The Heavens Begin with Yitian Slaying the Dragon

Zhang Sanfeng, the invincible martial arts master, was written like a hypocritical monk by you. I suspect you are trying to tamper with Zhang Sanfeng.

It's so poisonous. I don't know what the author thinks. Is Lao Zhang the kind of person who talks about how long ago it was time to retaliate? In the original work, Lao Zhang's reputation was gained through killing. In history, Lao Zhang also participated in the rebellion against the Yuan Dynasty and killed many people.

This will probably be your third book. . Just practice writing.

After reading dozens of chapters, it was extremely poisonous. I felt it was rubbish and decided to abandon the book. The poisonous point was that when I was writing the Yitian section, I was very decisive in killing the little people. I even licked the famous people in the original book. The most disgusting thing was that I licked Zhao Min and wiped out the whole book. Do we really need six major sects to unify the world? Especially the part where Zhao Min went to Wudang. I really don't want to talk anymore

Just like primary school students, they only know what to write when they think of it, or they may want to instill something, and the result is... Poisonous

It's such a waste, there is no woman, and when you become the emperor, you run away, except killing people. I didn't do anything to earn points. Even my martial arts skills were piled on by the system.

In Chapter 58, the male protagonist just finished saying that Zhao Min was not worthy of a bet with the male protagonist. In the next paragraph, he agreed to the bet and let Zhang Sanfeng get injured in a martial arts competition. Look, what did you write? The preface does not match the postscript

Take a look at your profile. Are there any typos or something? What does it mean to send yourself away?

The routine is almost the same as the original work, with no innovation, and the character is holy

It's understandable that people in modern times are weak. How can you write a novel like this?

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I'll give it a try first and write a review later