The All-Time Mage: the Only Immortal

Seeing that there is no heroine now? In the original novel, Mu Ningxue and Ye Xinxia were clearly identified in the first few chapters. This book is good. I have gay friends one after another. Girls don't have it. You're really good at it, author. 🤫 Without girls, half of the motivation is lost. And the protagonist doesn't have Mo Fan's cool sense of pretentiousness. 😒😒😒 There's no motivation to go on like this.

I hope the timeline will be written sooner, otherwise it will be like other fanfics where I follow Mo Fan all the way to grab opportunities, and I will get tired of reading it.

The time traveler wants to steal the protagonist, opportunity and woman

I hope you can continue to update it, it's not enough

Support is here, I will collect comments for you and follow up three times in a row. Please write harder.

The last few chapters have been too bland. They say they are about cultivating immortals, but the methods still feel poor. It seems that the protagonist can refine magic tools, but he is only a little stronger than most people. If the protagonist's secondary job is awesome, then it should be written around the secondary job. If the protagonist is talented in combat, it should be written around combat. If everything is written in a bland way, it will be too ordinary. It feels like the protagonist is just expected to make achievements in a certain area, and then jumps to another area, lacking a climax.

I would like to ask the author, what is the timeline of this book?

First again

The protagonist has been written as an orphan, so the character should be made colder. I am still looking forward to cultivating immortals and magic, but don't mess with the Holy Mother.

Work together

Very good, when will you have some magical powers? Cultivation to immortality without magical powers is incomplete.

In fact, the pacing of this book is pretty good, but there is only one poisonous point: the system is swallowed up, and it will be very uncomfortable if this is not resolved in the later stage. I guess you have additional ideas and want to show these swallowed systems in another way.

I can't figure it out. Where is the violation? No matter how I issue it, it won't work.

Are they at the same time as Mo Fan?