My Mobile Phone Connects to Another World

I gave up after reading the third chapter. The protagonist is just an ordinary person. When entering the game and not understanding the rules of the game, it's okay to explore carelessly. He was drugged by people in the village and was going to be sold to the bandits. It didn't matter if he finally ran away or hid in secret. When he saw the bandits preparing to kill the villagers, he actually ran out to act as a hero and fight the bandits! ! ! Damn it, is there anyone so brave? Let's not say whether he is the Holy Mother or not. You are just an ordinary person. You entered a strange world out of nowhere. Don't you panic? Even if you know that you have entered the game world, do you understand the rules of the game? Do you know if you die in the game, you will die in real life? How could you be so awesome to stand up and fight dozens of bandits with broadswords and weapons with a rotten hatchet for the sake of a stranger who you just met once and murdered you? Is this fucking idiot? How did he live to be so old in reality? The grass on the grave should be as tall as a person, right? Can't stand it anymore, Shennong is dead, leave! ! !

In order to save his own life, the villagers sacrificed him to the robbers, drugged him and tied him up, but he was forgiven later? What rhythm is this?

The writing is good, but the details are too serious! For example, your LV level must be written in uppercase and lowercase letters! Seriously affects reading! Here is the property list! Just show the changed properties in each chapter. The number of water characters is about the same! Displaying the same property panel again and again will only make people feel disgusted!

The name of the main character makes it hard to keep reading. 😅😅

The author has probably never played the game, and the upgrade attributes don't change at all, so what's the use of upgrading? Is it just to increase that little attribute point? What's more, you increase physical strength. If you increase movement speed to someone, it will definitely grind others to death! Another situation is that if you don't have strength, how can you wear armor? Is it possible to pick up the weight of the armor without using any force?

The previous chapter was pretty good, but why does the latest chapter start to limit the protagonist's real-life force? Turn the protagonist into an ordinary person! Did the author change it later?

The narration talks a lot of nonsense, but the main text is not at all. The author has no grasp of the rhythm of the novel. The plot advances very slowly. No matter how good the writing is, it is useless. What is important in a novel is not the writing, but the plot.

At this pace, even if you are actually playing a game, you will feel it is too slow.

Why is it not updated? Is it quarantined?

How awkward! Except for physical strength, everything else is 1. You can switch between offense and defense, but what about speed? One o'clock, can you still move if you put on the armor again?

Updates are a bit slow and the plot is too monotonous

In fact, the book is quite good, but the author did not control the rhythm of the plot enough, and the plot is too rough, and the writing is quite random. You can say that the author wrote it wherever he thought. Just like people say that the protagonist's IQ is the author's IQ. The protagonist is full of temperament from beginning to end, and he does things from beginning to end. Some plot developments also make people speechless. A policeman actually started a crime with the underworld. He shot someone and actually brought 8.9 People along with him. The author did not regard a policeman who had worked his way up in the society as a human being. It does not mean that he cannot kill people, but if he really wanted to kill people, he would not be able to find so many people. You must know that a policeman knows the virtues of the underworld very well. Those people might confess him one day if he commits a crime in order to merit merit. How can he still kill others and silence them? So a person who is a little bit 🧠 can bring up to 2.3 People with a few guns, but they can't kill the protagonist. No matter how many people there are, it's useless. And the protagonist lets himself go as soon as he goes abroad. Showing his invulnerability in front of so many people, isn't the protagonist afraid that foreign forces will catch him and slice him up? You must know that this is not a skill that normal humans can possess. Any organization that knows it will do everything possible to find out the secret of the protagonist, unless the protagonist silences everyone, but the author obviously cannot write like this

Don't worry about those trainees. What do little brats know? Just write according to your own ideas. Come on, author.

Why have I never seen who did it when the bandits were stoned?

Being able to travel between two worlds and fight a defensive battle with so many casualties is also a talent.

What a contradiction. I wrote earlier that the protagonist saw the character level, but the protagonist wanted to find the master hidden in the village but couldn't find it! Maybe it's not that he can't be found, and the author forgot about trying to find the hidden master. No more looking! I just want to know why?

It's more in line with my taste. I hope the author will insist on it.

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What happened to the next few chapters? It's time to send away another group of people!

Such a long introduction... can be read as the main text. I don't know what the author thinks