Pirate Black Cat Must Die

I quit after reading the second chapter. The dragon's behavior at the first point was so strange, not at all like the behavior of the leader of the revolutionary army. The second point is that the protagonist never communicated with the dragon throughout the whole process, and then the dragon gave the devil fruit for free. A word awkward.

It's so poisonous that he can even beat his companions. It's so disgusting. The author's mentality is that he is strong and can even beat his companions. Anyway, he's not as strong as the protagonist. It's so disgusting.

The Immortal Fruit cannot be too strong. My theory is that the phantom beast only inherits some of its abilities and needs to be awakened before it can inherit all of its abilities. Buddha cannot only know shock waves.

This? ? ? Eat a devil fruit and practice to the foundation building stage? What do you think? What does it mean that there is another Arhat period in the Warring States Period? Does Kaido have the so-called dragon transformation or ascending dragon stage? Are you kidding me?

I only read the introduction, and I have a general feeling that the battle setting may be a bit inconsistent with One Piece. Generally, in One Piece, it is captain versus captain. For example, when fighting Kaido, it is definitely not the protagonist's turn to fight, only Luffy. The protagonist can fight against Zoro and Sanji at most. In the war, it can only be Luffy to fight Daibutsu. The protagonist fights against the second-tier generals.

. . . . Take a look at the introduction. . . . (??) Just a fool

The main character's name is Hei Tan. . . Reminds me of that book

This fruit really left me speechless. I might as well not eat it.

Why let the dragon give you the fruit... Why don't you just add it to the system?

This introduction? Composition for primary school students?

Chapter 2: Extremely poisonous, you give fruits when you meet. You said the system gives you better, and who would give fruits to animals? Or just met? And the most basic fruit is equivalent to one million Choppers.

In the first few chapters, I drew the weapon-colored domineering power. In the later chapters, this domineering power was eaten by the author, and the sword kept flying.

It's a flying sword again, it's so low. Ordinary people use swords to chop here and there, martial arts men also use swords to chop here and there. Even if you become an immortal, you still use swords to chop here and there. Isn't that all in vain! !

Is your surname Bao🙂🙂