You Can Slay a Dragon but You Don't Have To

It's obvious that he is a super literary author, but he has really done it. In one chapter, the plot is not developed very much and only the rhetoric is used for most of the chapter. After reading too much, I really feel tired and don't want to read it. Jiangnan is not as literary as you. Good stories cannot be told through literature and art. Everyone likes the occasional literary content. You are putting the cart before the horse when you treat the side dish as the main course. Not all books without literary content are good books. Writing such literary arts may be another kind of good literature.

I feel that not many people watch it because it is so literary and artistic. You are the most artistic among the fanfics I have read. . . Although you can control your writing and write well. Watch it carefully, although it brings in emotions, but too much is really tiring. If you don't read it carefully, it won't affect anything, but it won't resonate. . . . When I was watching the last third of the movie, I was really tired and skipped a few paragraphs. . .

Write a novel, is it so literary? A lot of rhetoric, the story doesn't progress much, and I feel bored after reading too much.

If some readers feel that the plot is too literary and too slow, I can't help it. After all, it is a fan novel about the Dragon Clan. It is difficult for me to overcome my inner feeling and write this fan novel as an urban online novel. Writing interesting articles actually requires a lot of skills. Readers need to figure out what makes it interesting. Unfortunately, I, a new writer, do not have this ability. It is easier for me to guess the original work and then write according to the drawings. So let each flower catch its own eye. This book has only one heroine, Xia Mi, because I feel that I am emotionally weak and cannot write harem novels. As for Eri's skill with swordsmanship, to be honest, I also thought about having a double heroine (Natsumi + Eri) at first, but it was really difficult, so I decided to have a single heroine. In fact, if you get a character card, it will be obvious to everyone, but I don't know how to get it. Some readers reported that the update time was not very friendly. In fact, I wanted to update it in the early morning and then have 6 monthly welfare tickets credited. The data would look better, and the ranking would rise while other authors did not update (although it is useless.) Finally, please invest a little bit if you can still invest. I will make a small recommendation with 100 investment soon. If the collection-to-subscription ratio is 20:1, it would take about 10,000 collections to get 500 subscriptions. My goal for this book is 500 subscriptions (the first time I write a book, it counts as a success!), So there is still a long way to go, and I really need the exposure of recommendations. Thank you all.

Oh my god, I looked up and saw that it was full of rhetorical techniques. I know that you, the author, are highly educated, but can you restrain yourself a little? A casual sentence like the dragon clan makes people feel amazing. Your article is full of them, which makes people feel long-winded and careless.

How can writing be called good? It's time to be literary when it's time to be literary, and your writing can be colorful and even resonant. But flowers can't always be in bloom. Everyone is here to read novels, not to show off your writing skills. If you can explain something clearly in one sentence, don't write it in a paragraph. It's too confusing. You've also seen Dragon Clan, and you probably know what "self-narcissism" is all about.

Wow wow wow it's so hard to find a seedling that I really like! I have dubbed all Xia Mi's words in Sixty-Three, please support me!

The author has a serious question for you. It is really undesirable for you to talk about the plot in the chapter before it is published. It will have a serious impact on subsequent readers' perceptions. Nowadays, more and more people are writing about Dragon Clan fan fiction, and your work will be read by more newcomers like me. By then, they will all be scared away by this chapter of spoilers for you. I strongly recommend that you delete or modify it. The other parts are well written. The theme of the Dragon Clan is all about atmosphere. Capturing the reader's heart will capture everything. Tickets are presented.

Let's add a heroine named Hui Liyi. Two heroines would be great.

Pseudo-literary youth, who insists on expressing sorrow in order to compose new words, and the description is gorgeous, but it is pale and looks boring.

Personally, I think that there should not be too much suspense in the work at the same time, and it is best to give readers a clear goal. This book has great descriptions of the environment and characters, but I personally think it has two shortcomings. First, there are too many suspenses. Many characters are Riddlers or have shocking secrets. The protagonist, the protagonist's parents, the younger generation of the family, Odin and another Dragon King... Their identities and experiences are all unknown to the readers. As the plot progresses, it is not that suspense is revealed one after another, but new suspense is constantly added. Over time, I just feel that the story is covered with a layer of fog. The second is that there is no clear goal. For example, Fighting to Break the Sphere is to become the Emperor, and Harry Potter is to kill Voldemort. The author of this book does not seem to tell us what the protagonist is going to do after the book is released. Slay the dragon? He doesn't seem to have expressed his yearning for dragon slaying, and the identity of the protagonist is a mystery. Maybe he is a dragon. Looking for parents? The protagonist doesn't care much about his parents' situation either. Pursuing friendship and love? There doesn't seem to be much description. So, what does the protagonist want to do? Just like the title of this book: You can slay the dragon but it's not necessary, so what's necessary?

I feel that this book is the only one among the Dragon Clan fandom that looks like the original novel, and the other one has no money. Others really don't have that flavor, the dialogue is too plain and the writing is not deep. And if I don't like it, it's written with the bad boy being the protagonist. I personally gave it a pass even if the second creation was also the protagonist (it's a personal preference, don't criticize), which resulted in no Dragon Clan fans watching it 🙂

Reading a book is a very personal matter, and so is writing a book. Come on, author.

Being a literary person is not a problem. The style of writing can be different. People will appreciate any kind of work. The Dragon Clan, which is written by a literary person, will be read by many people. However, the problem with this book is that even if it contains a lot of unexplained dreams and a lot of inexplicable words in character interactions, it cannot cover up the author's lack of writing power when describing character interactions. I feel that the dialogue is not written well enough. Maybe the energy is put into constructing the background mood of the full text, and the core content of the book feels very childish.

The author proposed three plot directions at the end of Chapter 83, and it seems that the third one has been chosen so far, "Aso Makoto joins the protagonist, in order to save Aso Makoto." I don't quite understand why I saved her? According to the original plot, she will survive at least until the timeline of Dragons 3. As long as the protagonist stays away from her, she can live well for now.

Author YYDS! ! ! !

Are you a young man? I think this is just right for the Dragon Clan.

I hope there will be an entire plot where Tachibana Masamune also tries to resist Herzog. In the original work, the loving father in the front and the clown in the back look really disgusting.