I Am a Pirate, My Fruit Power Is Group Chat

. . . . . . . . . . I'm a little worried about the outlook of Japanese two-dimensional fans. If you are assimilated there. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

How to put it this way, I personally hate live broadcasts, chat groups and other ghostly things, especially when these things are done in my favorite anime such as Naruto and Pirates. It gives people the impression that they are wrong and too inconsistent.

It's full of exclamation points and lots of typos.

The subject matter is good, but the author is a novice, with many typos and awkward expressions. After reading a few chapters, I had no intention of reading any more.

The idea is good, but the writing is poor. Paragraph is too large. There is absolutely no desire to look at it carefully. Just browse through it quickly and take a look if you find something interesting. The daily plot of One Piece is too lengthy.

I've read more than a dozen chapters but I still don't understand 😰

I have no idea what I'm writing about...

The One Piece world is not reality. For the revolution he wrote about, you don't need to bring the revolutionary army into the People's Liberation Army. He is a simple Che Guevara, the kind who is chased all over the world. The world view of One Piece is very simple. The big fist is the last word. The world of One Piece is about power. What you see is the fist. No matter how evil you are. No matter how just the revolutionary army is. You haven't beaten the Celestial Dragons down for a whole day. You can't even call him evil. The revolutionary army has not yet turned the world upside down. It is still impossible for you to declare your justice to the world. It's like playing a king. There is no output until you are alive. The king is the one who grabs the head. Who cares if your little Luban has food? I, Lu Ban, can grab heads because of my ability! I don't care if you say I have thick legs and short legs, I can still get heads. I just have the ability. . . . This is the case in the One Piece world. My fist is so hard. My thunderous gossip can knock you down. My fist is justice. The truth lies only within the range of the cannon. Dignity only lies on the edge of the sword. . . . . . It's like the battle between Luffy and Kaji on Cake Island. Those who cannot stand under the overbearing lust are not qualified to speak.

Just read the first three chapters. Author, just change the first-person "I" to the protagonist's name, right? I don't even know what to say about this mistake you made. Writing a novel, if you use the first person, aren't you looking for death? Psychological activities throughout the article. The sense of immersion is too high for you, right? You're done. Take a look back. Do you really feel like you're writing a third-person novel? This damn thing is completely in first-person format. You just changed my character into the protagonist's name.

Big brother. You really can't write. Don't know how to handle the plot. You can just read two high-quality pirate novels. I really can't write, so let's copy it. Don't have so many specious psychological activities. When we write short stories, we pay attention to the word "shuang". Simple and crude.

The world view of One Piece is very simple. You can only make the other party accept your justice by knocking him down. Persuade people with your mouth. Naruto, the ninja next door, is useless if he can't beat the opponent's mouth escape. It's like the classic battle between Luffy and Kaji. Under the collision of overlord colors, those who cannot stand have no right to speak.

Feel free to leave a comment and let me know if there is a live person out there!

The chat group is not like a chat group, the game is not like a game, it feels very messy

The subject matter is okay, but the writing technique is too much for a novice. . . .

The creativity is very good, but the writing style needs to be improved, and some sentences are not fluent.

There are all games behind it and it feels very messy

Yeah! ! !

This is what our daily life would be like if there were chat groups and circles of friends in the Pirate World?

Why do I have such a far-fetched feeling?

I quite like this theme

Hope to write more chat content! ! ! Everyone interacts.

It feels like the protagonist has exhausted the development of this fruit.

It would be good if you could develop an upgrade using data and add some templates to defeat monsters. Otherwise, you can also take the route of the data world.

Is it a single heroine or no heroine? Author