Inheriting the Tao of Heavenly Master, the Infinity Begins with Dou Po

The subject matter is good, but the writing is poor. I said before that I have no ill feelings towards Xiao Yan, but I turned around and started to mess with him. I have been a cultivator in the Xiao family for ten years, so what kind of person can give out sword manuals to ward off evil spirits. Incomprehensible. It doesn't matter if he takes away the opportunity, after all, it's not his, but toying with people is going too far. He's still of the same race...

I haven't read any of the things mentioned in the introduction! Moreover, you have traveled to a fantasy world, and later you even traveled to Japanese comics! I really don't understand what the author is thinking! Anyway, after reading the introduction, I had no idea at all.

The writing is a bit young, and the way the system tasks are written is like those from a few years ago (the tasks revolve around the original protagonist being a nanny, not the new protagonist), and it is said that the original protagonist is the child of destiny, won't the current protagonist grow up? The so-called Son of Destiny means that everything from his birth to his growth was arranged by the Almighty. The Almighty secretly provided opportunities for him, and when the opportunities appeared, the original protagonist of Dou Po did not have these things. Only Ye Fan, who covers the sky, had the opportunity to be provided by the Almighty and ruthless man.

After seeing the evil sword skills and snatching Xiao Yan's ring, I quit. I was really speechless. I came back and read the author's introduction. Sure enough, it belongs to the type of happy middle school boy. Only those who write with a suicidal mind will put different types of worlds together. For example, the first one will cover the sky, the next Doraemon, and the next Golden Wedding... All of them are not systematic.

Such a thing came out of Longhu Mountain

I thought I could see a heavenly master who practices Taoism, and no matter how bad he is, I can see a Taoist who is steady, stable, and determined in dealing with people. What I didn't expect to see is just a bad guy who is worse than a gangster!

It doesn't really matter if you steal the ring or something, but I don't understand, where is the benefit of the protagonist from learning to refine medicine? The protagonist systems are all different. Isn't the best choice to give the ring to Xiao Xun'er? This author's style is really low. Dou Po is just the first springboard for the journey through the planes.

It's embarrassing. Although the protagonist in "Under One Person" is cheap, everything he does is upright. The protagonist is a Taoist priest directly from Longhu Mountain, who may have received the teachings of the Heavenly Master, and there are cheats. To lie to a "novel protagonist" like this is a bit embarrassing to Longhu Mountain. Even if you act arrogantly, no one will say anything. After all, you are still a Taoist priest from Longhu Mountain. Pride is normal. If you lie to others, it means you are not confident. If you are not confident, you are a shitty protagonist.

You have a system, but you still want to learn from Yao Chen? I'm really speechless, what did I write?

If you see a black bullet, just pay attention. After all, in this hopeless world, only Loli can heal me. Get a god status before going to that world. 8 Million loli believe in you. Then as their god, you have a small problem in perfectly integrating gastrula factors and human genes. After all, divine power is omnipotent. How about fishing a biologist over? Such as Orochimaru. It is still very easy to solve a virus.

Yes, this author has a future and knows how to look up professional knowledge, unlike those people who just talk nonsense and cultivate both life and life. Ancient my country has introduced it in detail. I recommend authors who write about fantasy and immortality to learn about it.

Without the three redundant tags below, I would have been attracted. Fortunately, with those three tags, I was successfully persuaded to quit 👍

It's a pity that such a good subject matter was wasted.

It's really well written. Don't write it next time.

Do you understand? Huoju is cursing! The serious one is called Sanju

A ring meant to reduce inflammation is of no use.

His character is too bad, he is so rich in resources, yet he covets the little opportunities of others, and he also inexplicably tries to cheat on others.

When I saw Gu Xun'er in the profile, I wasn't interested. Anyway, I don't have any good or bad feelings towards her. I just feel like a stranger. I don't want to know her and I'm not hostile.

I don't know what's wrong with people nowadays. Xiao Xun'er still liked Zhu Tiao when he was at his lowest. Isn't she a good girl? Do you like the kind of girl who empathizes with pigs when they are down?

Open a world collection post. If you have anything you want to see, please leave a message. The introduction is not everything, but I didn't think of so many at the same time. . .

What effect does Dou Po have on you? The training system cannot promote the growth of the protagonist. Is it just for showing off? That would be meaningless.

The leader of the giant poisonous country is here, all the evil spirits have dispersed, why are you so dead, Your Majesty?

This kind of person is worthy of being a heavenly master. Please don't insult my Taoism.

I don't understand why I'm trying to seize other people's opportunities even after I failed? I don't understand.

Everyone likes the protagonist's character, rationality and justice in behavior and thoughts. The subject matter is very good and I was attracted to it. But I have to rewrite it before I read it😂 Looking forward to the author's improvement

How did Shennong die? It's not entirely your fault, but you are really poisonous

You've been on my daily recommendation, is there any inside story?

A person must have a bottom line. Look at the protagonist of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Although he is called Han Laomo, he will not take the initiative to trick people unless he provokes him!

The plot framework of yours is really terrible. You might as well ask the studio to help you figure out the framework and write it slowly, ugh~

It would be great if the platform set a rule that you can no longer write novels as long as they are unfinished.