At Hogwarts: the Opening Interception of Hermione Hu

I don't think there's anything bad about writing. After all, a novel is a novel, not reality. There will inevitably be things that are not consistent with common sense. All details serve the development of the main line. As for the unreasonable owl that some people say, have you ever thought that if the author explains these unreasonable aspects, it will inevitably cause delays in the plot and the reader's reading experience will become very poor. I believe this is what everyone does not want to see. Well, one detail of this book that I feel is quite good is that the protagonist is an Oriental. This setting makes it easier for readers to get involved with this character, and it will also make it easier to create dramatic conflicts. I'm very curious if something interesting will happen when the protagonist returns to the East. I look forward to it (๑˙ー˙๑)

I can only say that I am speechless😑! Haven't you read the original work? Do Muggles know about Jin Long? Buying a broom for first grade? Is there Christmas in October? Author, you disrespect the original work too much. Both the original plot and common sense are too "funny"! Although I know it is not easy to create, can you respect the original work and the readers? ! (Only personal opinion, please don't criticize me)

All in all... It's a mess.

I was poisoned when I read Chapter 9. List the poisonous points. First of all, the protagonist is in China and Hogwarts is in England, so I want to know, where did the owl come from? Intercontinental Guiding Eagle? Or an ancient mythical beast? You know, the magical animals in the original work are also animals, ordinary animals with magical powers. Then there is the issue of coins. Do ordinary people use gold galleons? I don't want to complain about this at all. The next question is the protagonist. My father suffered a fracture, and my mother ran to die with her. I... Still have loyal love? I'm afraid that the child is not his biological child, and the father knows the truth, but the mother wants to cover up the fact, but the father kidnapped the adulterer, and the mother died together to protect the adulterer, right? What if your biological son did this? Both are dead. Have you ever considered a son? Did you write that the protagonist's parents were a married couple? Also, Hogwarts does not accept Orientals. I don't know how to complain about this forced contradiction. Although Qiu is a mixed race, he is also an Oriental, right? This is wrong. And just think about it and you'll know that it's not that it's not accepted, it's that it's too far! What's the last thing? Let's talk about Hermione. Let's not talk about the serious OOC. Is Hermione that stupid? Forcibly come forward? Do you have any wrong understanding of Hermione? If it were Hermione and she was bullied by others, she could only secretly call the police or report the teacher, and then find a way to hold the bully back instead of taking the place of the bullied. To be honest, I have read so many Harry fanfics, and this is the first one that made me retreat after only reading nine chapters. It is really awesome. The above is purely a personal opinion. I don't accept what anyone says. Anyone who thinks it looks good can continue to watch it. The views I express only represent my own.

Using the currency of the wizarding world in Muggle territory is also a no-brainer. At the beginning, it was said that there was no one in Hogwarts to teach people to directly dispel magic and erase memories, but then they turned around and used gold Galleons in Muggle territory. This good guy is not as good as the fusion of Muggle wizards. It's better to buy it directly from HP leather original

The author wouldn't just play the game and then write this book. Golden galleons are the currency minted by goblins, and the British use pounds, dollars or euros.

This is the legendary "Xia Jiba✍🏻️"

Highly toxic, be careful! ! ! The author has never read the original work or the movie, and does not understand the characters or the background of the world. The dead nerd who teaches the divination class has political views. Are you still looking for Dumbledore? ? Can the admission book be registered manually? Gold Galleons are used all over the world, including the Muggle world? Are there any wild owls that deliver letters? As a wizard, go to a Muggle hotel instead of going to the Leaky Cauldron to find a translator? What the hell is the meeting place?

This is the legendary "Xia Jiba✍🏻️"

It's the first time I've seen a Death Eater like Quirrell who can let go of the God Guard... It's unbelievable.

How dare the author write this novel? He started writing it without even thinking or reading it. It feels like he is missing his brainstem.

How dare Western magic schools send owls to the East?

Can the Muggle world, that is, the ordinary world, use gold Galleons?

The meaning is unclear. Does the protagonist want to love Hermione? Or do you want to kill Hermione? If you love Hermione, you will have to lead her to death, if you hate Hermione, you will always be a father. I really don't know the author's conception. In one sentence, people in the pig-brained world don't understand.

After reading eight chapters, I was surprised not to find the world of ordinary people (let alone flying on a plane, just look at the dialogue to see how to insert it into the world of ordinary people).

After reading the introduction, I immediately had a new choice. I tore up the letter and said angrily that there was no magic in the world, and then went to school again. What do you think would happen? 😏😏😏

It's too ridiculous... I was so speechless when I saw the fight with Snape in Potions class that I gave up... It doesn't matter if you have your own thoughts and opinions when writing fan fiction. If there are too many mixtures and insufficient writing skills, it will easily fall apart in the future...

After reading a few chapters, I was successfully persuaded to quit. If you don't want to read the original work, why not read the movie before writing?

Whole body poisoning, illogical logic, currency issues, common sense issues,

I want to rant after reading the introduction. Please understand the basic settings before writing the book. If you are in the East and Asia, both China and Japan have magic schools. If you are in the East, it is not your turn to accept it in Hogwarts.

The king of dog lickers? ! What I want is a straight man, a strong-willed villain.

What a disgusting thing to write, I am so happy. Muggles can actually use gold galleons. George Fred and Cedric are in the same grade. Goblet of Fire is ecstatic. Congratulations to Cedric for not being able to participate in the Goblet of Fire due to age If you insist on writing like this, please remove all the things related to Harry Potter. Change it to disgusting.

This kind of excerpt from Hu so-and-so's book feels disgusting. It feels like the other person is directly treated as a commodity.

Suitable for people who have not read the original Harry Potter books.

What should I say? The author has never read the original work. Gold Galleons have a lot of purchasing power, and there are also many problems with the setting.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I like it so much. No matter what the comment section says, I used the built-in app "Duokan" on my Xiaomi phone and found "Starting Point Reading" all the way. I only read the Haha time travel article.

I really can't complain. I've read a few chapters and they're all full of flaws.