After Rebirth, I Can Actually Hear System Conversations

I think there are several reasons for the poor performance of this book.                                                                                                                                                                           There are not many people who read it (a lot of them may be old readers) because of the small audience. The story is set in the year 2000, and the protagonist is in elementary school, so the number of readers is probably limited to a very small range. I think this book might be more appealing to people with a memory bent. The second reason is the plot: I personally think this book focuses on family. The warm stories between classmates and some memories arouse readers' emotions. In comparison, the system is actually unimportant. The protagonist himself came back decades later, and he is a big cheat. Relying on system task rewards actually reduces the personal feelings of the protagonist. He returned to elementary school after twenty years and easily failed the exam and got money, which lacked the twists and turns of the plot. Try to recall the plot of the novel. Did you complete the exam easily in a few words, then the teacher praised you and gave out rewards, and then went to experience life in the year 2000? The third point I think is a problem with the structure and plot layout: each chapter does not have enough power to run through it. The things that promote the storyline seem to be only system tasks in my impression. However, it just so happens that the status of the system in this book is very insignificant and does not account for a large share of the plot. There is nothing new in terms of tasks. Currently, there are only exams, and then getting some money, and Money can buy things. It's hard to imagine how difficult it is for the author to conceive of the plot. After all, the protagonist can do very little. I have a little idea. The bottom line is that the protagonist provokes the gangster students. The parents of the gangster students come out to look for trouble, and then the protagonist's father comes out to solve the problem. In fact, I think we can single out the circle of giving money, and even reward strength potions to improve the system, reward knowledge, and patented technology. , And even for subordinates, the tasks can be expanded. Initially, it can be to help classmates improve their grades, and further to teach gangster classmates to be good people. It can also allow the protagonist to complete some things outside of school, or to escape from the small mountain village to experience relatively new things in this era, such as riding a roller coaster, unlocking the "Experience the Thrill" achievement, bungee jumping, rock climbing, unlocking the "Experience the Thrill Level 2" achievement, going to the tavern to unlock "Food is all around you", and going to rice Qilin Restaurant, Hilton Hotel, etc., You can also take cruises, planes, trains, long-distance buses, write a lot of thrilling stories without breaking away from the era itself, causing readers to more memories, for now there are very few that can arouse memories, too limited, and there is nothing to discuss. Childhood is more than these, and other books also have these, so there is no competition in comparison.

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When the protagonist was reborn, he was able to hear the system's voice... And the host the system found was his father? ... A few years later, The reporter asked the protagonist: "What is it that allows you to become the youngest doctor?" The protagonist said modestly: "No way? It is all the credit of my father." The protagonist looked at his father aside and listened to a voice that others could not hear. [Let the whole world know that the host teaches his son well. The task is completed. Reward: 10 million. When the crowd dispersed, the protagonist said to his father: "Dad, study funding." "How much?" "Ten million." The father glanced at the system task, helped the protagonist complete a scientific research, and was rewarded with one billion. Clenched his teeth, "Okay." ... How about my profile?

I am a gourmet food supplier who likes Caimao very much, but the results of Caimao's other books are not very good. Maybe it is because I have run out of ideas. One book squeezed Caimao dry. Moreover, the popularity of a book has also killed the author. The author's sorrow is that if the subject matter continues to be written, some people will scold her for not being enterprising. If she changes the style, some people will not like it, resulting in a decrease in revenue, which makes the author feel very frustrated. I don't know if Caimao is what I think. I only hope Caimao can regain his confidence and write more warm and interesting stories in the future.

Author, you started out as a food writer, but then you wanted to change your style, which was a bit too hasty, and ruined your popularity. You became a god in one book, and you went a step further. You can understand that people all have desires, but entering the palace directly was a bit unpopular, and you didn't write a food novel to stabilize your old fans. If you are like this, then you can It's rare to have a book club later, so it's better to just post a preview of a new book. Food-related ones will keep old fans. Although writing a book requires inspiration and you won't be able to write it for a while, you can put it off. If it doesn't work, you can still survive on your laurels. If it's because of the Qidian contract issue, and if you don't want to write novels in the future, treat it like I didn't say it.

Alas~ This author may have done too well with his first book, but as a result, he wanted to cut off the next few books if they were even slightly inferior. The book in the hotel can be said to be an external force, but the subsequent cuts became more and more abrupt, which really ruined his popularity. If he cuts frequently like this, no one will dare to believe that the author can finish the novel seriously.

After calming down, you find that you can't find a target after leaving the supplier. It is not good to follow the trend randomly. Since following the trend is not ideal, why can't you follow the trend yourself? Write about what you are good at, and then write about food.

My thoughts after reading Chapters 49 and 50. Zhuo Ye's personal biography: Zhuo Ye, male, born in 1968, was a high school classmate with the protagonist's father, Cheng Feng. He was deeply influenced by rock music when he was a student. He later formed a rock band with Cheng Feng and was the drummer of the band (Cheng Feng was the lead singer, and all the band's instruments were bought by band members from scrap metal and other garbage). The band later disbanded because Cheng Feng dropped out of high school! Zhuo Ye, who was admitted to Tongji University, did not give up rock and roll. Instead, he frantically learned various musical instruments, lyrics, song composition, and sang by himself. At a gathering of rock enthusiasts, Caimao's brother Caibao admired Zhuo Ye, an all-round player who could play, sing, and create. He took the trouble to ask for all kinds of rock knowledge, and threatened to introduce his sister, who was studying in Fudan, to Zhuo Ye! However, Caimao, who claims to be a modern Li Qingzhao and a replica of Lin Huiyin, has a sweetheart who is a scholar like Su Shi and Liu Zongyuan. He naturally rejects Zhuoye who is slightly non-mainstream, so he does not like to see the rock duo. Rock madman Zhuo Ye doesn't care. He thinks Caimao doesn't understand rock and can't get the charm of rock. He wants to use real rock to open Caimao's heart. This persistence lasted until the first semester of senior year. Cai Mao and her boyfriend who is a Chinese language major who is good at braised pork are carefully planning for graduation. The king of rock and roll Zhuo Ye failed too many subjects because of his obsession with rock and was dismissed from the school and returned to his hometown in a small county! The double blow of studies and love made Zhuoye hide his rock and roll dream, open a mechanical repair shop, and bow to life! So this is why Zhuoye's store has not only motorcycles, but also guitars, drums, basses, accordions, erhus, harmonicas, suonas, etc.! The most important thing is that there are all Lin Huiyin's works on the bedroom bookshelf. After all, I still can't forget her - Caimao.

The attractive beauty of the food and the warm stories interspersed between each food are not just a slap in the face through the system. Daily life is the best part to write about. The other things are like salt and seasonings. If the staple food is not good, no matter how good the salt and seasonings are written, they are just rotten wood carvings.

Remember, wasn't it already platinum or a great god before? If you want to change the system, you can stick to the writing style and daily stories, but the content does not need to be the same. When I first read the food vendors, I was really curious about the various dishes, but if I kept reading, it was a heartwarming story. It's not because of the books I read systematically

How do you think Dad Cheng will spend his one million?

Did Cai Mao eunuch this book? This is the first genuine book I plan to read in its entirety! I sometimes find out if I have received some negative buff! After graduation, due to some reasons, I needed to be transferred from Guangdong to another city. As a result, I got injured and was forced to resign! I just changed jobs this year, and I was going to attend induction training at the Beijing headquarters on December 20, 2021, but the epidemic broke out in Xi'an! I haven't seen any human resources since I joined the company. 😥 The first book I was going to read was a genuine one, but ended up being eunuched. (Of course Caimao's body is the most important thing, I just feel very tired). Am I possessed by a degenerate spirit? Should I find a Taoist priest to exorcise the demon?

Since the hotel, I haven't read a book about Cai Mao for a long time, and I thought it would be quite fat, but I didn't expect it! ! ! You have actually "finished" two books😓

I think it's better to write about suppliers. Food suppliers and hotel suppliers are quite nice, although hotel suppliers are a bit of a pity.

It's okay to write a sequel to Food Supplier. As long as the food in it is changed, it can even be linked with food animation or food movies. With the author's writing skills, it is not difficult to attract readers. There is no need to break through and write other types of novels.

It can be said that Caimao's food articles are still very good even now, but I don't know why they stopped working later? The most important thing about the food book is not all kinds of food It's a series of heartwarming stories about daily life. I actually think the second one is okay, but Caimao seems to want to change after being affected by external forces. But Caimao's advantage is not here. For example, if you ask the fantasy Chen Dong to write urban novels, it will definitely not work. Think about it carefully. Although food articles are not very popular now, you can open a book first, such as more than one million words, to win back the popularity, and then think about it again. I feel that Caimao can try daily life novels, such as Sister Hua's novel from a thousand years ago. Finally, I hope Caimao can write better novels.

This book is okay, why is it a eunuch? The same goes for hotel suppliers, who are chasing after each other like eunuchs.

It will be hard for Food Supplier if there are no books with more than one million words in the future. Is the author now opening a small account?

The author opened a trumpet, an alien version of the food supplier

How to write an alien version of a food supplier

The hotel writes very well, but it's a pity that I'm not allowed to write about it.

The third person finished reading

Tomato is not the author, I feel like there is a big gap in writing.

Why don't you write about food and cooking? It's so good.

The author has exhausted his talents, and it is a short-lived flash in the pan. He might as well come back and continue to be a food supplier!

We've just begun and the book is over?

I only read books written in 2001 😁

Come on, find your own strengths and keep writing. It makes sense for an author to write a popular book

Gone? This is gone?