Ke Xue Undertaker

Just look at it and I'll tell you that among Conan fans there are ghost collectors, ghost collectors, and a person who grooms the deceased, and now there are coffin bearers, tsk tsk, TM only needs a suona to complete the whole thing, let Conan go, Conan is so miserable!

I can't help it I started reading the author's last book, so I can barely be considered an old reader. I saw about the Conan show in the last book and stopped reading it. It was too embarrassing. Relatively speaking, this book has progressed, but not much. The relationship between the protagonist and Sonoko is still the same as in the previous book. There are inexplicably multiple grapefruits. It's okay to open the copy with children in advance. It feels like the author added it for his own fun. I started reading this book three or four days ago, and I just caught up with it. I feel that the author's writing is still too unfamiliar. First of all, the first point is that the protagonist's love scenes are almost exactly the same as the book, including the time when she gets along with Yuanzi's parents, and when she gets along with Yuanzi, they are really almost exactly the same. Author, you must first understand something clearly. No couple starts chatting about Sese when they have nothing to do together. Moreover, this kind of plot is not suitable to be written too many times. It will cause aesthetic fatigue. You are so good, just do it every few chapters. The protagonist will look like he has never seen a woman in his eight lives Then it seems that the hook you have set for the protagonist is a bit too big and can no longer be contained. The main plot of Conan cannot be pushed forward. Your solution is also very simple and crude. If you don't push it, just let the winery die suddenly and open the Onmyoji copy How to say this, each has its own advantages and disadvantages, but I don't like it in my opinion. Of course, most people who come to read this book are here for the male and female protagonists. It doesn't matter to the readers whether the protagonist is the main plot or not, but you can't be indifferent. If you don't pay attention to the main plot, you will have nothing to write about in the end, just like the current "Famous Detective" It's the same as "Exploring Conan", it all relies on daily skills, but you can't master daily routines, because your protagonist is an Onmyoji, and there is no point for you to master daily routines. The snake next door can solve cases on a daily basis, but you can't. It is recommended that the author carefully outlines the outline, establishes a main line for each work, and then develops branch plots along the main line. The author chose this setting very well. It is a local priesthood in Japan, and there are two big IP blessings, but the writing is really not outstanding. The reason is that the protagonist's character is not established, the characteristics are not distinctive enough, and there are a lot of loopholes in the plot logic. Many times, the actions of the protagonist are arranged just to push the plot. I hope the author can smooth these things out Another thing is that the author pays too much attention to the setting. At first, he restricted many things, and then slowly relaxed the authority. In my opinion, in a mystery comic, the protagonist has the ability to resurrect the dead. However, what is even more outrageous is this The ability can be upgraded at any time. It is recommended that the protagonist can be cheated, but it is best to limit it to a certain range. If NetEase Onmyoji were to be reproduced, it would be really good. Conan fans should focus on reasoning, after all, the tone of the original comic is there Okay, let me finish by saying, don't be systematic! No system! No system! The system will only limit your performance. If there are no system settings, wouldn't there be more content to write?，，，，，，                    ，，

Seal lifted

Comparing it with the previous book, I personally feel that the quality is actually not as good as the previous book. I felt that this book was rushed. The previous book also focused on a plot to help the male protagonist escape from bad luck and get into a relationship. This book came together too fast and too hastily. It's too boring. The last one was a sudden death in a winery and it was very confusing. This one is even more ruthless. Even if it is invaded by a higher plane, let alone the later stage, the plot starts to run crazy from the time of resurrection. What kind of reasoning is there? It's a cool story in cross-dressing. A few suggestions for the author's next book: 1. The relationship between the male protagonist and Mariko can be slower and longer 2. The male protagonist's character can be changed, the characters in the two books are quite close 3. Think more about how to write the interaction between lovers, and stop chattering all the time 4. Be cautious about cheating, don't be too outrageous Come on, author, I like to read the Conan novels of Mariko, and I am counting on you.

Pursuing reading is really important! Recommendation depends entirely on reading, please support me~ ヾ(≧O≦)~

Pomelo, looks bigger

Are there any other novels about garden heroines?

Onmyoji

To be honest, you didn't write the cool part about being the only one that you can do well. You also don't have the Mariko Candy part, nor Detective Conan. So I think the author should carefully consider the outline and how to integrate it into a good story. . .

Sonoko's real body

It's quite interesting at the beginning, but I don't know if it's because I have too few subscriptions. I've been catching up on the plot and it's going very fast. Many plots that can be unfolded haven't been written yet, and it feels like it's unfinished.

From the previous book. How to say it. I raised it for a few days before, and then the plot became a little incoherent. So I started from the beginning, and I felt that the author was almost 70% undecided, 20% plot, and 10% love. Which makes me feel that there is a bit of awkwardness between the protagonist and Mariko?

The hat seals Gin's appearance.

This is the beauty of the gardenValue

Author! Is it possible to speed up the funeral ceremony or extend the time for the deceased to wake up, so that the deceased can personally attend (preside over) his own funeral? I suddenly thought of a way: the most expensive package, you can let the deceased wake up at the funeral, and let the deceased personally preside over his own funeral🤔😂

The plot was good in the early stages but became more and more abnormal later on, with an inexplicable sense of dissonance. It felt like a debut novel. It was obviously good at the beginning, but why were there so many counter-setting contents in the back? I also suggested staying away from the original novel. I recommended it to a classmate before, but she felt that I didn't respect the original novel and messed around with CP. I only represent my personal views on the characters in the book. Don't add characters indiscriminately for a certain point. Forcibly explaining and highlighting this will be very detrimental to subsequent reading. You can find a few commentaries to help you read it.

It's on the shelves. . Post a photo of Conan wearing women's clothing

After raising it for two months, I clicked it and took a look. Well, it's finished |•ω•`)

I especially like the story about the garden girl. I want to watch a story about Moori Kogoro and the heroine Sonoko. It's better to hide the blatant underground love affair from everyone and add lots of funny elements!

The back is not good, but the front is okay. Don't you know what to write? Two thousand words and one thousand five hundred words for Yuanzi are really outrageous.

After seeing more than 200 pictures, I started to feel bored, and the writing was a bit confusing. Feeling a little broken.

I've read more than 300 chapters, and there are too many love stories (*￣rǒ￣) Pick your nose

By the way, the protagonist can completely destroy the world, okay? The connected countries such as volcanoes, oceans and miasma can destroy the country, the earth can be connected to space to destroy the world, and the sun and black hole are connected to the earth. Any international criminal organization is a joke in front of major powers. Also, isn't Koizumi Hongzi good at divination?

Those who keep praising "Ascend Another Day" are sick.

Isn't it going to be the end of the book soon? Why does it feel like the pace is too fast?

I hope it won't end too soon 🤐

In Chapter 404, it is said that there is no problem with Karuizawa Villa. In fact, there is. In episode 356, Yuanzi calls Xiaolan to play tennis at her Karuizawa Villa.

Ah? I just saved a little bit, why is it over?

The progress is too fast

After reading it in two days, I realized that I started writing it last year. I have no habit of keeping up with updates, so I can only keep it for now.