My Wife and I Are Both Reborn

If anyone is watching, please give me your opinion. As a novice single player, I am really afraid of going astray. It's still in the early stages of the book, and I can still make changes in the middle and later stages, but I'm most afraid that I won't be able to make changes later.

There may be some content in the front that will be 404. Anyway, it has been 404 several times, and the editor has not invited me to join the group. Can you let me know what can and cannot be written? The outline has been revised. You are a motherless child who often swallows my words for no reason. Please tell me if you see a brother who has swallowed the word. He either jumped off a building or fell in love early. Of course, he also has a name in the entertainment industry.

Did I read that correctly? It seems that it has not been updated? ? ?

Alas, it's probably going to be cold and won't be updated for 5 days. Blind all night long.

After reading it, I would like to share my thoughts briefly. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are well written. The high school plot is relatively relaxed and moderate, neither too sweet nor too sadistic. The length is appropriate. (After all, it seems to be a dog food novel.) The romance in the school is not too over the top, and I didn't get tired of reading it in one sitting. What is better written is the struggle between the male and female protagonists and their parents. The images of these parents are relatively distinct and interesting, and their impact on the plot is relatively natural. If it is not well written, it means that the characters are tools and disgusting. . It is said to be mildly suspenseful, but I was really worried about being criticized by the school, and then the phone card was pulled out in the middle of the night, which created a sense of conspiracy. . The final reveal was actually a relief. . If you take a closer look, this conspiracy is indeed a bit shallow There is basically no sub-plot. If I want to say it, it is a mystery of the past life in the dream. However, the connection with the main plot is not very close at present. It is only shown in the dream, and then I mentioned it to the heroine. The allusion to reality or the impact on the characters is currently very low. I will wait and see. In addition, I would like to say that there are actually many love stories of this kind that do not have subplots, but it is not easy to write too long. I prefer to give out dog food, but it still depends on the author's ideas. In addition, someone mentioned the issue of the heroine's mother. I don't think it is too exaggerated at the moment. After all, there is always resistance, right? The male and female protagonist's parents are actually written quite well. As long as the explanation is reasonable and promotes the story without being too procrastinating, it will be good. As for the plot, the next one should be the college chapter. The currently reincarnated female protagonist is much more proactive, while the male protagonist is basically still in a passive and weak position. With the heroine overdrawing so many future romantic stories in advance, I am very curious about how the hero will work hard to impress this mentally older heroine. Looking forward to what kind of romantic stories they will bring later. Generally speaking, as a campus love genre, it is at least good. New authors are also commendable. Come on 🙂 There are not many people reading it. If you have the opportunity, you can recommend it more.

I want to know what the meaning of that night in the introduction is, how can I see that the introduction has the meaning of 🐮

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What should I say, author, I don't understand now that you are writing a fantasy novel?

It's well written, and the writing style is quite sophisticated. Personally, I feel that the setting is not very good. Although the rebirth is mainly based on dog food, the sub-plot has not yet come out. Maybe the author arranged the sub-plot in the university. Is the male protagonist reborn or something? I don't understand. Then there's the fantasy novels that don't turn into urban dog food. I've read too many novels that are different from each other, and I don't want a novel with such a good starting point to be ruined. Come on, author! ! !

Raised for a few days. . . As a result, he died like this. . . .

Is the male protagonist reborn or something? I looked confused.

Overall, it's pretty good, but Xie Dongqing in the middle is a bit uncomfortable. To be honest, I don't think it's necessary to write about Xie Dongqing.

It looks good, but why is it related to fantasy again 😅

Fantasy and dog food are mixed together. It always feels strange. I seem to understand why not so many people have watched it.