I Can Keep Speeding Up

The story of the novel, which combines clan development and immortality cultivation, is quite good. It avoids the clichés of Qidian Orphanage and the ambiguous flow of sisters and sisters, and the pattern is relatively big. The story of the protagonist's cultivation of immortality is quite satisfactory, not necessarily invincible, but it is a bit cool, the cheats are moderately strong, and the adventure logic is reasonable, which is good.

It can only be said that there is conflict for the sake of conflict! One is his brother who was injured and forced to fight. He was practicing at the seventh level of Qi as a teenager. I am at the foundation building stage of the opponent. You can't survive more than two chapters. The second is the plot of the fake elixir tomb. You are at the ninth level of Qi training, and you are following a group of people at the ninth level of Qi training and the foundation building stage. How watery are these people! You just practiced a rubbish technique. Summary: Forcibly advance the plot and forcibly lower IQ and strength. By the way, it's really annoying to pay too much attention to the so-called family level! It's a pity, Golden Finger is fine, it's not perverted and useful. .

I will only say one thing: practice the second level of Qi.

The protagonist has already reached the late stage of the first level of Qi training. The protagonist has reached the peak of the first level of Qi training. The protagonist has reached the perfection of the first level of Qi training. The protagonist has already reached the great perfection of the first level of Qi training. The protagonist has already reached the second level of Qi training halfway.

Many places are really broken. Do you have an outline? The protagonist is fourteen years old when he appears, and has just broken through to the fourth level of Qi refining. He is considered to have good spiritual qualifications in the family. After that, I made rapid progress and established a foundation at the age of sixteen, which I won't go into. When he went to mine the spirit stone mine, he said that Qian Changshuo's qualifications were not very good, and then said that he had been at the fourth level of Qi refining for three years. He was one year younger than the protagonist, which meant that he reached the fourth level at the age of twelve and entered the fourth level one year earlier than the protagonist. There was also Qian Changjing, who had already reached the peak of the third level of Qi refining at the age of ten. In comparison, the protagonist was a complete waste. And if the progress is like this, why hasn't a foundation been built for hundreds of years?

You are not suitable for writing novels. You have no desire to read them. The plot is not reasonable at all.

The creativity is good, and other aspects are also good. It just feels like the protagonist (the author) has not graduated from primary school mathematics. There are many contradictions, and the numbers are inconsistent. It is clearly written that 61 points were used, and later it became 21 points. One spiritual stone is used to increase the proficiency of a first-level alchemist, and two are used to increase the level... And so on. The protagonist is still very happy. Does the author know what the concept of 1, 2, 4, 8... Is. To upgrade to a second-level alchemist, you need 2 to the power of 99. Do you know how big this is?

You say, the exercises are rubbish, the skills are rubbish, eh, he can just refine Qi and build foundations, you say he is not great!

I feel like I don't have much of a feeling 😒😒😒 The beginning is pretty good, but it gets a little bit toxic later on, especially when it comes to hiding your identity and going to the auction house to show off. When your enemies buy something, you add a piece of cake to show off. The key is that you don't have any money. It managed to amuse me, but I couldn't do it even if I had the brains to do it.

Can't you make elixirs without certification? I'm afraid that no one in the world knows that your Qian family is back! There is also an awesome alchemist! You all come and kill me! Right! You think your popularity is too high so you can buy the next batch! I still can't make it up myself.

Author: You are so popular that you want to add more! Is there any news about you and your dad breaking through the foundation building? But what's going on with this guy! His breakthrough is bigger than other people's orders! You're just making it up and you're just making it up! This is too outrageous!

. . . It's unremarkable, tasteless, and has a lot of shortcomings. How can I put it, just like a reader said, if you don't look carefully, you might be able to see it if you look carefully. . . It's like just making money, retreating, making money and retreating,

Qi training itself is a realm, and it is enough to divide it into stages. As a result, each small stage needs to be divided into three small levels to practice qi. There are thirty small levels. If you have the ability to really write down each one, I still have to convince you. Pity

I hate this the most, cheating and suppressing the protagonist at the same time, and making the protagonist look stupid and stupid.

The family culture of alchemy is good at the beginning, but you won't be able to do it later! It's disgusting to look at. It's like giving it to a nanny hired for free for everyone! Anyone can ask for it! Korean Fairy Road That's it! In short, I just can't make it up anymore! Plagiarism is not allowed. In the end, it is just fabrication.

It's pretty good if you don't look closely, but the main character spends too much on spiritual stones and is too spendthrift.

Let me tell you something, the first level of Qi refining, the middle level and the peak of the back level, the ninth level of Qi refining, and the ninth level of foundation building. I only read the first few chapters, which smelled like martial arts 😅😅 If you can read it, you can leave and slip away.

No wonder it's not popular, Goldfinger boasts that everything can be accelerated, but in the end, foundation building pills are needed to build the foundation, elixirs can't speed up life, and skills also need auxiliary materials, what's the point of breaking Goldfinger?

I don't know how to use magic during the foundation building stage, so I used Yiyang Finger. It successfully made me laugh.

Not bad, the progress is okay, come on! I hope that Zhujiao can consider land reclamation in the future. In other aspects, elixir refining, breeding, puppets, formations, Qi refining, pet training, etc. Are relatively complete. There are also unknown powerful enemies. The Zhenjun family will be destroyed at any time. Before Jindan, you can consider opening up wasteland and closing the goods. Set up the family first, and then you can develop as a guerrilla (you can leave shops in towns and have King Qin take care of them). Otherwise, your powerful enemy is an idiot and should have been alert. A family can have pets and puppets and develop for several generations. It's very interesting, Feizhou can also join in!

1: It's okay to read it without thinking, that is, don't worry about the logic of the immortality system in it, otherwise the math teacher will be pissed to death. Don't be too sensitive to data, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable to watch. There are some details that I guess the author is too lazy to explain. It's okay if you can understand them. If you don't understand them, it's a poisonous point that will directly persuade you to quit. 2: The novel idea is not bad. Energy analogues such as spirit stones are used to replace them with acceleration points through the system, which can be used to speed up the protagonist's practice or other sideline proficiency. 3: The writing is just average, overall it's okay. However, the author's outline may not have been properly prepared in advance. He writes whatever comes to mind, and occasionally forgets the previous part as he writes later, so that the logic of the context and context does not make sense, and it is quite uncomfortable when reading. 4: Some final personal comments: I hope the author will make a good outline and think about how the protagonist will develop in the future and the specific system for cultivating immortality, otherwise the eunuch will not run away. Fill in the holes that can be filled to reduce poisonous points. After you finish writing, if you can, read the previous and subsequent chapters by yourself to see if they are coherent. Also, since the protagonist has traveled through time, his mental perseverance is beyond that of a teenager, but not by much. I hope that in the following words, I can feel that the protagonist's character gradually grows, instead of remaining at a level where he only grows older but not IQ.                                                                              The above represents only my personal views

I suppressed it so hard that it felt useless.

What about below? Is there anything below the author?

All ordered, please add more details, author

It's not for nothing that this book is not popular. It has many poisonous points.

😡😡😡😡Hurry up and update. I owe so many chapters. Why don't you pay them back?

It looks good, but I can only pick a few flaws: the numbers are not very rigorous, such as repeated cultivation realms, etc. It will be better if I have time to modify them😄

A running account is better than forcing various routines, right?

Dear Taoist friends, I can't make up this book any more! It's all gone

There's Nangong Wan in it. Although I haven't read it, I'm not sure if it's a mortal cultivating immortality fanfic.