I Will Live Forever in the World of Immortality

The purpose of this book is clear, don't fight or grab, the Taoist Fruit has been obtained and it is the Taoist Fruit of Immortality. Therefore, the so-called genius, the son of luck, and the destruction of the world can stay alive as long as they avoid the pig's feet. Long life and long sight. Where does the battle between heaven and earth come from? It's all because I can't survive. Being able to see directly for a long time is a great freedom. If you don't get kidnapped by the big boss and other rules, it will be a happy cultivation of immortality. The other books are all about fighting for luck and opportunity, and unknowingly you have fallen into the trap of Empress Mo. Just pig's feet. I went directly to Rome and gradually enriched my skills. If you live a long time and things like opportunities, you can naturally pick them up. Although they are not top-notch, they are not hot and difficult to be plotted.

The current status of this novel

The idea of ​​this book is actually not new, but the writing and plot are really good and make people resonate with them, which makes this book stand out. In the book rating stage, I will explain my evaluation of this book. (Minor spoilers) 1. Mortal Chapter I think it is the best chapter written. The character of the protagonist is successfully created, and every supporting character has flesh and blood. This volume tells the story of the change of dynasties and the vicissitudes of the world, and writes about the commonality of human nature and the sublimity of heroes. Hongchang, Li Wu, Zhang Xiang, Yu Su, Lao Bai... Everyone's story is unforgettable. The protagonist's growth and changes in temperament are also written very naturally. 2. Cultivation of Immortality This volume seems relatively dull. The protagonist actually has no heart-to-heart with anyone. The only person who helps the protagonist grow up is Senior Brother Zhang. However, Senior Brother Zhang has no offspring and his life is extinguished. Others, such as Xuan Yu, only have some fate, and the fate of fate makes the protagonist have certain feelings. 3. The End of Dharma Chapter This volume is a small climax, with good and evil fighting swords, and the path to immortality is cut off. Xuanxiao destroys demons and seeks peace, and transforms into gods for the common people; the Earth Fire Palace transforms into Baiyun Temple, helping heaven and earth to suppress all ghosts; Yellow Ox sends the inheritance of the three demons, and their souls enter the building wood. The characters are deeply portrayed and the plot is excellent. Although the plot moves a little too fast and is a bit far-fetched in some places, it is generally well written. 4. Changes This is the first half of the fourth volume. It writes about the changes of the times. To be honest, it is average. The characters lead the times simply by having the Kunlun inheritance, and their personal characteristics are not reflected at all. Although the plot is still interesting, and the foreshadowing is recycled and the emotions are sold, I can only say that it is somewhat unsatisfactory. 5. Recovery . . . This volume is really bad. The characters are not well drawn, the chat group is of no use, the avatar's preaching has no beginning and no end, and the people who enter Kunlun have no follow-up. The Night Walk of Hundred Ghosts is like child's play. In the end, it is directly closed for hundreds of years, and the reason for opening the world of high martial arts in a hurry is too far-fetched. The protagonist interferes too much in this era, which is not in line with the protagonist's character. I hope it will be better in the future. It is recommended to write less about technological factors. After all, it is difficult to measure different power systems.

Who cares what they do. From the beginning of this book, I thought it would be about modern immortality. If you want to listen to them, you can just write it after the end of the world (world wars and the like) and the restart of civilization. I really don't understand that those people can obviously run to the stars and the sea, but they have to be limited to a small planet. Only the earth can cultivate immortality, right? I really want to see the author write the protagonist to celebrate the opening of the universe with alien ladies from other races.

Personal evaluation Liangcao There is a very small possibility that it will be immortal grass in the future Cultivation of immortality is for immortality. I have become immortal. Why am I cultivating immortality? In the early stage, I still saw that the author wanted to express some of his own ideas. However, from the middle stage, he completely went towards cultivating immortality through Gou Dao, and there was no immortality. My favorite part is still the plot in the prison. In the same room, you can get to know all kinds of people, you can know many stories, you can learn about the world, and you can understand yourself. All the characters that left an impression on me were from this period, including White Thief and General Li. The experiences of these two people also let me see what I think is the story of immortal people. To live forever, you are destined to be outside the story, and all your stories are meaningless, because you are still alive, and while you live forever, you will never be a story. You are not the person in the story, but you are influenced by the people in the story, change yourself, and at the same time encounter another story in the story. Don't underestimate the people in the story, this is what you should learn, so I think the curse killing technique is an absolute failure at present, or it is too early, just like an editor who forces you to finish it, you will never see the story again. Actually, before I saw Lifespan Curse Kill, I thought it was possible to use fairy grass, but after having this skill, it is difficult for me to be optimistic. It is refreshing, but the overall level has dropped a lot. At the current progress, basically all the foreshadowings have been recovered, and the transformation time has begun. It seems that the protagonist will not be born (except for celebrations). I can't see the story anymore. So I am now very pessimistic about the development of the book. My favorite among the immortals is "The Burial of Fulian", the story of the hero after the hero, the story of the immortals looking back on the previous stories, experiencing the present story, and looking for what immortality is. To cultivate immortality, is it the first to cultivate immortality or to live forever? What is the purpose of cultivating immortality? Cultivation of immortality is not for immortality, but for immortality. Then, the current story and the previous story will always accompany the protagonist through this journey, and the rest will pass away. Whether it is a fairy grass or not depends on the next two volumes.

From today on, I officially abandon the book. You are really rude. You haven't updated it for so long. You didn't tell me why. I will refresh it several times for you every day. Bye.

When I saw a mechanical car, I immediately came over to comment. It was bullshit. Without the accumulation of hundreds of years of natural science, you could build a car or a mechanical watch. 😅 The knowledge and technology accumulated by so many people in modern times for a hundred years allowed you to solve the problem. It's really awesome. If nothing else, it's just mathematics. , Newton or Leibniz traveled through time and was reborn? Or Edison and Tesla's soul passed through? The technological tree that has not developed for thousands of years has reached the earth's thousands of years of accumulation with the power of one person. Is it that the other world is too powerful or the experience of the earth cannot be applied? Asimov is not as bright as the author. He clearly writes so well in the beginning, but it's a pity that he jumps too much in the back. I thought the people who mentioned the collapse of the new world in the comment section at the beginning were talking nonsense. I believe it now. Maybe the requirements for this book are too high, otherwise there wouldn't be so many bbs 😊

Look at others, then look at you

I can't help it anymore. You said you can read the first 200 chapters more or less, but you can't stand it at all. You can't stand the routine of retreating into seclusion and being a gangster to meet the descendants of old friends and pretend to be cool. Even if you write about daily life, it's better than this, right? I also believed your heresy and said that it was neither good nor unfinished and unsatisfactory, so I really ordered all of them. It's too flimsy. The free chapters are written with care, but the paid chapters are just bad money. They are sloppy from beginning to end.

There are too many poisonous points in the middle period of this book. It brings about a steam era and eats things like peanuts. . But there is nothing written about any classical fairy tale. Just because this thing is hard to describe compared to barley and millet. The most important thing is that the yield per mu of this thing is low and cannot be used as food. It is not comparable to rice and white flour, so 99% of farmers will not grow this thing. In the 1950s and 1960s, sweet potatoes, sweet potatoes, rice and barley were still the mainstream. Planting peanuts would starve anyone to death. What's more, you don't even have a physical foundation and just use steam. It's really poisonous. With just a few mechanical books, you can make some machine puppets to hold up the sky. You can even make a pocket watch. The pinion is so thin. Do you know how strong the craftsmanship is? It's really poisonous to give one to everyone. Let's talk about the ancient civilization of immortals and Buddhas. How was it created? Did they break their brains and travel across Europe to catch up with the Renaissance?                                                                                                                                                                                                                consumed by the fairy tales, but there should be some underlying logic, right? Abandoned, abandoned, this book is unknown.

I don't like watching eunuchs. I also don't like to look at good maps with high martial arts and forced low martial arts. Now just watch the beginning without subscribing, don't even think about cutting leeks.

The beginning is really good. Although the celebrations and early notes throughout the text are somewhat imitated by Dafeng Daggengren, the writing style remains very smooth and smooth, cheerful and connotative. I also took several screenshots to share with friends, but then I started to take the modern route and suddenly lost interest. I started reading for the first time. Although I don't know whether the author had some modern-related whims or the original plot was unsustainable and wanted to expand, but many readers should have been lost because of this. It is a pity to lose a book that can be read for a long time.

I originally thought that the protagonist had achieved immortality, and this book was supposed to be a book about enjoying life easily. Occasionally, you might have an epiphany of magical powers or the like, and it doesn't have to be very lethal. It should mainly reflect the fairy atmosphere. Usually, I often form good relationships, and I will pull in the ones I see that I like. The key to my long life is to be free and easy. Unexpectedly, this book has a gimmick of immortality. The book is almost full of tense struggles for survival. There is no fairy flavor at all, and I feel tired just reading it.

How can I put it, writing a book in the second update is still very interesting. However, it is true that there are many eunuchs. Maybe I wrote it based on inspiration, and it is really good. But in the later stage, I inevitably made the same mistakes that most people have. No inspiration, no ideas, no outline, no creativity, no enthusiasm. In the middle period, I started to get frustrated, then I was perfunctory, and then I couldn't write anymore, and I became a eunuch. Judging from the two books of Demon Slayer Division, the author has basic skills and abilities. But how to deal with this subject in the later stage? I wrote two books and wrote it for two years, but I still haven't dealt with it well. It is indeed difficult to deal with, immortality, summer insects cannot speak of ice, how can mortals know immortality. It's not to blame for the second update, maybe it's time to try new themes. But... Whether it's your comfort zone or your life, it's your own choice. Or maybe you are afraid that people will criticize you, so you keep changing your vests. I think you are constantly growing and trial and error, and I can understand your behavior. So I send you my best wishes and hope that you will one day be recognized and appreciated by everyone, no matter what field you are in. Come on, Special Forces. I'm here waiting for your final answer.

The front is okay, but the back is not good when the ancestral line is broken There are also tricks one by one If you add the mythical story, it will be basically boring. You can guess the identity of the protagonist with just one guess.

Gou Tao has changed, and the original intention has long been forgotten. Knowing that some of the Avatars are still alive and can threaten themselves by resurrecting any of them, they are still wandering around, almost all their trump cards have been leaked. What if there is an avatar who manages to use some secret method to plot against the protagonist? Will the protagonist be cool? He is becoming more and more mentally retarded. All the precautions he took in the early stage have been forgotten, and he will definitely be hunted down by the avatar in the future. What a fool.

Give it up, give it up, it's too routine, it's so boring.

To be honest, this book is considered very good among a bunch of immortality books (skip the volume on modern spiritual energy recovery), and it is among the best. It describes the feeling of immortality sitting back and watching the changes in the world. It's a pity that Duan Geng (eunuch) is such a loser. Or it would be good to treat it as the finale just to see the adult become a fairy.

The protagonist is so stubborn, how could a person who has cultivated the golden elixir for such a long time not practice well every day and meddle in other people's business!

When I first read this book, it was very interesting in the early stages. Unfortunately, the author didn't grasp the pacing very well and covered the evolution of civilization in just a few chapters. This book is similar to the historical "I am God!" "It's quite similar, but it starts with Creation plus Eternal Bonus God plus Civilization. No matter how I look at your book, it is a low-end version. It just starts with immortality plus Gou plus a simplified version of Civilization plus Xianxia. Box B is a bit far behind! Civilization is not destroyed just because it is destroyed. You are prone to natural and man-made disasters at every turn.

There is the Taoist fruit of immortality, but no power to protect the Tao. To survive and grow is not to be a turtle with a shrinking head. Now this is not called Gou, it is running away, unwilling to face any danger, but can you keep running away forever? There will always be a day when there is no escape and no escape! Endless life means endless variables. With the fruit of immortality and the treasure of children, under the entanglement of fate and cause and effect, sooner or later something terrible will come to your doorstep, and you will dig it out even if it hides in the cracks of rocks. Keep growing and increase your strength. Your left hand will be immortal and your right hand will be invincible. You will be fearless and carefree.

To be fair, it's really well written, and I don't think it's a bad one. It's great to finish it all. 🙂 This book is actually very paced throughout, and there are very few derailments or unclear explanations. I highly recommend reading it. I think that except for Sun Changsheng's trouble in heaven, which is a bit forced, everything else is in place, and there are quite a lot of linkages.

As for the articles I wrote earlier, the ones I wrote later are getting worse and worse.

The author goes to "celebrate" every three days. How can he write well when his body can't support it?

Burn incense and say goodbye, let him update as soon as possible

The author writes well, keep up the good work

This update speed is really unparalleled. Does the eunuch chapter require eunuchs in this book?

Stuck here

I feel pretty good. For the only book I'm currently following, I don't feel like I'm stuck on the word count. Instead, I feel like the plot is moving too fast. In fact, I could add some details to control the pace.

If he really lived forever, he would probably go crazy!