Wasteland: My Monster Collection Illustrated Book

I thought the result was that the monster-killing explosion attribute was the best. I would give the author a suggestion to turn on the transformation system later, that is, after collecting the complete illustrated book, you can transform into the species. Originally, this type of novel was based on a curiosity-seeking mentality, so that the protagonist's diversified abilities can also satisfy the reader's curiosity. The monster-killing explosion attribute is really too monotonous.

Adding strength and physique in the early stage is nonsense, as long as the smart ones have absolute acceleration with knowledge. In the early stage, the more strength you increase, it is just higher than that of a normal person. It is almost the same as a monster. Why don't I use a knife? If even a knife can't break through, your fist is useless, Physique? There is no need to add it separately. It already has Speed. Why do we say speed is awesome? Note that this refers to the early stage. Think about it. A fast person holds a knife. These normal people or even disabled people are not one child with one knife? Kill zombies With a speed of 10 (holding a dagger) Find a plain, field or any open place Killing these things with a speed of 4-6 is not massacre? These little cuties have speed 4-6, constitution 4-7, and strength 100-200. In the face of absolute speed, as long as the knife can break the defense, it is rubbish. Refer to Evil Sword Technique Quickly Note that what is mentioned here refers to the early stage. In the middle and late stages, it becomes extraordinary and the speed advantage is not big.

If the dialogue is not good, write less! To depict human nature, one should first understand what human nature is like? Looking at the content of the conversation, my balls hurt! It seems that Wen Zou Zou De's words are good, but no matter how you look at them, they are distorted. They are not colloquial at all and do not sound like human speech! It looks like it was barely put together, and it looks uncomfortable!

Although I really wanted to read it, I was discouraged by the comment section. I felt that the writing was very rough without repeated review and improvement. If you just write a story, anyone can write tens of thousands of words, but if you want to write it well, you need to work hard.

I have just read a dozen chapters, and I feel that the writing is not very good. The villains and passers-by are too facially portrayed, and there is no look of apocalyptic ruins. There are also people who are surprised by the dead among the fleeing people.

Please comment. After all, the post is only in single digits and it's too ugly.

Things start to go wrong in Chapter 5. Is the person you kill a fat person or a skinny person? The person who bullies women is a fat person, and the person who provokes you is a skinny person. They are not the same person. In the end, they are the same person when it comes to killing people.

What the hell is a creeper? I asked Mr. Z, and he blocked me.

Is it possible that the protagonist can learn genetic engineering, create new creatures to gain points, and change the genes of wild creatures to create one subspecies and then another subspecies? It doesn't need to be very powerful creatures, but there can be many. In addition, are microorganisms considered wasteland organisms? Can it be brushed?

LOW No details, only vague descriptions

I could bear it until now, but when I met the Lin brothers and sisters, I couldn't bear it anymore. They were so awkward and inexplicable.

What the hell, don't order so many, you're going crazy for money, why don't you stop writing, it's boring? ? ?

By the way, Chapter 112 is in the wrong place.

I would like to borrow a hotel and recommend myself. The law of conservation of fate. I update 10,000 words every day. Please pay attention.

The writing is average, the plot and settings are good, but the details should be better controlled. Some things like psychological activities or introductions can be concise and clear, and the fighting can be more detailed. The characters, especially the protagonist, can highlight personal characteristics, which is more distinct; and the attribute values ​​​​are more rigorous, think carefully, and ensure logic, otherwise this place will easily collapse (whisper bb: pay attention to typos, wrong sentences and data, I feel like you are a little confused 😂) For reference only

Is this the starting point of science fiction classification?

I am everywhere, I am the best in the world.

Having said that, I think the previous book is better. Might as well go back and write another book