The Powerful Men from All over the World Who Emerged from the Original God

The emperor once said when he went on an expedition: "Who will clean up the rock slimes on the road?"

My mentality is broken, brothers. After playing the three card pools for more than 200, you can get two golds, and the average is 132 for one gold. (Travellers are gold, the three card pools include the novice card pool) The African Emirates was outrageous. It cost 328 krypton for the first time. I thought it was quite expensive, but something went wrong! My mentality collapsed, which made the already poor family even worse. Can you find anyone worse than me? If you find it, two chapters will be added immediately (only once) So just give it a try today, your mentality will explode.

There is a problem. The protagonist is a demon with memories, and his combat power is not low. After the demon war is over, the plot results are almost exactly the same. Guo Ba, Guo Ba, Gan Yu's mother, Ruo Tuo, etc. Even if they are not necessarily saved, the role of the protagonist must be seen. What it was before is still what it is now, and even the process has not changed. It feels like simply inserting the protagonist into those legends, everything else remains unchanged. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

The author's brain circuit is clear enough. He completely forgot about the wife who has been with the protagonist for decades, and turned around and wanted to marry her. Yes, it was just a decoration. It was the first time for this and the first for that. Emotionally, it was just a blank slate. Who were you kidding? 😤

It's a bit uncomfortable to watch now, because of the female protagonist Ying. In the game, I feel that the relationship between Gan Yu and Ying is like friends and seniors. When the author writes Ying as the female protagonist, it feels like a friend turned mother, which is very uncomfortable. Personally, I think it's normal for the male protagonist to be a demon god and the female protagonist to be a demon god as well.

It starts to get boring after that, just because of the plot. There is a clip where Wendy said: "Go back and see, she has been waiting for you for many years" . I don't know who the "she" the author writes about is. But the protagonist didn't even express a word after hearing what Wendy said? A thousand years of waiting is not as good as three years of love?

It felt different after it was put on the shelves, or it changed after the Traveler appeared. After all, it was a demon god who had lived for more than a thousand years. Although he slept for nearly a thousand years later, but there were still hundreds of years of fighting career, and hundreds of years of human sophistication. When the ancestor of the fairy spirit came out, it felt good. Even if there was not much description, at least it could be seen that this was a demon god, a demon god with boundless longevity! Why do travelers fall in love as soon as they come out? The character of the protagonist has changed directly, and it feels like it was written by a different person.

There was so much foreshadowing in the early stage, but the heroine is not real. I can't understand it.

I read the book on a browser, and I was afraid that the eunuch would come and reward me for making up for the free prostitutes.

I feel like I've been poisoned... I'm quite optimistic about the background of this book, but I'm curious about the author's thinking, why do you still need to let all tragedies happen in the past... It doesn't matter if you kill the character once or twice, but writing the character to death so rashly and following the original plot makes me feel that the story is almost meaningless. Apart from inserting a protagonist into the original work... Is there any other difference? Gan Yu's mother died easily in the war? There was no splash at all, Guo Ba was still seriously injured and then turned into a fire in hundreds of homes, and then became Xiangling's e-skill. The original wife had no emotional line at all and then died of old age. What's the point of this kind of knife that has no meaning and value? In the next few chapters, the protagonist accompanied the emperor Feituo to conquer the rituals and music, and then fell into a deep sleep due to excessive wear and tear until the main line... I guess that's it, and then continued to follow the plot line as a viewer. Is watching the second creation to relive the plot line? Isn't it to change all the original tragedies? I find it acceptable to write a story that is both tragic and difficult. What does it mean to write to death without even showing your face in one chapter? Isn't this funny? (If you write too much, delete it if the author thinks it affects the viewing experience of other readers. Anyway, I feel bored to death, this kind of unredeemed original tragedy) 🤔🤔🤔

I think the author's previous characterization of the protagonist was quite successful, but after the travelers came, I felt a little strange. They are all demons who are thousands of years old. Why did they suddenly become brainless? The author is really not suitable for writing about emotions.

Gan Yu's mother just disappeared? ? ? Isn't this equivalent to the protagonist's daughter being killed? 😰😰Suddenly stabbed

The more I write, the more something is wrong. After thousands of years of accumulation, I still look like a child who has not grown up.

Novels are usually mediocre before they go on the shelves, and wonderful after they go on the shelves. This one is different. This one is wonderful before it goes on the shelves, but it is extremely disappointing after it goes on the shelves. It is recommended that new readers exit and play the next game before they go on the shelves, so that your experience can be better.

Let me tell you my personal opinion. Most of the people who read the fanfic are gamers. The last few chapters feel like, well, it feels like I have added a personal version of the plot I played at the beginning and went through the original missions. The change is to fall in love with the player's own character. It feels like It's too awkward, and don't keep doing quests. After the main plot of Mondstadt is finished, it belongs to Xiangling and Grandpa Lu again. Xiangling can understand that Heroes of the Night is dispensable. Otherwise, if this continues, will we have to wait for the legends of all Mondstadt characters and Snow Mountain to be completed before opening Liyue? Also, reading fan works itself is to make up for the regrets of the plot or characters. Fans of two-dimensional games mostly fall in love with the characters, so they only follow the plot. If the heroine is sure to be a heroine, it is best not to have a single heroine. My personal feeling about the protagonist at the moment is: I fall in love with my "character" in front of the "wife" in the game. Personally, I love reading fanfics. I have read most of the works about Genshin Impact that can be read at the starting point or quickly read a few chapters. The author's work starting from the Demon God War is indeed very novel. At least it ranks in the top three of the Genshin Impact fanfics I have read in one round. So don't rush into the plot or force the branch line. I currently plan to collect dozens or hundreds of chapters and read them again. I also wish the author can write better and better.

When I saw the Demon God Gu Yu, I didn't know why I thought of a name, Gu Yi Ding San Yu, a drop of spiritual rain that fell in March of the Yi Ding year and wanted to turn into the sea!

Young Lin Yu

I want to make a rant, not about this book. I have never played Genshin Impact, and I didn't have any bad feelings towards the game Genshin Impact at first. However, because some people often play videos on Douyin, Bilibili, and other games, which are not as good as Genshin Impact and attack people, I have now turned against Genshin Impact. I have seen many people scolding Genshin Impact. Do such people belong to Genshin Impact?

Come on, the Genshin Impact fan novels are very good. They have their own stories and their own feelings, instead of being like some fans who basically follow a plot.

If there are less than 50 cards, I have put poison seven or eight times and run away early.

Is Gan Yu the biological child of the protagonist? If she were the heroine, would she be Gan Yu's mother?

To be honest, I couldn't understand it after it was put on the shelves.

Well, I haven't looked at what's on the shelves, but I should be able to get a rough idea from the comments. If it's like what the comment section says, then it's true. Except for changing the author, I couldn't write it like a bear. I basically read it before it was put on the shelves. Although I skipped some boring parts, the overall story is still watchable and the characters are well established. But it was said in the comment area. The protagonist has become a love brain with a sixteen or seventeen-year-old mind. The Human Emperor throws it away at his will. Well, how should I put it? It feels like there are two different roles before and after the release.

I actually lost my memory, okay, 88

After this is put on the shelves, it will be the same as a replacement.

Goodfellas ended without even getting out of the third chapter.

It would be much better to follow the invincible style in another world, right?

After Chapter 158, I stopped ordering it. I felt like someone else had to write it. .

Is this poisoning the shit?

It collapsed starting from Chapter 222