The Peerless Tang Sect's Demonic Eyes Burning the Sky

Damn it, Huo Yuhao was written as a female. I really don't understand the psychology of an author who writes about sex change. After a quick glance at the first few chapters, I think it's pretty good. Damn, I insist on writing Huo Yuhao as a female. It's just disgusting and disgusting. If she's a male, and you force her to be a female, she'll still be the female protagonist. It's so uncomfortable, it's disgusting to death

I feel that the author can exceed the number of words in the original work 😏

It's too open and boring. It's really too much to hang up.

Is there a section missing from Chapter 69? Something feels wrong

Not to mention the plot, you can modify the fanfic however you want. Just talking about the character, the main character is too childish. There is a huge mountain of prejudice in people's minds. This protagonist only makes friends with the characters in the plot and ignores his roommate management at the beginning of the semester. The key to wonderful fan fiction is that it has to be a real world, and you have to have your own worldview. If you are like this, I might as well read the original work. Your own world view + small details in the original work (the speculation behind it) + appropriate cheats (imagination) + excellent writing = wonderful fan fiction

As we all know, in Douluo fan works, there must be one or the other of "powerful golden finger", "water word count to make money" and "protagonist's talent". 1. If the protagonist has a strong golden finger and normal talent, then with the shallowness of Douluo Chizi, the protagonist will soon reach the peak. The author has nothing to write and cannot achieve the goal of making money with just a few words 2. If the protagonist has normal talent, the author If the author wants to make money with a low number of words, given the shallowness of Douluo Chi, then he must not give the protagonist a too powerful golden finger 3. If the author wants to use a powerful golden finger as a gimmick to attract people, and also wants to make money with a low number of words, then the protagonist will inevitably become a waste that even the system cannot handle.

The concept map can be used as a rough reference. Others need to be imagined by yourself

This protagonist is a FW, no kidding, after seven years and level 28, no other FW can compare to that. If you want to write a level 28, don't do so many tricks. Isn't this just disgusting! I was really poisoned.

. . . . No The protagonist doesn't know that Yuhao is a woman So subjectively, the protagonist is flirting with a man and a woman at the same time? . . . Can't you just talk about opening up when writing about sissy? It's so uncomfortable to watch It's the same as TM's two-way plug Isn't it disgusting?

Are you slow to warm up? You damn meow is all Shui. Jiang Nannan has only appeared in a few pictures, and there is nothing to describe. Every day is Wang Donghuo's rubbish relationship history. You Shui, can you please stop using "slow heat" as an excuse? It's rubbish.

By the way, do you think the protagonist relies too much on external objects and should develop more martial arts?

It is indeed too watery. You wrote more than 170 chapters of the thirty-six chapters of the original novel.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I strongly recommend that the three of them have already noticed each other's gender, otherwise it will become more and more awkward. We are acting as the protagonist. From the perspective of the protagonist, the woman he likes lives with a man, and there are so many close contacts. He also licks Huo Yuhao crazily, engages in Nantong, sends various resources, and there is also the part about Electrolux. How about you not write that you actively chose the protagonist at the beginning, and later write that the thing is returned to the original owner, and you forcefully provide reasons, which is inconsistent. There are also Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong. They are obviously the protagonists they like, but they can still accept the close contact between themselves and another man. So who do you like? It makes people feel emotionally hesitant, and we have a feeling of NTR from the perspective of the protagonist. It is best if both parties realize that the other is a woman from the beginning, and then the protagonist also realizes that Huo Yuhao is not actually a man. In this way, the previous behavior will be much more reasonable and will not make readers feel so awkward.

There are 500 pieces of Poseidon in the original plot, and there are more than 700 of them. It's not here yet. I feel like it will be unfinished sooner or later. Drink☕

I was speechless after reading Chapter 30. Others don't know what happened to Huo Yuhao, but the protagonist still doesn't know? The protagonist needs resources, and has no shortage of skills and techniques to cultivate Huo Yuhao. How could he put such a potential stock in the Tang Sect? How did you grow your brain? ? ? There are a lot of weird operations and poisonous points ahead.

Do any brothers recommend some books with Huo Gua as the female protagonist? All the books I have followed have ended up in the palace.

I really can't hold on any longer. There has been no progress at all in the main plot for so long. The original book is not that watery. It is watery, and the emotional line is watery. I didn't know that Huo Gua was a woman before, so I can write whatever you want, but now they are showing off their cards, and they deliberately don't develop it further and just forcefully fill it in. It's really not as exciting as the emotional line written by Tang Mou earlier. I didn't say that this book is bad. I really don't know when the male and female protagonists will be resolved. Now there are more than 600 chapters and it's still watery according to the meaning. Alas.

In other words, we readers are tolerant enough. We stopped writing for a year before writing. Normal books have died long ago. I hope I can finish it in one go this time without stopping writing again. I guess it is almost finished.

Huo Yuhao is so cute, why is he not the heroine 🥺

Hurry up and update, the author will come back soon. I have been following this novel intermittently for almost three years since I was isolated at home for 22 years. What I look forward to every day is the update. If this book is about eunuchs, it will be a regret in my heart 😭😭

I want to live longer than the author

Dear friends, I want to upgrade and evolve Jiang Nannan's martial spirit. I don't know what you think. Suggestions are welcome!

Dude, it's really updated. That's right, all the monthly votes have been cast.