Starting as One Person, I Refine Gu into Immortality

I suspect the author offended someone, that's why so many people are criticizing this book. And the criticisms are all directed at writing style... I doubt you even know what writing style is before you start criticizing it. The writing style of this book, while not exceptionally good, is at least at a normal level.

Please, author, stop writing about Chen Duo! These past few chapters have made the protagonist and Lao Liao seem like complete idiots; I can barely read anymore. He dared to go to war with the company for Chen Duo? If that gets out, the first person to be crippled by the protagonist's father will be his. Is he insane?!

Is this a case of one person's storyline failing, so they're resorting to padding the original with Harry Potter? 😅 Their original storyline was fantastic at first, but now they're going down the old path of fan fiction, padding the original work? I had a feeling about it from the explanation of the formation of the ditch.

Oh no, I clicked the wrong button, 100 points became 5000 points.

I haven't watched Under One Person, and I really don't understand why the protagonist would fall in love at first sight with an artificial humanoid poison weapon without any foreshadowing, just because of her so-called beauty.

Goodbye, I can't read any more. After the hype surrounding *Under One Person* and *The Bad Guys* died down, there's probably nothing left to write. *The Bad Guys* also fizzled out – all they did was refine pills and concoct some Gu poisons. What was the main plot? What were they supposed to do there? Just flirt, learn a skill, and then leave?

This book is good in many ways, but the female lead has some issues. It's not that I object to Duo'er being the female lead, but the protagonist's feelings for Duo'er seem rather inexplicable, without any foreshadowing.

Great subject matter, terrible writing, and third-rate narration.

The book was excellent in its early stages, earning it a place I considered a gem, but it gradually lost its appeal later on, which was a real shame. I haven't read Under One Person, nor did I know that this book is a spin-off of Under One Person. I came to read this book simply because of the word "Gu". The protagonist's cheat is that he can get rewards by exploring mysterious locations.

Is the author not interested in making money, or is it just a side job? Around chapter 30-something, the author started filtering readers; at least 60% of the readers left those chapters. Perhaps they saw the comments later and realized people didn't like it, so they forced a change. Honestly, this book has the potential to be a huge hit.