Starting as One Person, I Refine Gu into Immortality

I suspect that the author has offended people because so many people have criticized this book. And the bad thing is the writing style... I doubt you know what writing style is, so I'm going to blame it. The writing style of this book is not particularly good, at least it is at a normal level. If you insist that the writing of this book is bad, then starting point, no, 90% of the novels on all websites are bad writing. In short, this is an okay-looking novel, which can be regarded as food. Whether it suits your taste or not, you have to decide for yourself, not what the reviews say.

Please let the author stop writing about Chen Duo. These chapters make the protagonist and Lao Liao look like they are mentally retarded and I can hardly stand it anymore. Why did I dare to go to war with the company because of Chen Duo? Damn it, the first person to destroy the protagonist must be his father if word of this spreads out. Are you crazy? Are you planning to bury the entire Heimiao family for Chen Duo, whom you have met several times? From the beginning to the end, I didn't see any love for her from the protagonist, just pity. Isn't he using Chen Duo to practice Gu?

Is this a one-man plot that can't be watered down and wants to water Harry Potter? 😅 In the beginning, my own original and exciting plot was great, but now I am going back to the old path of fan fiction, written by Mizuhara? I felt it when I explained the formation of the Great Trench.

Unfortunately, the order went wrong, and 100 points became 5,000 points.

I have never watched Under One Person, and I really don't know why the protagonist would fall in love with an artificial humanoid poison-making weapon at first sight without any foreshadowing, just because of its so-called beauty?

Farewell, I can't stand it anymore. Maybe after getting over the heat of Under One Person and Bad Person, there is nothing left to write. The bad guy went off without a start but just made some pills and some poison. What's the main plot? Pass it over for what? Just go and flirt with someone and then learn a skill and then forget about it? I'm either nit-picking or feeling like the writing has been too scattered for a while. I don't know what I'm writing about. You want to say literary drama, okay? It's really loose, and the martial arts scenes aren't particularly exciting. Maybe I'm too demanding, and my support only ends here, and the world is far away.

This book is good in all aspects, but there is something wrong with the heroine. It's not that I am against Duoer being the heroine, but the protagonist's feelings for Duoer are a bit inexplicable, and there is no foreshadowing in the middle.

Great subject matter, terrible writing, third-rate narration

The book was very good in the early stages, and I silently put the label of fairy grass in my heart, but it gradually lost its flavor later on, which is really a pity. I have never read Under One Person, and I don't know that this book is a derivative novel of Under One Person. I came to read this book simply because of the word "Gu". The protagonist's plug-in can get rewards for exploring mysterious places. At the beginning, he gets a life poison with a very high upper limit. Although it is powerful, it also comes with some side effects that can be overcome. It is very good and suits my taste. In my opinion, it is a golden start. From contacting the outside world, destroying the Yaoxian, rescuing Duo'er, cooperating with the Heaven and Earth Society, and joining the Ten Guys, it can be described as a wonderful interlocking process. Among them, Duo'er, who was inexplicably designated as his wife, appeared, which made me realize that this book is a derivative novel of Under One Person. It also allowed me, who had not watched the original animation, to get to know many various characters in the animation, such as poor Duo'er, Taoist Wang Ye, the charming Xia He, etc. When did you start to feel the loss of feeling? It probably started around the plot against the Wang family, right? A large number of characters come to mind without explanations and introductions, so readers need to search for them on the Internet. Some characters cannot even find their photo introductions on the Internet. Some characters can be found, some cannot, and some are even too lazy to look up. Gradually, I began to be unable to keep up. Some of the plots did not even conform to my three views. In my mind, the protagonist had to keep his true intentions even though he harbored evil intentions. For the first time, the whole army that came to besiege was wiped out. The daughter of one of them came to look for her family. The protagonist threw a ball to the male teacher, one of the four. From this point on, the taste of the book began to feel wrong. Once again, in order to satisfy the murderous intention of a Buddhist disciple, he ate an evil Taoist priest alive. Once again, four people and an evil cult were captured and subdued. In order to severely damage the Wang family, they actually had their younger brother kill his older brother and destroy all the Wang families, just to make it a disposable furnace for his own cultivation. It made people feel uncomfortable after reading it. Up to this point, it was okay to just make do, after all, there was a shortage of books, but when it came to helping the evil man escape to a certain island, a plot in this episode was unacceptable. A father of the Lu family concluded that a child was the murderer of his daughter and beat him up. After his flesh and blood were mutilated, he searched his soul and searched his memory to prove his innocence. He also asked others to search his soul with the same result. He also claimed that he was a better practitioner than himself, so he and others were deceived. Without explanation, his clan leader also put him in jail. Seeing this, I silently chose to quit. I hope the author can go further in his future creations.

Does the author not want to make money, or is it just a side job? The screening process started after about 30 chapters, and at least 60% of people left those chapters. Maybe it was because I read the comments later and felt that everyone didn't like it, so I forced it back. To be honest, this book has the potential to be a big hit. The subject matter is very good and very creative. The history is integrated into one. Before I put the poison, I felt that there were a lot of chapters and comments, and other things were pretty good, and it could absorb the fans of Gu Zhenren, Da Feng, and others. The writing was also very good, but in those few chapters, unfortunately, the character design fell apart in some chapters, and it became a bit funny and intellectual.