I Have a Fortune-Gathering Array

Don't write about shareholdings carelessly; authors should do more research. If there are any problems with how shareholdings are written, it will likely deter a large portion of potential buyers.

Book review So far, the story is well-written, but the protagonist relies too much on his cheat-like abilities and neglects to cultivate loyal talent. Currently, his staff is retained only with high salaries, making them easy targets for poaching by competitors offering even higher pay. He's already been poached by rivals several times. Hasn't he noticed the underlying problems?

I have a question: why is a clothing chain brand with nearly 10,000 employees, monthly revenue of 100 million yuan, and operations spanning three provinces, only valued at a few hundred million yuan? And all the stores were purchased; the fixed assets alone are worth more than that. The estimated value is at least a billion yuan, yet the net worth remains over 100 million yuan. It's just baffling.

After reading five chapters, I'm a bit confused. Before activation, the system had 10430 points, but after activation, it dropped to 430. It said the system deducted 10,000 from my lottery ticket, but not from my own money. Where did you get that extra money? If you had 10,000, why didn't the system deduct it? You had to work to save up 10,000.

The beginning was alright, but it got really padded out later. After hundreds of chapters, it's just relentlessly focused on selling clothes. The romance is a complete mess, a jumbled mess. The protagonist is like a monk, all detached from worldly desires, making so much money but not enjoying it, not spending it—he's like a robot!

This wealth-gathering formation is so good. In the early stages, if you don't have capital, you can start a clothing business. Once you have money, you can start a medical business, then a technology business, confronting and sanctioning European and American capital. This will make many people feel involved.

Xiao Lan. Back then, facing billions in capital, in a situation everyone thought you were destined to lose, someone willing to give up their 300,000 yuan savings—and you just let them go like that? If you're not going to write a story with multiple female leads, then don't write it so sentimentally. When the male lead falls for the female lead, who are you trying to disgust? If you can't write, then don't write.

I didn't watch it, but I read the summary. In short, it's impossible to win a big prize in the Chinese lottery; it's all insiders claiming the winnings.

I don't quite understand why you guys think this way in your writing. They're just roommates; they earn their own money and often don't even live in the dorm. They're at most classmates. We didn't have any real feelings for each other at the beginning of the semester. I don't understand why you're hiding it from them under some fancy pretext like not wanting the relationship to change…

Ugh, so annoying. The plot is getting weaker and weaker. They've even started a family reunion. Why do they need supporting characters to drive the plot? If the main character is going to get involved in a particular industry, they should be the leader in that industry. It's just normal business competition. If you really can't write well, then create some drama! Luxury brands should create all sorts of new things and compete with big brands—you've got plenty to write about.