Become an Immortal: Start by Adding Points of Violence

A worthless chronicle, a pig's horn is always a child's heart activity to increase the number of words. Seriously affects the plot development and character description. Not enough IQ!

To be honest, I don't want to look back at the book I wrote, because the writing is really bad. As a long-time reader, I would delete this kind of book within the first few seconds after seeing it (there is a high probability that I won't click on it because the title is too eye-catching) I am still in school, so my social experience is 0. In addition, I understand all the issues everyone mentioned, but the actual implementation gap is too big. The performance is already bad enough that it can't get any worse, so if you can't stand it, you can delete it.

The writing is good and the plot is excellent. After reading it, there is no poisonous point for now, and the rhythm is also very good. You may not be able to follow the investment, otherwise you will make a lot of money.

It's pretty cool, come on. The rhythm control is not very good, but the subject matter is okay.

What the hell did you write in the first few golden pictures?

I feel like the author is quite honest.

The moths in the room exercised their bodies to the third level. . . . . The main character is still the same. . . This is. . . .

I will read any suggestions you have, although not many people read my books...

Junior Sister: How can you be as versatile as Senior Brother Jiang? Senior Brother Jiang: Extra points for meditating on Deep Blue!

The water is so good. If you play in a ring competition, it will be full of water. The gap between one realm only takes a long time. The protagonist really has a problem with his thinking, and it's so confusing to watch.

The setting is okay at the beginning, but I have a small opinion: some of the anecdotes and long-winded nonsense will be better if the plot is refined.

After reading Chapter 8, I felt confused.

It's in the daily guide, it's really nice. Good grass, not poisonous at the moment. Hurry up and add more updates!

If God had not given birth to me tofu, Internet articles would be as long as the night 😏

Not on the shelves yet? lazy

Take the bottle and medicine together 🤔

I've read a few chapters I can't stand it

Keep writing, the wealth of platinum is so terrifying, if you don't make a sound, you will be a blockbuster, and if you have a million dollars, you will become a god.

It's difficult, the VIP volume hasn't been opened yet... It can't be...

The first update has been reviewed... May need to be deleted

Is there no heroine? If there is a heroine, I will quit early.

It's a new book, so please forgive me for any shortcomings.

When I saw the forced test to recruit a disciple, let me know if you would like to become a disciple. If so, then I will.

That's great! Platinum capital, love it, love it 😍