Pirates: Starting from a Company and Joining the Army

Don't look! Unless you can convince the author to change it! Otherwise, don't watch it! This is a fanfic of "One Piece", not a fanfic of "One Piece"

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 30. I was originally looking forward to Gran Blue + One Piece, but it turned out to be just the author's own pleasure. Let me tell you a few questions 1. The protagonist's name is Lu Li. Since it is set in the world of One Piece, don't call him such a Chinese name. It is full of contradictions, not to mention that there will be Brother Lu and Master Lu later. You should be writing martial arts novels! 2. Called "Lord Garp" at the beginning? As a modern person, how do you manage to call someone "adult" when you travel back in time? If it wasn't a habitual call, then it was a deliberate lick. You can call him "Mr. Karp" or "Uncle Karp". Respecting people does not mean licking! 3. Can anyone become an admiral? Even if you don't know that One Piece requires the nod of the Celestial Dragon to be a general, a normal person knows that general represents the highest status under the navy marshal, which means supreme power. How can you give it to a person of unknown origin? First of all, you will not pass the background check. You cannot be a general if you have the strength. You must at least have a clean background and a righteous heart recognized by the navy. What does a company meet? Arranging the company to Impel Down is good, as it is a disguised form of imprisonment, but the question is, can Magellan keep her under control? Unless the protagonist is used to threaten the company, it is meaningless. 4. Hawkeye agreed to teach the protagonist swordsmanship. The reason is that the company said that the commander has a reason to become stronger. If you have a reason to become stronger, I will teach you? Hawkeye doesn't know you, and he doesn't see any talent in swordsmanship in you. If Hawkeye is so easy to talk to, he has already become famous all over the world. Also, do you really dare to write about the protagonist 8-Day Swordsman? Is the protagonist rushing to be reincarnated to save the next world? Strength improvement does not follow common sense. If you say that you rely on system cheats to improve your strength, I have nothing to say. I will train myself as a swordsman for 8 days, ha! 5. The setting of the garrison is quite reasonable. The navy asked the general company to establish a new branch base, and then it became the protagonist's garrison. This is no problem. The question is, what is the purpose of establishing the navy branch in the windless zone? The only people who can freely enter and exit the windless zone are the Navy's warships and the pirate ships of Kuji Island. Other pirate sailboats cannot enter the windless zone at all. Otherwise, pirates would not need to climb the Upside Down Mountain to enter the Grand Route from the four seas. The navy's duty is to combat pirates and protect the people. Are you establishing a branch in the windless zone where there are neither pirates nor residents to attack the Sea Kings? I am the marshal, so I let the company establish branches in the New World. Anyway, I am afraid that the company can't control it. It would be better to abandon the New World and fight with the four emperors. 6. I don't want to complain about the rest.

It is recommended that the author set up the ship girl to learn physical swordsmanship and domineering to add some new ideas There is also scientific research on the Devil Fruit analysis. For example, after the Castle Fruit analysis, the main gun base is +++, the carrier aircraft is +++, and the equipment column is added. The Target Fruit is analyzed to increase hit points, and the Swimming Fruit is increased to maneuver, speed, and can sail like the sea in any environment. There are too many things to write By the way, I will talk about the great swordsman Bailong and the great swordsman Ling Zhanxian😏. I have seen a lot of Ship B fans, but there is nothing new

If the male protagonist has nothing to do, he can accept that the commander does not need to be all muscles, but it would be better not to be a dog for the navy, but to call the ship girls and rely on strategy and cross-era artillery fire to crush them.

There is a ship girl who wants to join the navy, so I asked the author, if the Tianlong people ask you for your girl, what are you going to do? Don't doubt it, those pigs from the Tianlong people have this possibility.

The company's output is really unreasonable! Replacing the Cannon Team's Emperor with the Enterprise, the output is actually higher than New Jersey (although this New Jersey seems to be playing the role of me).

Everyone is here for the ship girl. You write this just to disgust the blue players. Maybe you feel that you are also a player, but if you don't understand everyone's enjoyment of reading blue novels, don't write it. To be honest, your novel made me so angry that it almost gave me a brain hemorrhage.

Originally it was for the ship girl, but if the author continues to poison me like this, I really can't stand it anymore.

The theme is perfect, but is it really interesting to be a Draconian dog? Don't be poisonous. It's a good book with a good title, but I just want to be a dog and build a garrison and restore Azur Lane. Isn't it good?

This time the protagonist of the latest chapter is embarrassed. He knows that the observer is good at disguise and dares to go out on his own. Moreover, if a character who did not appear in the original appears next to Luo Bing, why should he not be wary? Luo Bing did not trust others in the early days.

The author recommends taking the route of crushing with artillery. After all, even the technology and warships of World War II are enough to defeat most powerful pirates. Even admirals can be crushed.

The reason is very funny. In the world of pirates, besides navy and pirates, are there no other professions? You already have the strength of a general, so why not be a free man? Do you have to find a father to look after you?

Lexington is the master of the world, and everyone is her slave🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

How many of those who play shipgirls don't like harems? The single heroine is a little confused.

After seeing Chapter 6, he left, and his attitude towards the relationship with the navy was really awkward, and he was born a bitch? Salted fish and dogs are not the same species, so don't mess up your positioning.

I don't understand why I have to be in the navy. I have to travel around with my business and I have no money. I fight pirates to get money. Isn't it nice to go and see the scenery I haven't seen before? It doesn't matter if you don't have the strength. If you have the protection of a company and want to join the navy, you are completely trapped in your own cocoon.

Let's not talk about joining the navy. The protagonist is cannon fodder and the company is indeed a general, and the navy can order the company to do things. The protagonist is just a cowardly wretch.

I was dissuaded by the author's height jokes. Height memes are very interesting to make complaints about, but adding them to the basic setting is really unbearable...

After you have an enterprise, it would be nice to go out to sea and catch a few pirates in exchange for bounties. You already have the resources. Then build, and you can pull up a fleet of ships in a week. After catching pirates in exchange for bounties, build again. As long as your face is not too dark, and you have a few more purple and gold skins, you can build it in a month. Assemble four or five teams of capable ships, find an island-built garrison and start farming mode, and then start writing daily life, interspersed with pirate plots. If you want to complete the plot, you can also intersperse some linkage ships. If not, you can also have time-travelers, download a dungeon and continue. Or start a garrison, follow the system to complete tasks, reward fishing, or magically modify equipment, or give modifications, daily interspersed with tasks, and interspersed with plots. Personally, I feel it will be better than the beginning of this book. There is really no need to join the navy or pirate forces. Wouldn't it be nice to be a third party and the strongest force yourself? Of course, the above is purely a personal opinion. Although I don't know how to write it, I can give you an opinion based on my eleven years of reading experience. It may be more comfortable to write it this way. After all, reading novels is just to kill time. Isn't it fun? If you have a general's combat power at the beginning, you will be done with it. If you join other forces, a large number of people will not like to read it, so they will abandon the book.

What the hell is Chapter 66 to Chapter 80? I read your book just for the shipgirls. I wonder what you meant by wasting so much time writing that plot just to find an empty island? Newcomers are advised to skip this plot directly.