Zhutian: Start with a Ming Dynasty Time and Space Gate

Seeing the plot of the protagonist spending thousands of taels to sell a house at the entrance of the village not only reminded me of the scenes that often appeared in Hong Kong costume dramas when I was a child, spending hundreds of thousands or even millions of taels to buy a top brothel. Author, are you a colonial scholar of Chinese history?

I haven't read the novel, but just read the introduction. How do you compare attracting stars to absorbing power? ? ? ? ? Why do you need to compare when you are so rubbish in attracting stars?

This is the same as the Maoshan Republic of China. It's so similar, it's just copied without any cover-up.

I am afraid of death but greedy for money, so when the time and space gate binds me, I will choose to hand it over to the country🤓🤓

A certain passage in this chapter reminded me of an astronomy I saw before. It was written by the author of "The Heavens Begin from Maoshan". I still remember the shocking description in it. Pig's feet have become quasi-sages, and they compete with others. The two quasi-sages are your Baguazhang and my Xingyiquan. You jump at me and I kick you in the small square, and there are a group of Hunyuan saints watching the battle! It really refreshed my perspective at that time. I was born on the lowest starting point! Three million words of astronomical literature, the ending is written like this bird! I feel like even Ip Man is better than them at Jinshan! It caused great harm to my soul at that time, and I can't let it go for a long time!

It's already the Ming Dynasty, and he will settle there. The protagonist actually has to sell fake goods in exchange for money. After all, fake goods are fakes and there will always be times when they get involved. Aren't you afraid of the revenge of the local natives when they find out? Even if you sell glass mirrors, it is safer than selling fake jade. And in the Ming Dynasty, there was no saying that you would be a soldier for two years. Once you were a soldier, you would be a lifelong soldier.

The author imitated Maoshan's novel, but he really didn't get the essence. First of all, there was the issue of identity arrangement. During the Republic of China, it was said that those who came back from abroad were equal to seeing the world, and those from Nanyang were almost equal to being rich. But before the Ming Dynasty, or the Second Opium War, before the backbone of the Qing Dynasty was completely broken, if you said you came back from Nanyang, it was equivalent to saying you came back from a barbarian land. Let's not talk about whether you have money or not. Your status is equivalent to falling underground. If you want to be recognized, you can only say that you are overthinking. The biggest obstacle is the idea of ​​​​a heavenly kingdom. Do you still want to be the head of this family? Even if my family approves you for the sake of money, your Ji family is considered useless, and your ancestors will be looked down upon for eighteen generations. The country gentry will treat your Ji family as aliens, and maybe the government will send someone to your Ji family to hold you accountable. Not only you, but the entire Ji family will not be able to hold their heads high in public. This is not a problem that money can solve, but a problem that naturally destined you to have no future. The plot arrangement is also very awkward. The time is wrong, the environment is wrong, and the settings of other people's novels are plagiarized. You must first learn to adjust, otherwise you will end up being wrong.

Brother Qiu? This title really makes me want to vomit. Aren't you a scholar? Those who know you are a scholar from the Ming Dynasty, but those who don't know think you are the leader of street gangsters. And since in feudal society, since when can a scoundrel call his master brother? Even if you don't call you master or eldest master, it's always reasonable to call you young master, right? Brother Qiu, Brother Qiu is really a show, my expectations are too high, do you have any recommendations for mixed martial arts?

Buying a house in the village for a few thousand taels at the beginning is poisonous, and the plot in Chapter 12 and Chapter 13 where you meet Yao Yue Lianxing is even more poisonous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The plot is almost the same as the beginning of the Republic of China. After reading it, I felt that the author had no creativity. Let's take a look at the comprehensive martial arts of the Ming Dynasty. In the end, they created a system similar to that of cultivating immortals and Yangshen. They also pushed away the brothers who came for martial arts. The author is really talented and discouraged even those who came in for introduction.

To be honest, your copy is not good. There is no intention to follow the narrative description. I am a reader of the book, and I feel uncomfortable after listening to it. I have no sense of expectation for the subsequent plot. Not to mention the plot, Yihua Palace alone is a failure. There are several people following this book. Two stupid women fight to the death for a man. It is boring to read. In addition to the author's own description, Uncle Jiu is also an important reason why the book became popular in the Republic of China.

Another chicken villa! According to the village you mentioned, food and clothing are problems! A yard worth 500 taels! I also want to buy a yard worth three thousand taels in the village! I really am. . . Alas, is the whole village worth three thousand taels? ? ? ? !

What the hell, super poisonous weed, the whole clan actually came to practice martial arts, it's just been a few days since I came back, Yihua Palace has no cards, everyone wants it

Today's writers are very confident. They dare to write about a comprehensive world without even figuring out a single plot. There will be problems if a lot of characters are forcibly crammed together.

The beginning of this book is roughly the same as the book Opening: A Republic Plane, which is a bit excessive 😅

As someone who writes about mixed martial arts, most people don't agree with your worldview. How did you adapt it? So when it comes to one world, one world is the best! Integrated martial arts is a cheating setting, because you can't fuse it, and even after you fuse it, readers won't agree with it! So many people don't want to watch any more after watching the variety show, so the author can only pounce.

After looking at the catalog, I saw that this was plagiarism, Niupi plus! ! ! !

It looks okay, but in fact it is just a copycat. The relationship between the characters is not clear, the combat power system is a bit broken, and it blindly emphasizes human relationships. Although the author will find ways to round it off later, as long as you see the front, few people will want to see the back. There are too many exciting places, especially the modern teaching, which underestimates the thoughts of ancient people. I originally liked mixed martial arts, but the main line is unclear, the foreshadowing is long and smelly, I really don't like it.

The protagonist is deliberately downplaying the influence of firearms in ancient times. Although he is a powerful Ming Dynasty, the terrifying thing about firearms is that ordinary people can also use them. The protagonist has obviously used them many times, but the government has not shown any sign of it. It is too stupid.

Most authors look up to Zhang Sanfeng in Yitian, saying that others practice martial arts while he cultivates immortality. For example, Zhao Min pretended to be a monk and plotted against Zhang Sanfeng. He was injured. I don't know how serious the injury was. Okay! You, a cultivator, actually let a martial arts practitioner plot against you? Sure.

To be honest, as long as there is no fantasy in this kind of martial arts world, a pig's feet with dozens of AKs and rocket launchers will be invincible. Even the masters have to kneel in front of modern weapons.

The plagiarism of this book is too obvious.

I saw a novel that is exactly the same as what you wrote. Even the title is the same. Is it your trumpet? Hahahahaha

What is the situation with 128 and 129? The end of Chapter 128 and the beginning of Chapter 129 are not connected at all? What's going on?

Join Yihua Palace? After receiving the news, the Sun Moon God Sect immediately destroyed the Ji clan and the whole book was finished! It's time to move on to the next book!

For the author, every time he opens a new book, it is like reincarnation. No one knows what kind of life he can live, let alone how long he can live. In the era of new books, data is very important. Recommendations, comments, collections, follow-up readings, and monthly votes are all urgently needed. Book friends who feel that this book is not thick are also requested to support me. How long a book can survive actually depends 90% on how much support the readers have...

Don't you think this book is very smooth and it controls the sinister nature of people's hearts well?

It seems that the dynasty made a mistake.

It's not a question of whether you can see or not. In the martial arts world, if you use machine guns, cannons, etc., Your world view will be ruined! This is the logic of reading novels. Anything that violates the logic of novels is basically the image of entering the palace.

I have a world of martial arts. This book has the same setting. It should be written by the same author. There are too many harems and it is too busy to write. I can only keep talking about ambiguous topics. It is better to read the book Love City. If it writes less about women, it should be a good book. It is a pity.