Mythical Three Kingdoms: My Entries Are Infinitely Improved

I'm really angry, and I'm very wet from the beginning to the end. I've read more than 500 chapters, am I qualified to speak? I've been holding on for a long time, and I really can't stand it anymore. Sometimes I cross out a whole chapter of yours within two minutes of reading it. Why? Because you can probably tell it's a dialogue, do you think the reader is mentally retarded? So much inner life for so many supporting characters, maybe even a whole chapter. Often a few people discuss one thing and go on for an entire chapter. It's not a fault that the plot is pushed slowly, but the fault is that it's all nonsense and the dialogue is watered down. How about water? Talk about something and use different expressions to ask each other, "Is this true?" "Is it true?" "How are you sure?" "I think/I can prove/My opinion is" and similar content. Don't pretend to be pitiful, have something to do at home, etc. If something happens, reduce the update frequency to ensure quality. Don't waste too much money on the word count. Don't say you are not a great writer. Great writers don't respect readers for the large number of words. I won't read it. I think that spending money on genuine books is enough to criticize and have reasons to express dissatisfaction. Only high-quality articles will attract more readers to stay, rather than the more readers you read, the more readers will leave. I insist on seeing that now I really admire myself. I can't stand it and it confuses the readers.

There is neither a single person who dominates the country nor an invincible one. It is very inexplicable to write about this monster. The author has ruined it for himself. Could it be that his account has been sold?

First of all, I have seen a lot of Three Kingdoms-themed movies. From the beginning, I subjectively believed that the protagonist should have a goal, such as the first-generation emperor to protect, or the minister of the dragon in the grave grass. So the first ten chapters seem poisonous. But after seeing about forty chapters now, I basically understand that this is the genre of brain-filling monsters, a genre of straightforward, pretentious and cool writing. A consensual "magic stick", the protagonist is an "ordinary" person like Mr. Pei and Ji Yuan who is shown to be a saint in front of others and sometimes takes the initiative to show off himself. The protagonist's inadvertent actions appear reasonable with the help of other people's imagination. Now the plot has gone crazy, and the Three Kingdoms has become a world of infinite possibilities. This is interesting, and if done properly, fire can depend on this. This is where the problem comes. The first one, Mr. Pei, has this Dihua system to deal with conflict points and a systematic money replenishment mechanism; Ji Yuan is the one who regards changing the world as his own responsibility and pretends to be upright. Now the conflict between the protagonist of this book is that he is a handsome man with a yellow turban, but he is too low-end and seems brainless. But recently, showing off in front of the counselor is very high-end, but in the end it still ends up in that small place, which makes people happy, but also very regretful. This is what needs to change, and what the protagonist should grow up with. Otherwise, it will just be a mindless article. (I personally hope that the protagonist can grow up) Second, the power system of the Three Kingdoms always feels strange. A great Qu Shuai can chop down hills, but Huang Zhong feels very weak. And in a world that can split mountains, but has basically no magic skills... These counselors are just counselors? Then isn't this a world of martial arts? The protagonist is like a cultivator in the urban immortality stream, with a high-dimensional foundation to make it easier for others to show off as a saint? (Is this more like a cool article?) The last thing is writing and researching information. Writing can only be practiced slowly. The author is also a newbie and is making progress. There are some shortcomings in checking the information, I hope it can be more rigorous (I personally like to read more rigorous ones). All in all, this is a good novel so far. The protagonist wants to live hard, but is short-sighted. However, his invincibility and his luck (arranged by the author) will make the whole chaotic world of the Three Kingdoms full of fun. For example, inexplicably becoming the emperor in the end is possible. When it comes to funny and enjoyable writing, it is very qualified and can change your life, but don't take it too seriously, otherwise it will be fun. But for now, if the protagonist slowly changes and takes the initiative to become a hero competing in the Central Plains, this is a hegemony story, and it is also a cool way; or if he takes the initiative to become a capable minister in governing the world, this is not a bad way. At least for now, I will give you recommendation votes every day. This one is at least readable.

The last few chapters... Are indeed good enough. At least I can draw up a basic chart or a situation map. A mental activity can be described in a chapter. In fact, it can be described through analysis, dialogue, or the development of things. It is not necessary to explain it all with your own inner monologue. Do you feel that reading the book has a kind of obscenity?

What should I do if there are not enough updates?

Okay, it's still good to update it.

The creativity is very interesting, come on, wait for the update

I hope the author will do this🙂

I feel like the protagonist's logic doesn't make sense. Shouldn't this kind of farming writing focus on making up for its shortcomings? The speed of land reclamation in the early stage is okay, and I can practice my skills. I calculated that it takes 11,100 experience to upgrade advanced spear skills. 1.5 Requires 7,400 times at a time, and it takes two hours every second. Does it include half a day of rest? Half a day of advanced spear skills to protect yourself is not better than the temporarily useless farming skills? Isn't this more useful than upgrading your well water and upgrading your agricultural skills? What farming articles look at is the development of increasing your heritage. What's exciting is that you take on the role of the protagonist and watch yourself become stronger a little bit. Can't you bring it in? Force is your shortcoming. If you don't improve your shortcomings, it will all rely on the plot to promote it?

Water, water, water, water, water, water, my scalp is numb and I can't stand it. Such a good subject is considered useless, alas.

The more I read, the more confused I become. Is the author trying to deliberately create contradictions? To improve the word count? Lu Bu, you don't want it. There is a problem with this, and there is a problem with that. It's okay to think about it. Every day, you think about the problem with this, and you don't trust that, and you think you are not strong enough, and then you want to find this and that. I used to be dismissive of Lu Bu and said that I can easily upgrade many Lu Bu's templates by upgrading entries. I don't have time to develop in the early stage and don't rush to recruit people. I still want to let Lu Bu follow the historical process. What kind of brain?

The author comes in and takes a look Whether it is the comment section or the book review, everyone is saying you are stupid, so you should have some idea. If you don't have an outline, organize it first, then write it, and update it occasionally. If it's just because it's on the shelves and it's going to be popular, you'll understand after you become popular. The subscription ratio will definitely drop significantly. It is estimated that many people will keep some of them and then go to watch pirated copies. Then you feel that your performance is not good, so you can either use love to generate electricity or cut it off forever.

So it's not the readers' fault, the authors of Hanging Street are looking for death themselves.

Reward 200 just to say, rubbish 😅 The early stage is very good, the later stage is huge, the protagonist's honey operation makes people cry The person who can watch it is either a primary school student, or a master with full poison resistance (PS: As for why I am still a trainee, because I watched it on qq reading)

It's almost chapter 180 and the timeline is still here. It's so frustrating! It took so long to write about a village, so I don't know how long it will take to write about it later! The plot advances too slowly

The main reason is that some things are too ink-filled. If you want to write about farming flow, just write about farming. If you want to develop, you should develop well. If you have a military commander and still do it in ink, don't try to explain everything clearly. Some things can be omitted and the progress will be faster. There is time for farming, but the best farming articles are not written day by day. The writing is detailed and concise, and the subject matter is quite good.

The front is fine, but the writing is wrong. A remote village should have a remote look. It has to grow slowly and farm. The land has not been hoeed for a few acres, but the big shots are one after another. The world of Han Dynasty is so small? The strangest thing is that Huang Zhong, who is anonymous, is not known in big cities such as Jingzhou. Instead, in a remote village, he attracts people who don't know how far away he is. Is it strange?

I have read more than 100 chapters. After it was released, I read 10 chapters. 10 Chapters, but nothing seems to be relevant. I am impressed. Author, if you were during the period of Dayu's flood control, Dayu would never even think of entering your home in this life.

Subscribe chapter by chapter. I saw Zhang Jue's work which was relatively weak but not bad, so I ordered it all. I saw Sun Ce stealing food and killing dozens of his own soldiers. He said it was good and let him go. Author, you are so awesome. I was drugged out. I'm afraid I will have to find a psychiatrist for treatment if I continue reading.

I've seen Chapter 475. In the early stage, it is understandable that you do not want to change history and lose your ability to predict the future. As a result, the revenue is still crazy. Isn't this also changing history? Later I felt that if history changed, I would change it. I had a golden finger and was not afraid. As a result, those who deserved to be killed were let go again and again. How does Zhang Jiao treat the protagonist? Nothing to say, the original point was for the people, but the protagonist didn't even think about changing his fate and just killed him. To rehabilitate the Yellow Turban Army, according to Liu Hong, the protagonist can rebel when the army is in hand. But no, he returns to his own territory and recruits his subordinates to develop and strengthen himself. Why do you develop and strengthen yourself? Are you waiting for the collapse of the Han Dynasty and the reunification of the Three Kingdoms period? You can rebel and gain the world directly. I don't, I want to redress the Yellow Turban Army and go home and slowly strengthen myself. Then wait for the big man to decay and collapse and split into three, and then unify himself? In this process, I won't kill the main characters who will rebel in the later stage, even those who want to kill me. I just want to let them go. Isn't this unhealthy? Although what I said is poisonous, I can bear it. What the hell is Liu Xiu in the Forbidden Land? He didn't give anything to the protagonist, and he still pretended to be cool in situations that he didn't even know about. It seemed like he had done so much. The Forbidden Land is over, and it's just the few chapters I've read. I went to the White Jade Tower, and whatnot, I don't want to read it at all. Can you believe it? The protagonist's golden finger is gone, and the entry system is swallowed up by a fruit rewarded by a forbidden land. The names of the novels all have entries, but you told me that the entry system is gone and the traditional novel about cultivating immortals has been changed. This is still a matter of opinion!

What did you write about, you let go of the people who robbed you of your food and killed you?

It is completely developing towards becoming more and more watery, and becoming more and more deluded. It even feels like a battle of wits and courage with the air. Is it because my brain can't keep up, or is it infinite water?

The protagonist can't even understand the documents of the Three Kingdoms. He knows he can't understand but doesn't learn it. It's too poisonous.

It's really annoying. I originally came here to read this book for the Three Kingdoms, but it turned out that apart from the names of the characters, it had nothing to do with the Three Kingdoms! Forget it, give it up!

It's just a matter of opinion. If your own strength doesn't improve, what will others see if you upgrade every time? Farming literature is not this kind of method. If you are not awesome, sooner or later it will be cool.

It's outrageous to let hostile people go without any reason. Sun Jian wanted to steal the protagonist's house but was released after being defeated by Lu Bu. Sun Ce's soldiers who stole the protagonist's food and grass and killed the protagonist were also let go by Huang Zhong. It's outrageous to say that it was the protagonist who let go. But what's even more outrageous is that it wasn't the protagonist who let go. It was Lu Bu and Huang Zhong himself. They are a bunch of garbage.

From the inexplicable camp confrontation of the Three Kingdoms, to the inexplicable farming after the confrontation, to the inexplicable cultivation of immortality after farming, and guess what, the Three Kingdoms started again. This ability to make money is really amazing, absolutely amazing. The author is a talented person. I think it will be okay to write for decades, right? 🙃🙃🙃

What follows is more and more ink and water. When writing about the system, you should mention the system a little more. 90% Of your article is a water monologue. I can't stand it anymore.

Fair imagination, average writing style, average qualifications

Author, you know what you want to write, and you are looking for someone to write it for you later. As a novelist for 10 years, your novel was actually quite good before. Later, you started with the monster, and continued to highlight the protagonist. What kind of novel is this novel you wrote? Farming novels, the Three Kingdoms, it was an era where talents emerged in large numbers. Your character writing is OK, but the protagonist is very frustrated. It's like playing Red Alert, and in the later stage you no longer have the base, and you make a mod to become Cyber 2077. It feels weird, just farm well. Well, you want to write your own novel about cultivating immortals. You can open a new one. Write a novel in which the protagonist is a city lord in the fairy world. He can go back and forth between the three kingdoms and the fairy world. He can train his generals through golden fingers and use the materials in the fairy world to change the three kingdoms. That is much better than what you are doing.