you write it down, you will feel that the senior management has something to do with it. This way, it is fair to say that the male protagonist is favored by the male protagonist, haha

Eating several meals and doing high-intensity training for more than ten days in a row (?) I was afraid of dying early if I did this 😅

Hey, I was persuaded to withdraw from the first few photos. I have never seen someone who foreshadowed me to death.

The subject matter is really good, but the targeting is really too vicious. Sometimes the protagonist is punished and starved, causing stomach problems. How can he eat efficiently on the battlefield in the future? Moreover, the targeting is either unsatisfactory and purely targeted, or the targeting is just and aboveboard and says that it is for you, instead of saying behind the scenes that this is all for you, and the result is that he will be punished to death on the surface. . . There's nothing wrong with the protagonist's character, but it's a pity