The Road to Heaven Starting from Wudang

It's a bit nonsense, but on the subject: Song Qingshu is the eldest brother, and can be said to be the head of their generation. In terms of privacy, the protagonist and Song Qingshu have been brothers for many years, and it was his father who saved his life. No matter how awesome Zhang Wuji is, he will do my shit! If you choose between the two of them, you will definitely support Song! If something really happens, he must be helping Song conceal it. As long as Song kills Zhang without knowing it, he will definitely pretend not to know if he kills him secretly! What's the benefit of picking things out? As for Mingjiao? Most of them are not good! (Even if they resist the Yuan! On the other hand, if they don't resist the Yuan, there will be no one left? They are just trying to win the dragon!)

The writing in the early stages was okay, but the later it got, the more brainless and miscellaneous it became. We are here to see the fanfic, not the original work. If the fan writing is not good, the original work cannot be copied well. Not sure what the purpose of system tasks is? It is better not to do system tasks. The subsequent character settings and background settings are getting more and more nonsense. A Chinese Ghost Story is written in the world of Lotus Lantern? ? ? The power system is so different, is it necessary to write about it? It's better not to write anything, just to cheat on the number of words in this hydrology. 😅

It's well written, I need to speed it up.

Can you tell me about your request for leave earlier🙄️

When I read Chapter 48, I was really shocked by the scene where the protagonist met Ji Xiaofu. The protagonist looked like a feudal ethical Taoist. Is this really a person who traveled from modern times? Even if Ji Xiaofu is going to die, Master Miejie will clean up the family. Does it need you, a junior, to shout and kill? Did Lao Zhang approve it? Did the Wu-Tang Seven give orders? It is understandable that Ji Xiaofu wants to kill Ji Xiaofu, because she has no concept of freedom of marriage and love in her mind. There is only a contradiction between good and evil, and only the reputation of the sect comes first. Why would the protagonist criticize Ji Xiaofu like this? Lao Zhang doesn't care, why do you care? Zhang Cuishan brought Yin Susu back. Does Lao Zhang care about the reputation of the sect? What's more, it's not like the protagonist has never read the original work. Isn't it awkward to act in such a pretentious way?

The author only uses two ways to promote the plot. One is that the protagonist is young, only fifteen or sixteen, and is always looked down upon, conflicts, and slapped in the face. The second is that others don't know the protagonist and regard the protagonist as an impostor, and say, "If you were the Wudang Sword God, I would be Zhang Sanfeng." The protagonist smiled slightly and did not care about such insults to his master. After that, others provoked the protagonist again and again, forcing the protagonist to show his martial arts and slap him in the face, and then he was horrified to know that the sword god was in front of him. This kind of comedy conflict method is fine if used two or three times, but it is too low if used repeatedly. Also, the protagonist forced Ji Xiaofu to death in front of Yang Buhui. This plot was too poisonous. Let's not talk about forcing her mother to death in front of a child, but if you dare to force a dog-licking goddess to death, will Yin Liting feel free of pain in the future? Just like you beat up Azi and teach You Tanzhi a lesson, just wait and see whether You Tanzhi can mess with you or not! This kind of trouble between men and women is the most difficult to deal with. It is clear that Jue is going to kill Ji Xiaofu, but the protagonist still has to block it first and then force her to death himself. He just has to kill her with his own hands. Is it to arouse hatred for Jue?

The protagonist was always moved by himself. I don't know what the author's experience was when he wrote it. Anyway, I felt embarrassed when I saw it.

The protagonist has practiced Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, the eighth level, Wudang Nine Yang Kung Fu to the extreme, swordsmanship and sword intention, and Jiuyin's muscle-changing and bone-forging skills. Then he was beaten to vomit blood by Shi Huolong's Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. Isn't this the collapse of combat power?

The protagonist is invincible, and others still call him Shaoxia. This shows that the author really has huge flaws in the details.

Xie Xun slaughtered your whole family, you saved Zhang Wuji's family, the author is also a true holy mother

It's quite annoying to want to help Zhang Wuji despite having a grudge against Xie Xun!

I feel like the protagonist's strength and temperament don't match. At first he said he wanted to do whatever he wanted, but when he was stimulated later he felt all kinds of pain, anger, entanglement, and loss of reason.

Three years of sharpening a sword was a failure. In fact, the plot and character design were much better if Zhang Sanfeng directly killed Pa Siba and then returned to Wudang to explain how to ascend leisurely. In order to leave Pasiba to the protagonist to defeat, it is too forced. In order to upgrade the protagonist, a plot of running away from home and sharpening his sword for three years was added, which made the protagonist childish and irresponsible. Pretending to be a ghost, the protagonist dressed neatly and calmly told his master Song Yuanqiao... It was my fault that the founder ascended today. In order to prevent Pasiba from relapse after recovering from his injury, and to end this century-old dispute between Buddhism and Taoism, I went into seclusion in the back mountain in order to seek a breakthrough. Then Zhu Yuanzhang defeated the Yuan Dynasty, but was blocked by Basiba. The protagonist came out to end the century-old war, and his merits were complete. Open the next copy. The protagonist is very young, so he should be brave and decisive, and don't make him look like the elderly Li Chungang.

I don't understand Zhang Sanfeng's promotion. Why does the protagonist blame himself so much? He didn't die. And isn't Wudang a Taoist sect? Zhang Sanfeng is a Taoist himself, and it's a bit strange that the protagonist becomes a monk.

What is Jianghu? Travel to the ends of the world with your sword, and travel freely between heaven and earth! But the character of the protagonist is too awkward, he is falsely prudish, falsely moral, and falsely temperamental. Invisibly, I want to show off, and what's more terrible is that I want to show off and be so fake and hypocritical.

The protagonist's kung fu fluctuates between high and low, and Jin Yong's book has an incorrect outlook. Hehe, who doesn't know what this beggar gang is?

This novel is so fucked up. The author would not write a novel where the protagonist is too ruthless and unprincipled. I don't know if I want to help Zhang Wuji's enemy's adopted son. No principles, still ruthless.

Becoming a disciple of Qingyun instantly brought the protagonist's character from the sky to the stinking ditch! I really don't think the ceiling of Zhu Xian's world is that high. It seems that the longevity has not exceeded the one thousand years mark! The combat power of Taiqing Realm is probably equivalent to that of Nascent Soul! The protagonist's current combat power is estimated to be similar to that of Yuqingjing!

Others say "Three Golden Chapters", but you are just saying "Three Golden Chapters" just to disgust readers!

The more I write, the more rubbish I get, and I have the dragon-elephant Prajna Kung Fu. Defeated by a mortal creature like a wolf. Stand there and let the wolf bite you without breaking the skin.

The author has not read Jin Yong's novels carefully. There are too many mistakes in the article. The protagonist in the novel is self-righteous, smart, and has a crotch-shaped character. The other characters are completely different from those in the original novel. You have to make a character who is not described in the original novel and still accept it. The characters with full-bodied characters in the original novel become completely unrecognizable in your novel, and they sell dog meat in sheep's heads.

Supported the killing of Zhao Min. At that time, she was completely a foreign invader. I don't know how many martial arts people in the Central Plains were killed. In the original work, only Zhang Wuji, a weakling who has no sense of justice, can protect Zhao Min, a witch.

I don't understand why Pasiba is set to be so strong that he can fight against Lao Zhang. The Quanzhen Sect is inferior to every generation. Li Zhichang's qualifications are not even as good as those of Zhao Zhijing and Yin Zhiping. His cultivation to the extreme is the level of Qiu Chuji and Ouyang Ke of the Shooting Condor. Even if Ba Si Ba can crush him, the upper limit is only the level of Two Theory, Five Jue and Golden Wheel. The maximum is ten levels of Dragon Elephant. How can he possibly be able to practice 13 levels. Lao Zhang's cultivation is unmatched in the trilogy, and it is also at the top level in Tianlong (it's hard to say who is higher than the Sweeping Monk and the Peak Ergua). The upper limit of the two theories and five skills is five books in Tianlong Temple. Compared with Lao Zhang, this strength is like a pearl of rice.

I have read 56% of the book and I don't want to continue reading it. The writing skills are very good, but the plot structure is not good. I suggest you finish it early and honestly write a book about Zhutian Fanren to learn from. The Yitian part is actually okay. After the second copy is mixed with a few books, it is just a hammer. If you can't write the main line, let the system push the plot. Don't make a system with a high degree of freedom and then don't write the outline yourself.

The three views of the righteous are not worth watching. The villains are all brainless. They will provoke pigs' feet without brains. They will not stop even if they suffer a loss. They will not stop until they are killed. They will always be moved by themselves and are worthless. This routine was popular more than ten years ago.

The main rubbish in this book is that the author has not read The Legend of Heaven and Slaying the Dragon seriously but writes about fan fiction here.

The writing style is not bad but it uses all kinds of poisonous points to get the better of it!

The beginning is very good, and it can be seen that the author's writing style and ideas are very good! The copy of Yitian was unbearable after watching it. The protagonist was drunk several times and survived. Also, the martial arts turned into immortals. In the end, the system was useless. . . Actually, if the author had followed the same routine as he did at the beginning, it would have been pretty good, but it's a pity. . .

I'm confused. You, the author, traveled to a world, but you killed or turned some of the most popular characters in this world into passers-by. So what's the point of choosing this world to write about? I'm not saying you can't kill, but I don't quite understand your writing ideas. Do you think what makes readers happy when you write like this is just to watch you kill or send away popular characters one by one, and then watch the protagonist interact with some passers-by? confused

After reading the latest chapter, although I like Zhao Min very much, I think there is nothing wrong with the author killing her. Like Yang Xiao or Wei Yixiao, I think the author wants to truly treat the protagonist as a person in this world, not a bystander. Many Zhutianliu protagonists are more like God's perspective, just playing a copy of the game. In fact, it is not interesting to watch too much. The writing style almost doesn't matter, as long as the ideas are clear. Let's talk about the Xie Xun issue. I helped Zhang Wuji because of Wudang. The protagonist or the author did not say whether to kill Xie Xun or not. Don't make malicious guesses, but I think there is a clear bottom line for the protagonist. After all, the protagonist is just a soul traveler. Of course I think Xie Xun can kill, or commit suicide like Ji Xiaofu.