Grindelwald at Hogwarts

The writing style is very good and worth reading. It would be better if it could be written faster and longer.

It's a bit like a running account, and I don't grasp the details.

Collect this Grindelwald bird for good luck in the new year

GGAD, YYDS!

The whole article is good to read, but there are too few natural paragraphs, and the whole article looks bloated. I'll give it a try. If nothing else, I'll probably order it all. ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶

Is the author not updating anymore😭😭😭😭 This is really one of the best articles related to GGAD that I have ever read. Please don't give up.

Good! ! ! ! ! Although I have just read the first chapter, as long as you write GGAD, we are half brothers!

Please don't let Dumbledore die.

The writing is quite good, but the paragraphs are not well divided and the punctuation marks are not very appropriate. I hope the author can improve it, otherwise it will be really difficult to read.

This book is tasteless and would be a pity to throw away. The boring thing is the plot, of course, I mean a bit monotonous. It is a pity that it is rare to write about Grindelwald.

Please give me more, thank you all (ಥ_ಥ)

The male protagonist is so poor that he has to change money. And who said Galleons can be exchanged at will. Muggle-borns can only exchange for 100 galleons.

Author, you are a bit contradictory. In your letter, you wrote that you can bring owls, cats and toads. If you resell this, buy a crow for the protagonist. 😅

There are so many typosah

I seem to have seen the story about the super-forgotten magic king, it's exactly the same

There are so few people ( ｰ̀εｰ́ )

Come on! You can do it!

Hello, I accidentally saw your article last night. I searched for it on the browser for a long time, and finally found your article at the starting point. Carrots and cabbages have their own preferences. I like the article you wrote very much. I also want to ask you if you can continue writing? Also, does Merlin have a cp (I hope not) and don't have a female protagonist 😢😢. Finally, I wish you can adjust your life as soon as possible and don't let this article enter the palace 😢😢

I feel that Dumbledore is a bit distant from the protagonist, after all, he is also his biological son 🙂

The first one looks pretty good, remember to keep up the good work!