The Movie Savior

I would like to ask, does the author not read book reviews? ?

It took me three or four days to finish reading it. Originally, I have always read it as a studio article. I originally read a game battle article, thinking that it was mainly about games, supplemented by traveling through the world, bringing in some technology, and bringing in some people to develop. I also thought about bringing the human fleet into the game world to crush the players, and then there would be nowhere to write about it, and it would change from science fiction to fantasy, or it would be eunuchs. I didn't expect that the main plot was gone, and it was released too early. It was completely rushed, the framework was not set up, and it was watery These ten worlds can be said to have repeated plots. Although there are many mythical beasts, at least integrate their technologies and describe the economy. I didn't expect that even the first world was not finished by the end. Although the crises in other worlds have been roughly solved. But looking at the ten worlds, it looks like a disease. There isn't even an ending, the extras are too late, and in the end it doesn't look like the prosperity I imagined. I'm really disappointed. It can be said that it is too late to finish, but I actually like the author's writing style. After all, it took me more than 2,000 minutes to read it. Up to the last page I saw, I didn't have any desire to not read it. Maybe this is my first exposure to this type of novel, I prefer science fiction. This is the only book you have read in one sitting, which is why it is relatively small at over 1 million words. Finally, is there anything similar to Qiu Shu? Science fiction, group portraits, fan fiction, infinite flow in the world, macroscopic novels with better writing.

I just read an old book written by the author and I was shocked. How should I say it? From the last book to this one, the author has made great progress and deserves encouragement. I feel like there are a lot of people in the comment area talking about the author's update issue, and I think it's okay. First of all, so many people are urging me to show that the quality of the author's writing is very good. When I think about the plot, I don't shudder (I just get a little confused sometimes, but a 15-page chapter written by the author is okay). It doesn't matter if I update it every day, and if I can write something regularly and publish it regularly every day, the reading experience may be much better. I don't have to worry about asking for leave, because it is really easier to update it once a day. But I feel like the author is not a full-time employee, and that doesn't matter. The full-time job is too stressful. The author should be a 996 social animal (laughs).

Did the latest chapter save that little cub? Have you ever seen Shen Nong tell me?

Fully ordered, well written, I like this kind of protagonist, the author should not listen to those crazy words. As a reader who likes to be an ordinary person rather than a protagonist, I really like this kind of protagonist.

Comment after seeing Chapter 25. There are many minor flaws, but there are also many bright spots. The principles are clearly discernible, there are also small emotional climaxes, and the main line is relatively clear. The disadvantage is that the supporting characters and even the protagonist are obviously in a tool-like state, and their character traits are unstable. It is recommended that the author write something similar to a biography for the characters who often appear, and at least list their habits and basic personalities. For example, in Chapter 25, the psychologist surnamed Wu, who was shrewd, calm, rational and capable in the early stage, and Meajuan, a professional military truck driver with one arm of muscles, suddenly only had the label "female" left during the meeting (original text: "Looking at the big battle in front of me, the two girls Wu and Mea "A little nervous") has become a backdrop to the protagonist's calmness in times of crisis. At the same time, the protagonist, who was immature and even a little down-to-earth in the early stage, suddenly becomes calm and tall at this time. The internal logic of the character creation and the reader's impression are not coherent enough. The plot mainly relies on dialogue to advance, and the dialogue is relatively dry and lacks logic, character characteristics and interest. In short, the ideas and core are good, but my writing skills need to be improved, so please work hard. To be honest, at the beginning, I hoped that works and authors with good cores could survive. After all, writing skills can be practiced, but the cores are rarely comfortable to read. Finally, I would like to give some advice to new readers. If you want to preserve your reading experience, don't read the chapter reviews first, as this will raise your blood pressure.

I finished reading it in one go, it's a bit short

The book is good, keep up the good work 😁

I never thought that one day I would find a book with myself as the protagonist on the daily guide, and I was heartbroken

How about this powered armor? There is also reinstallation

First of all, I have an inexplicable feeling that it is getting uglier and uglier. (Of course I will still automatically subscribe to support the author) In the past, I would still look forward to what kind of sparks would be created when the disasters of the new world encountered new technologies in other time and space? As a result, the protagonist is just constantly saving people, and there is not much description of the economic development of time and space, and the integration of science.       →→→→→→→           （，）       Originally, I was looking forward to the description of the economic development part, but as a result, this process was repeated over and over again, which really made people's perception plummet. Even though I subscribed automatically, I already had dozens of chapters, so I was too lazy to read them and skipped them. Regarding the development of economy and new technology, I was originally looking forward to the description, but the author waved his hand and found nothing. It is constantly [Discovering a new world → Disaster → Mutual Rescue Association will find a way → Europe and the United States are monsters → We are super gods → Trying our best to make the official trust → End of the problem → Discovering a new world] Later, I carefully searched for the reasons for my bad impression, and then I discovered that it turns out that my taste is tricky, and I really like science fiction works. Including but not limited to all of Liu's works, needless to say the most awesome of them, "The Three-Body Problem", "Chaos Butterfly", "Age of Angels", "Once Upon a Time in the Cretaceous", "Time Migration", "The Wandering Earth", I have read all of them, as well as "The Golden Fields" which shocked me so much that I looked up at the stars. Of course, there are also Asimov's "The Last Question", "The Final Answer" and so on. And, Arthur C. Clarke's "The Forgotten Enemy" and so on.                                                                                                 Really good science fiction works never hesitate to criticize human beings, but what do you say about this book? Anyway, we are so awesome! Feelings, thoughts about race, thoughts about human beings, and their descriptions of the dream of looking up at the stars.       ，…      …，，，，       "，，"       ，，，，， But now, not only do I repeat [Discover a new world → Disaster → Mutual Rescue Association will find a solution → Europe and the United States act like monsters → We are super gods → Try our best to make the official trust → End of the problem → Discover a new world], I almost doubt the necessity of further reading. (The main thing is, forget it after you finish writing, and the result is... In short, book friends have already said it.) At first, I wanted to read this book with the mentality of reading books by science fiction gods. The result... It's hard to describe in one word. I can only say that the great god is worthy of being a great god, and it's beyond what humans can do! (Really, when I first watched the story of Snow Country, I was a little happy, and I was filled with joy that the author was finally going to learn from the masters and criticize the bad nature of mankind) Thinking about it now, among us, there are really very few authors who can criticize us like Da Liu. (Note: I remember in an interview, Liu talked about "Three-Body·Two·Dark Forest", in which the group of people who are difficult to describe are criticizing our bad habits based on who we were back then.) And in this world, in short, we are all kinds of super gods, as if we are perfect and have no shortcomings I always feel that my inner requirements for the author of this book seem to be a bit high. Basically, you have to be at least partially close to the master of science fiction.        ，，，， However, this constant repetition, repetition, repetition of the plot is really annoying to me. (The key is that you write it well. For example, Liu's human extinction plan, or his extreme optimism about mankind's doomsday war, are very poor compared to your subject matter, and can even be said to be old-fashioned. Others still write it well and realistically... Maybe this is a problem with the writing style.)

Drive high and go low, the protagonist of this book is too holy. You are a savior, not a nanny. Some people don't want you to save them, so you force them to save them. This is disgusting.

The author may have underestimated the horror of the world of "Finch" After seeing the description of the world by the "Finch people" in "Agriculture in the Building", I think the author may have underestimated the impact of the massive destruction of the ozone layer on the world. Looking at the author's description, my feeling is that Fincher's world is just an extremely hot world during the day, but the fact is far more than that. First of all, the massive destruction of the ozone layer is not only caused by the sharp rise in temperature during the day. The ozone layer is also the quilt of the earth, which can prevent the rapid loss of temperature. According to the daytime temperature of 70 degrees, and the ozone layer may not be destroyed (it would be even worse if it was completely destroyed), then the temperature at night is very likely to be around -40 degrees, or even lower. This kind of temperature difference between day and night of up to 100 degrees is first and foremost a severe test of life. People get sick constantly and plants find it difficult to survive. Then there is the test of the material. Rapid temperature changes will make the steel brittle and easily cracked and damaged. Extreme temperatures make most components unable to withstand such a drastic change, let alone such a drastic change. The author mentioned nuclear power, so let me also talk about the impact of temperature on nuclear power. You can find a lot of effects of high-temperature weather on nuclear power with a casual search. The thermal efficiency of nuclear power at 30 to 40 degrees is obviously affected, not to mention how much thermal efficiency is used in 70-degree nuclear power plants for power generation (thermal power also uses thermal efficiency to generate electricity). Then there is the low temperature at night. The currently operating nuclear power plant with the highest latitude in my country is the Hongyanhe Nuclear Power Plant in Liaoning. The Hongyanhe Nuclear Power Plant mentioned that the most important thing in winter is to prevent the water inlet from being blocked by ice. Then to talk about other electric power generation at night, you can look at the tragic situation of Texas experiencing an extreme cold wave of -19 degrees. The wires were frozen to waste, the wind power was frozen and stuck, many components of the thermal power plant were frozen, and the thermal power station was directly paralyzed. Let's talk about daytime. The book mentions that three main types of electricity are used: solar power, wind power, and nuclear power. After talking about nuclear power, wind power and solar power are called garbage power (some small hydropower is also garbage power). Why is it called this? I heard that in detail, the real power grid is not like in the game. When the power generated is too much, it is stored in the battery, and when the power is low, it is taken out to make up for it (in fact, there are power grids and batteries, but it is not in the electricity mode). In real life, the power grid actually generates as much as it uses. If either side of supply and demand is unstable, problems will arise. The supply side is naturally power generation. Solar energy is affected by sunshine and rain, wind energy is affected by wind, and hydropower is affected by water volume. This causes their power generation to be unstable and has a greater impact on the power grid, so In the future, there will be some power plants created for this purpose. They are like firefighters. When there is more garbage electricity, they will generate less electricity. When there is less garbage electricity, they will generate more electricity. Then there will be batteries in the power grid - pumped storage power stations. When there is more electricity, they will use the electricity to pump water up the mountain and store it. When there is less electricity, they will release water to generate electricity. Please don't worry about this Fincher world, because it will shut down when there is no power. The problem in terms of power supply is actually that the sudden reduction in power demand causes the generated electricity to be sent without knowing where to send it, causing the power grid to be overloaded. A specific example is that if people all over the country turn off the lights at the same time, it will cause the power grid to be overloaded (not necessarily, after all, our power grid is still very reliable), so "turning off the lights for one hour" is not environmentally friendly, let alone saving the earth. As I write, I write it as popular science. What I want to express specifically is that it is difficult for many people to survive in the world of "Finch". Specifically, I refer to the moon and Mars. Of course, this refers to their temperatures. Some friends may also ask, Fincher did not show it, because it is either a hard-core science fiction, or a road movie covered in science fiction, focusing on human nature and thinking about life. Just some thoughts after reading it. After all, the author has written a lot.

Each world is similar, with a few chapters on contact, a few chapters on the original plot, a few chapters on "shock", a few chapters on domestic awesomeness, and a few chapters on North American crotch pulling. What's the point of this? There is no "plot" that belongs to the novel itself. It's all a mess, it's really bad

I have abandoned this book for a long time. I accidentally took a look at it today and found that it is finished. I can only say that this book has good material selection and a great beginning, but it is poorly written. The protagonist travels to a game of advanced civilization, masters supreme technology, and travels through various movie worlds to save the people on earth in the end of the world. The spirit of human beings in various movie worlds to actively save themselves and strive for strength in the apocalypse is very infectious to readers. And when written this way, the pattern is also very high. So the beginning attracts a large number of readers. I remember when I first read it, many readers left messages in the comment area, saying that this book was well written, and at least it was a little god. I personally hold the same opinion. However, the author writes more and more crookedly. The main manifestations are that the pace is getting slower and slower, the content is getting more and more watery, the pattern is getting lower and lower, and the plot is getting more and more boring. What everyone wants to see is that mankind is united to resist the doomsday and create a new home. It's not that you're going around in circles. In short, it is a pity that this book was ruined by the author. By the way, let's clear it up, you can still see it from the front. But it ends at Pacific Rim.

What everyone wants to see is human beings uniting to fight disasters, save the world, and save themselves. This is what the title of your book says. But look at what you are writing now? It's a mess of pretense and slaps in the face, a child-level political struggle that's just like playing house but makes people sick to their stomachs. Every chapter is so dull, even if you only write a little bit, it's still full of this kind of stuff. If you don't correct it, I won't subscribe to the next chapter! I think it's not just me, but everyone can't stand it, right?

I would like to ask the author what to do if the opponent turns against you after saving it. After all, the political system of a country with 7 billion people is unpredictable. If you don't add a buff or something, are you sure the opponent can't kill you and then seek development?

I'm gradually losing patience with this book

Current cycle: To the new world. . . Aboriginal: Wow, I don't believe it from other worlds The protagonist shows the time and space tunnel. . . Indigenous: WOC, he has a space-time tunnel, what he said is true The protagonist shows off his muscles. . . Aboriginal: Wow, I believe it, boss, please guide me To be honest, I am tired of reading it. When I see the chapter title, I can think of the pretentious plot in it.

Let the people of the Pirate Kingdom migrate to the legendary world. Does the protagonist have the means to check and balance them? Will they obediently obey the protagonist and bring a small number of weapons? After the end of the world, will they be willing to go back and rebuild their homes? Based on their habits, they will definitely not leave, and they will even use any means to plunder the heritage of other pirate countries. Can the protagonist force them to travel back to the world of 2012 with one click?

I read Broken Ball 2 and missed this book again.

I think it would be better to change the title of the book to the movie The Babysitter of Doom.

It is impossible for those officials in 2012 to cooperate with you, they are all selfish guys. Good guy, I knew in 2009 that there was an end of the world, but only 9 ships were built, and some were not completed. The most ridiculous thing is that it was built with investment from all over the world. With the character of a rabbit, if you tell me how many ships to build, how many will I build? I believe in building 90 ships at the same time. If it has not been completed yet, it is definitely because there was no time to build more than 80 ships of our own. And the qualification to board the ship is actually bought with money, holy shit. It's the end of the world, so what's the point of using all that money? We are looking at who are boarding the ship, rich people, politicians, old men, these people are of no use boarding the ship. If it is a rabbit, then it is definitely young people, various scientists, agriculturalists... This is the feeling of the Chinese people. Rabbit in 2012. They are completely like rabbits after economic colonization. They have to listen to whatever Westerners say.

After reading some of the previous debates, when people from the 2012 world went to the I Am Legend world, many people were debating about the need for national integration. Let me tell you the simplest thing. You live in a house with 4 bedrooms and 1 living room. Suddenly, an accident occurs and you are the only one who dies in the whole family. It happened that there was a flood at your cousin's house, and the whole family came to your house to take shelter for a while, and then stayed at your house and stayed there. So, are those of you who emphasize great integration the same kind of people who are saying that it's right, anyway, you can't live alone, so why not let your relatives live? This novel has set a 500-word comment limit for fans. When I saw your comments, I was so angry that I gave a reward of 500 to post this comment. I really don't know what your brain circuits are thinking. How can you say that not integrating is Lao Jiang's thought? Oh My God

The author's pace has been a bit slow lately. Why do so many people like this book? Many people even say that this book has the potential to be a masterpiece. You must know that there are many books on national streaming, unlimited streaming, game streaming, and a hodgepodge of themes. Why does everyone love this book? It's because the values ​​​​of the work appeal to everyone's appetite. It was the same as when the official media reviewed "The Wandering Earth". In various apocalyptic worlds, compared with foreign countries, China can still maintain a strong organizational and combat effectiveness, and this spirit of unity to fight against the sky, the earth, and people. This is what everyone likes, just like one reader said, it has an epic feel. Recently, the author's pace has obviously been too slow, and he has been delayed for too long in the Pacific Rim world, which makes him a very weak enemy. His own strength has the absolute upper hand. Why bother?

Look here, I want to remind you that you have started to make mistakes again. The plot is too detailed, and the complex description will make book friends think that you are short of word count. In fact, you want to try your best to write about the force majeure of the disaster and the hatefulness of some villains, but you use the wrong way, which will have the opposite effect when reading. Here is a suggestion for you to write in the next plot. There is no need to unfold scenes describing multiple villains in the plot, and there is no need to create suspense. Everyone understands the process and there is no suspense anymore. Therefore, you should let the protagonist quickly dispatch Pangu or multiple mechas to violently stop the train, catch the person, and immediately broadcast the trial to the world; then start coordinating and transferring and governance (maximum one chapter here), and then you have to start filling in the pitfalls of 2012. You can be more detailed about this, such as the perspective of the final shifter, live broadcast from multiple angles in various time and space, and make it more enthusiastic and hopeful. This was originally your initial advantage, but as you write it, you start to become indifferent. It shouldn't be; Finally, don't be afraid of poor results for your novel. As long as you can correct your style in time, the popularity will come naturally, because I haven't found any novels of the same type that can match yours. Don't be afraid that there is no world to write in. There are too many disaster movies, and there are so many friends in the comment area giving you advice. What are you afraid of? Of course, a world like Marvel's that involves extraordinary abilities is best left last. I would like to make a personal request. Please arrange for "Valerian and the City of a Thousand Planets" to be released as soon as possible. There is no need to specifically save humans. Other friendly races can also be included in the rescue process!

How can I add precision? Should I go through a procedure or do it directly?

Disaster movie lovers say it's rare to encounter a novel about a disaster movie, it's great! Come on, author, don't be a eunuch!

Drive high and go low, you can watch it in the early stage, the plot rhythm is actually relatively smooth, but you can also watch it, but it becomes more and more difficult to watch in the later stage. There are many retarded plots, especially the Snowpiercer movie. This movie is full of bugs. I don't know why it was included. The plot is all as unwatchable as if you have lost your wits. I really can't watch it anymore, so that's it.

At least it's better than the doomsday world where you're all about being self-centered and beating up the hawk-sauce-foot-potted chicken, Assanyue Monkey Seal, Monkey Kangaroo, etc.