I Would Never Fall in Love with a Monster If I Just Want to Write a Book

The perfect silly and sweet girlfriend + the good-for-nothing male protagonist. When I look at it, I feel like it's a self-titled article. The author wants to write about a male protagonist who is an ordinary person. There is no problem. Everyday water, daily sweetness, daily affection, and dog food alone can attract a large number of readers. However, if you look at the plot, who is not just trying to show off? It's Han Sheng who comes forward, whether it's LOL games or volleyball, it's the same. I remember the author talked about the daily life of writing monsters and codewords in Chapter 76. Now there are more than 100 people. What about the daily life? Your daily life is that Yu Wenxuan teases Han Sheng every day, uses dirty tricks every day, and then acts like a fool and slaps her in the face every day? What about codewords? How many times have code words been mentioned in these 20 chapters? What is this plot for? The other thing is the sense of separation. Apart from Wei Guangzheng, are there any normal people around the protagonist? The president of the National Youth Team, with an acting fee of tens of thousands; Shi Wushuang, a top painter, who leads the protagonist; Liu Zhuyu, the campus goddess, who seems to be a very good writer; Qite, a top technical geek, Duan Ren is probably the mermaid. Not to mention Han Sheng, a pentagonal warrior. Based on this character, do you want to write about Sakurasou or Suzumiya? The villain is seriously retarded, cheating in the e-sports part; blatantly beating people in the volleyball part; and now he's peeping in the shower. Do you think that all rich, handsome men are so aggressive that they want women whenever they see them, no matter what the means? In the last few chapters, do you want to develop into the Xiaolin family? Another monster? Also, the introduction of this book is for a single woman, right? Then what kind of ambiguity does Liu Heshi have with the male protagonist? Forget it if it doesn't have any foreshadowing and can't give people a sense of expectation, forget it's a SB scene that's all pretense and slaps the face, forget it's nothing routine, the question is, do you really know what you want to write? What I feel now is that I just made this one stroke here and there, without thinking about the plot and pretending to be a slap in the face. Na Yu is the author's sharp weapon in terms of word count. He just made up the plot without thinking about it —————————————————————— It's a bit messy, sorry

... As a senior reader + romantic action movie lover, I would like to give the author a suggestion... The heroine is very ignorant + pure in thinking. Wear clothes and go barefoot today, my little feet look great←Expand the content and write a chapter. I don't know how to brush my teeth and wash my face. The man taught her how to brush her teeth and saw a patch of white snow. ←Expand the content and come to a chapter. At night, I don't know how to take a shower. The man taught her (not to get started, but to see some benefits). Be subtle in your description. ←Expand the content and come to a chapter. ↑Half-covered. The text is broad and profound, and it doesn't have to be explicit, right~ In one chapter, two-fifths of the text is laid out in the front, and one-fifth of the plot is implicit in the middle. The last two-fifths are written about the male protagonist's inner activities. . One chapter is over. The heroine has such a personality. As a result, the plot is pure and innocent... There is no color at all... Written according to my suggestion. Sexy? Sort of. Seqing? The first one or two chapters at the beginning are pretty good, right? The scale is pretty good. . The back is so serious

Which editorial team is this? Is this style popular now? Feels so familiar

I didn't understand this book. It felt a bit like the dragon clan, but it was a little bit. Maybe the author himself didn't understand what he wanted to write.

How to put it this way, I feel that the setting is very good, both the characters and the background era are very good, and the writing style is also quite good. Logically speaking, it should be very attractive, but I don't know why I just can't stand it. Just like what you wrote in the article: "This story is not interesting" To put it bluntly, I felt a serious sense of separation after reading this novel. I often felt like "What kind of virtues does this male protagonist have to match the female protagonist?" In terms of plot conflicts, the villain's setting is a bit old-fashioned, a bit like the villains of Long Ao Tianwen back then. So, here comes the question: Your male protagonist is not Long Aotian... The female protagonist is very successful. In comparison, the male protagonist is too ordinary and has no other characteristics except persistence. And "persistence" is the natural passive skill of the male protagonist in every novel nowadays. Your male protagonist feels like he is missing out among the many male protagonists in the novel. I suggest that the author can add some characteristics to the male protagonist. Based on the current word count and plot development, I think there is still enough work to be done and I can continue writing. Come on!

It's a very good novel, but the plot is pretty good. Come on 👍

After waiting for so long, watching the plot is a bit uncomfortable😭

It's good, but the game is too trivial

Updated eight hours ago, I just read the last chapter, the seventh one I read to the end... There are so few people 🌚

Emmmm, how should I put it? I have actually read many books on this type of subject matter, and I quite like reading this type of book. However, I think there are many shortcomings in your book. First of all, the writing style is not that good. Everyone is here to read daily life. You write so many off-topics. The story itself doesn't feel that attractive anymore. You can refer to "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago". His book makes people feel like they want to read another chapter after reading one chapter. The setting in this book feels reasonable, and it also writes about the daily life between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. This kind of book is for a single female protagonist.                                                                     Of course, there are other styles, such as "I was awakened by spiritual energy and gurgling" by Mingdong is also daily, but the style is invincible flow, which makes people look relaxed and happy. This kind of style has many female protagonists. You can also refer to "No one knows better than me" "Monster", when I first read this book, I felt a bit like yours. It was awkward. But I didn't expect that the writing got better and better. Later, the character's personality was perfectly portrayed, which made people feel really good about it. Writing a book does not mean that you have to finish it all at once. There are opportunities for improvement and progress in the middle, and the outline can be changed. So in the end I feel that the problem lies in two points, one is The writing style feels immature, and secondly, I feel that it does not describe the story you want to show in a very concentrated manner. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I saw Chapter 27 and it felt very awkward. I have no interest in reading further. I still hope that the author can write better and better. Come on!

I saw the latest chapter, that Hua Miaoyu, and I don't know what the point of writing about this person is. She is the silly and sweet heroine, and she doesn't need anyone else to support her. And there is no need for an outsider like Hua Miaoyu to speed up the progress. In the second chapter, when you eat oden on a rainy day, don't you have to recognize that you like that silly, sweet heroine? Some people say that Hua is the future heroine. The reason for learning painting is not that silly and sweet reason. Could it be the future heroine? And it's almost two hundred chapters. The ID problem has not been solved yet. The male protagonist is as useless as ever. And the supporting character like Yu was so frightened that he fainted and turned the page? No follow-up? That's considered a crime, right? Is that how it goes?

It's a very good book. Although there are some plots that I can't figure out, but I don't need to worry about that anymore since I've gone to whoring for free.

This book made me sentimental. Alas, good books are not popular... Come on, the author, we readers will stay with this book... (What on earth did I say... #Coverface)

? Is this the end? Not enough! Not enough to watch! Update for me! Give it to me quickly! 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤

Author, let me state in advance that I am not looking for trouble I want to ask, the protagonist does not have any hard power until now, and it is difficult to imagine that the protagonist can obtain those hard powers without the help of something beyond the norm, such as the system. If there is no hard power, how can we protect the heroine? After all, the heroine is not a modern person and is not even a human being. Let's not talk about the same magical abilities as the heroine. We must have money and power, and the heroine can basically do everything, and she can be proficient in everything. What does the protagonist do? How to put it, written like this, it feels like a mortal and a fairy in the fairy world are together. If it is a fairy tale, it is a touching story. In the end, they are separated by the Queen Mother, and it is not a happy happiness. End, not to mention that this cannot be written as a fairy tale. So this makes people feel that the protagonist and the heroine are forcibly brought together. The heroine is too perfect and the protagonist is too strong. Lu Mingfei has a little devil, and the protagonist has nothing. Lu Mingfei has a little devil but he can't protect Eli Yi. The protagonist doesn't even have a little devil. How can he protect the heroine? From the beginning to now, there are many places where the heroine may leave the protagonist, but just forcefully and reasonably find the protagonist and stay with him. Otherwise, the heroine will not leave. Relying on the setting to make the heroine stay, then this book can only become a puppet show. If the author will improve the hard power of the protagonist in the future, my suggestion is that there must be no improvement in the front, otherwise it will be like swallowing an elixir in the stomach. I can't help it. I suddenly change from a mortal to an existence like an immortal emperor. The sense of separation is serious. If there is no improvement later, then the protagonist and the heroine are in two different worlds.