Zhutian: Starting from a Perfect World

In fact, the writing is very good, and it is comfortable to read. It is indeed different to review the timeline of the perfect world from the perspective of fan fiction.

Why would Doupo be so weak to capture Xiaoyan and return him to Earth to be sentenced?

If there was such a time traveler, he kicked over Shi Hao's milk can, spread Chu Feng's lolita photos throughout the universe, gave Ji Ziyue a photo of Ye Fan who wet the bed when he was a child, smashed the tombstone of ruthless brother, beat his dad in front of Qin Yu, and flirted with Ji Ning. Playing Yu Wei, Meng Qi loudly called him the Thunder Sword Mad Monk, wore a monocle in front of Klein, encouraged Nalan Yanran to break off the engagement, proposed marriage to the Luo Shen Clan, sided with Hong Xuanji in the court, and stole materials from Chen Ang's laboratory. How long can this time traveler live?

I came here for the ultimate honor, but I don't know what grade the author graduated from. He can't divide paragraphs into words, and he can't even use punctuation marks.

Author, use your brain holes and give you this book "The Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power" (Perfect World Edition). You can use the Blood Moving Realm to suppress the Corpse Immortal Emperor, and you will be considered a peerless genius!

The force value or system of this life is really based on words. In terms of combat power and destructive power, it is completely outclassed by the Zhetian system, not to mention the world of divine machine systems. Squid Girl's novels are like this. Basically, they look mysterious, but in fact they are weak in action. This is also a major weakness of Squid. Looking at the popularity of his novels and peripheral development, there is no comparison with other great gods!

The first novel is already pretty good, usually with a good setting and good writing, but did you ever feel like it felt rushed? I didn't read it fluently, but overall it was very, very good.

The One Who Is the Other Side of the World: Every living being is born in the sea of ​​suffering, and cultivation is to escape from the sea of ​​suffering. If the realm of creation is just about being able to cross the sea of ​​suffering, then the other shore, as the name suggests, is already standing on the shore. They have become unique in the entire time and space. All things are but a dream in their hands. They look back to the past, occupy the future, control countless timelines, and occupy all kinds of possibilities. They are the will of God. Only the other side can fight against the other side, and only God's will can fight against God's will. They have no weak period, because time is their plaything. In the realm of the other side, the fruit of illusion has become real, but it only takes half a step. If you want to go one step further, you have to go back to the time when the world first opened, and the Half-Way Fruit turned into the prototype of the Tao Fruit. At this time, no matter when the person on the other side achieved enlightenment, in the eyes of all living beings, he is the ancient person who has existed since the beginning of the world. However, Tao and Fruit are unknowable and undiscussable. It is wrong to say it and fallacious to think about it. All guesses about Tao and Fruit are wrong. Coffin Trilogy: It can be seen from here that the Immortal Emperor's combat power is superior to that of the other side. Once the immortal emperor's field blocks the true form of the other side, the other side will also fall. But the Immortal Emperor has a big shortcoming. After the Immortal Emperor falls, he can be resurrected with a single thought. However, once the Immortal Emperor is killed, unless the Immortal Emperor of the same level is qualified to remember, no one in the world will remember him, and there is no possibility of resurrection. Of course, for the Immortal Emperor, he will never fall. Even if he is killed, he will not die or even be injured. But once you fall, you are really dead, and the sky is vast, and the Immortal Emperor will also be lost. The memory of the Immortal Emperor in the world is itself a beacon. Without this beacon, the Immortal Emperor will be lost forever. But those on the other side do not have this shortcoming. There will be no weakness in the past or in the future. When you reach the level of worshiping the Tao, you will burn the Tao and destroy the past, present and future. At this level, the Immortal Emperor has no shortcomings and will never be lost. All the past and future related to him have been burned away. There is no trace of the existence of the priest in the long river of time, and those on the other side cannot affect the priest at all in the long river of time. The ancient ones traced the timeline back to the time when the world first opened, and the Half-Way Fruit turned into the prototype of the Tao Fruit. Obviously the ancients and the priests are in two opposite directions. One goes back to the beginning of the world, and the other burns away the past and present and the future! How does the author combine these two contradictory systems?

When did the girl with double eyes become the Immortal King, but she was not the most powerful leader, not even the Supreme. In the original work, she was imprisoned in the Temple of Enlightenment when she broke through the realm.

Author, didn't you say that the protagonist's incarnation of the supreme true Buddha is not a deity = supreme? Why can't you kill a group of sect leaders who came down from 3,000 Daozhou, and they were even injured?

The order of this world is a bit confusing, everything is perfect, why do you still want to fight, mortals... To bully a group of lower beings?

The combination of the first life and the perfect system is poorly written. At first glance, it seems that the outline was not written well at the beginning, and it was forcibly pieced together, and the protagonist's major system was not determined. The writing of the dungeon is also very scattered. It is best to learn how to write the Zhutianliu of the great master. The plot of the first life chapter ends in a hurry and the plot is messy. The protagonist in the early stage of perfection feels like he has no distinctive characteristics. The author needs to carefully revise the outline and lay the groundwork, and build up the internal logic of the protagonist's practice system. Traveling through the heavens must either focus on the experience of system collision, or presuppose that the exercises are universal in all heavens. It feels too awkward to have a perfect method in one life. Summary: The idea is good, but the writing is not enough. It has some exciting points but many poisonous points. It is neither good nor bad. Readers are advised to choose carefully.

Plagiarized articles, since the beginning of the perfect world, are much better than this, even those written by elementary school students are better than this

The system of cultivating a supreme being in a perfect world is nothing more than trying to use him and me to play in the past and future. Only the Immortal Emperor can ignore such a trilogy of great causes and effects, which is obviously impossible. Under the Immortal Emperor, anyone who dares to play like this will be backlashed by the great cause and effect every minute. Shi Hao transformed himself into an eternal reverse life. The reason for the eighth life is that it does not belong to any history, and it has not interfered with the history of the Emperor's Fall Era. It is like a dream. If you use it to go back to the past, in the future, either the Immortal King will be killed according to the cause and effect, or he will be killed by the quasi-Immortal Emperor. Shi Hao and Emperor Yu only dare to walk around many time and space nodes.

How many oaths does the protagonist make in his heart? When someone gives you something, he makes an oath in his heart.

This is the first time I have seen someone confuse one life with perfection. The cause and effect of the one life is too great.

The protagonist's name is Shower. I feel that it would be better to turn into Shi Qingfeng with the surname Shi. After that, no matter whether I escape or go out on the 10th, I have to deal with Shi Cun. Isn't it better to be surnamed Shi? What do you think, author? ⊙_⊙

I remember those realms in the early stages of my life were just ordinary martial arts levels, right? Is it possible to move 100,000 pounds of blood perfectly?

The Holy Ruins is too outrageous. The great sage in Zhetianli can only dominate a star field and cannot even move across a large area in the universe. In the Holy Ruins, he has reached the level of a single target.

It's not a novel worth reading. It's creative, but it's not well written. The first is the issue of the protagonist's personality. I feel that the protagonist's personality is unified with that of the characters in Perfect. The protagonist is not like a time traveler, but like an original native who has gained an opportunity. Secondly, the protagonist's cultivation aspect is very spread out, without any integration, and very fragmented. The biggest attraction of Zhutianliu is that the integration of the cultivation system makes the protagonist more powerful. The bigger the imagination, the more people will read it. But this book is completely reversed. The techniques of other worlds are not the same. It is suitable for the current world. The protagonist does not want to learn from the current world's martial arts to improve, but wants to go to the original world of the martial arts to solve the problem. I don't have a ten-year-old blood clot to come up with this plot. The world where the martial arts originated does not know the world laws of the world you are in. How can you be determined? Do you rely on guessing?

The author keeps weakening the protagonist, which is boring

After reading this introduction, you will know that you have to put your IQ on the ground.

It's been a while since I've updated. Is this going to be abandoned?

There is no supreme next generation in the Three Thousand Daozhou, there is only Dun Yi, and Qin Changsheng is only the son of Dun Yi.

The new year is over, why are we still updating at this rate?

It looks a little strange. . . .

Damn it, I really went to fight to capture Xiao Yan and bring him back to Earth for trial.