From the Start, I Intercept the World-Ending Giant Serpent

It's really strange. It's a pretty good setting, but why is the writing so clumsy? The early expectations are snakes, snake farms, doomsday bases and doomsday countdowns. I wrote the beginning of farming and hoarding to attract relevant readers, and then what did I write? I won't talk about my awakening. I won't mention the awakening of my sister and junior schoolmates. Anyway, it's the women next to the protagonist of the traditional routine, haha. Then the dream meeting has been done, so what's the point of writing it to show off the performance? Do dozens of chapters with one or two animations and just a shadow? Then I added the settings and levels of the Gu weapon. Good guy, after adding these, it also involves a Sakura Kingdom force. In China, you are being hunted by the evil Sakura Kingdom forces. I am too lazy to complain. What are you writing? They are all on the shelves, and they haven't even written about the end of the world. The irrelevant plots are as smelly and long as the old lady's foot-binding cloth. Why don't you ask yourself how much to read? Why not just write plots that make readers impatient? I also went to Sakura Country. I didn't know why, so I just skipped to the chapter and read it. It was pure melatonin. Write a plot about farming and hoarding, and a countdown to the end of the world, and then add some foot wraps. It is about saving people and the evil of Sakura Country. The evil of Sakura Country can reach into the country. Are you really stubborn? The more I read, the more nonsense it becomes. Why should I write about a base if I can do this? If I go to another country, I'm really not afraid of cheating. I'm just looking for trouble. The first ten chapters are the foundation of a masterpiece, and the last ninety chapters are the life of a hit person.

It's not bad, the poison point elements are basically covered, but the strange thing is that you have grasped them all, and no poison point has appeared yet. You can look forward to it.

9 Comments This book is terrible

After reading Chapter 59, let me know what you think. The book is a good book. The author's writing style is excellent. Some of the places that I originally thought were loopholes have been filled in later, and there are not many poisonous points. At present, it seems that it is a book that can be consumed with confidence, but it is not without its shortcomings. In my opinion, the shortcomings are not small (of course, this does not prevent it from being a good book). The plot line is not clear enough, and the mystery is the rhythm. In my opinion, this is one of the signs that distinguishes a good book from a high-quality book. Based on the current clues, the main plot should be about resisting the red sun apocalypse in early next summer, and the subplot should be about improving strength and developing power. There is no problem with the main and auxiliary plots, but there are problems with the way and rhythm of advancement. The protagonist is too passive. The protagonist has no general plan for the end of the Red Sun. He only plans to build a base and find a few helpers. I will not talk about the relevant departments. The author has not mentioned that I am regarded as the author because I deliberately did not write it to avoid 404. But in fact, after getting in touch with the Black Dragon Society, big stars and the forces behind them, you can find that there is another side to the world. There is a force that currently has a very favorable impression of the protagonist. The protagonist can further contact this force and use them to take greater actions. , Such as studying mutated plants or even the end of the red sun, such as finding more Gu weapons to break through iron chains, etc., But the protagonist does not take any action, and the author does not describe anything about this aspect (if there is a plot in this aspect later, then the author should describe the protagonist's thinking about taking action with the help of other forces in the front, and the ambush can also make the context of the novel clearer). The protagonist has no plan to improve his strength. He is learning swordsmanship and preparing to compete in competitions (this moment made me forget that there is an apocalyptic setting). When looking for crystals, he is planning to buy them online. When looking for the Snake King, he relies entirely on others' gratitude. The protagonist's base building action is quite fast and active, but he has no direction at all about mutated plants, crystal stones, snake kings and the twelve iron chains in his mind. He has never thought about collecting information about strange plants, nor has he thought about contacting major forces to find Gu devices (at least the author has no relevant descriptions currently), let alone In the past, I went to find the Snake King by myself. My friend said he would catch the Snake King and bring it to him, so he waited calmly (I even had a premonition that something would happen to the Sea Snake King). Apart from his enthusiasm for practicing swordsmanship, I could not see the protagonist's subjective initiative at all. It all relied on the author's plot arrangement. Even the members of the organization were discovered by chance, highlighting a fate. Looking back at the first 59 chapters, you can find that the plot is completely random, with a sudden plot happening now and then a sudden plot, the protagonist is busy here and there without knowing what he is busy with, and the rhythm is very chaotic.

The end of the world comes too slowly, and there is no sense of oppression. The protagonist was too weak after getting the plug-in. It seems that it is just an observation. He can control snakes and be strong, but there is no sense of world-destroying oppression.

Such an awesome introduction and Que's pig's trotters are so cheerful…

It's well written, and the expansion of the worldview is worth looking forward to. However, there are some things that I don't like. 1. The inexplicable plot of Xia Shichan was too cliché and I didn't really like it. 2. The Bamboo Leaf Green Snake King was originally a subordinate of an alien beast, but after making it capable of talking, it was no different from having a human subordinate. I instantly felt that there was no interest in this Bamboo Leaf Green Snake King. 3. I just read the comments and said that the awakened characters are all female characters...

It's been a hundred chapters, so let me say a few words: the content is okay, it has a complete background, and the characterization is okay, but haha. However, your golden finger is not a snake stone, it is not a snake stone, it is not a snake stone, it is a prophecy, prophecy, prophecy, ah. So there is no prophecy at all later on. In short, it predicts two things, one is the birth of the world-destroying snake, and the other is the Red Moon Riot. Also, since you have already joined a national organization, why don't you talk about something as big as the Red Moon Riots? Or do you think you can do whatever you want in the apocalypse by yourself? There is also the issue of the heroine. Looking at the current trend, there is a high probability that she will be a harem. But according to the author's current writing style, she is either giving it away or giving it away for free. This is very poisonous. I hope the author will write well in the future. In the end, I personally think this book is okay, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up, but the author's character creation and plot logic need to be strengthened.

I have been saving and suddenly found that updates have been discontinued a long time ago. What is going on?

The protagonist has predicted the future, and that's about it so far. As a result, a bunch of villains and supporting characters have been developed in advance. May I ask, they all also predict the future?