Thrust Starts from the Helm

There are too many typos in this book. I hope the author can correct them. I feel that many words have not been reviewed by the author. They are all homophonic words, and some are even wrong.

It's not the same thing as pushback. People are going to kill you, but your protagonist still feels aggrieved because he didn't do anything bad. You still think it's wrong for someone to kill you. Is that all? Brother... The key point is that you are a hostile force to begin with, what does it have to do with doing bad things? Are you ready to let others go? Pig's feet real virgin watch

What's behind? The donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong

Why is it half a step, half a step? This realm

What the hell is a half-step high-level evil spirit? This state is really too insensitive.

This is a children's book, identification completed!

Um, I entered the dungeon world before the main world was finished. I thought I would return in a few chapters, but I ended up writing so many chapters. The more dungeons I wrote, the more the plot became torn apart. By the time I returned, I had almost forgotten the plot of the main world 🤫. Shouldn't the main world be the main one?

Thank you for reminding me. I just came back from the project and have corrected the wrong places, 🙂🙂🙂

There are so many typos, how can people read it?

I read it for a long time and didn't understand what it was about. If you want to write about evil spirits, why don't you write it well?

Two chapters have been written about the battle. What you really thought was wonderful is just an old lady's foot wrap - smelly and long.

After reading a few more chapters, the second dungeon is about blood hunting, and the fruit that can get special powers should be from Japanese comics. In addition, the mention of "Ten Thousand Stars" is probably the positioning of this book to travel through various dungeon worlds. If I don't like to keep changing maps before the main world is finished, I would have to write each dungeon for the main line and shorten the main world. Otherwise, after writing so much about the main world, I suddenly don't write the main world and keep writing dungeons. I thought that after the first dungeon was completed, it would take a while to digest, absorb and develop in the main world.

Wolf, William Adams, Axiu, and the despicable outsiders said that it turns out that the experience I gained from gambling my life is called a skill?

It's very frustrating to watch, why are you so pushy? A lot of things are poorly written. I was still interested before chapter 10, but I collapsed after chapter 10.

I'm just not happy at all. That genre or something is very uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, if the chapters are divided into one, two, and three, it will feel uncomfortable to look at it. It is better to merge one chapter. How many people will read all the chapters chapter by chapter?

I just want to know, is this martial arts or fantasy?,,,,,, It's not the same as martial arts, martial arts is martial arts! Still full of evil spirits,

The world written by the author is strange and strange

When it comes to completing dungeons, I still like to wear it. I originally thought it was Thanos punching the flesh, but you ended up with a soul-piercing attack.

What kind of track is the big track? Your beginning makes people feel uninterested.

I can tolerate many typos, but the Virgin Bitch couldn't bear it and left.

Wei Wei opened his mouth and there was no taste left.

I can't understand it, all kinds of weird classifications

It was pretty good at first, but as soon as Zhou Ming and Xiao Bi appeared on the stage, I couldn't stand it anymore!