Begin as a Wolf

How many times have you fainted at the beginning? The most annoying thing is the useless protagonist. Everyone else is good, but the protagonist faints at every turn.

The opening idea is good, but the writing is really bad. Even if it is a novice text, the punctuation must be used correctly, and the sentences must be read smoothly. I heard that there is SHIELD in the back? How likely is it that you, a newcomer, can grasp the power of American comics? Not to mention the fact that Marvel's own combat power has collapsed. Even though the comics are drawn like 💩, and the movies are shot like shit, people still buy it. What's more, it at least has something exciting to watch. Can you do it? A suggestion to the author, add X-Men and DC as well. The more you add, the better. Then you will have endless plots to write. As for losing the combat power, don't worry, this book will allow readers to sort out the plot and you will be successful. 🤭

If you want to write the book Aegis, it will collapse. How is the magical world? What is hell? Can you write the combat power index well?

The Twilight Saga is still watchable, but it's not interesting after the Twilight Saga. It adds a lot of miscellaneous worlds, and the protagonist is not very strong. Every time he encounters someone of similar strength, or a little higher, the description of the fight is not good, so the fight is really irritating.

What did it become in the end? Fenrir?

Your writing is really bad! What a pity for such a good subject

The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes, and I can't read it later

Great, I hope it's not a single heroine

The West crosses borders and comes to the East to cause destruction, and then goes back after doing so. I will never die after imperialism is over 🪖

Oh, look what this is? , There is a novel about a druid, I hope this little seedling can survive! , It's really hard to find Druid novels on the market.

S. H. I. E. L. D. Can write. But for newbies. It is recommended to determine a main world, such as Twilight Zone. Then other plots are split into separate copy worlds. It's best to have no connection. Because hodgepodge is so hard to write. Just sorting out the plot is quite troublesome. .

Keep at it and don't give up halfway.

Ha, when I saw the second chapter, I felt like it was a new author. A single chapter is usually 9 pages long.

The front part was good, but the back part fell apart and got too involved in the plot. The protagonist was also speechless. Can't you change into a vest when you go out? Can't you just change your name and appearance to participate in everything? They didn't even give themselves any room for change, and some of the plot's benefits were not met with a lot of troubles. The protagonist was so speechless that he took the initiative to get involved when he could have stayed out of the matter. He was so clueless that he thought the protagonist had become a god! Just like going to school! Knowing that a big change is coming, why don't you focus on becoming stronger? Go to Mao's school, there are so many troubles in school, and it wastes time. All you have to do is get your name, and spend money to buy a certificate after graduation.

Come on, I hope it's a single heroine

Why are you writing about Alice? It's so annoying to write.

The grades are so embarrassing: why not use apprentice, formal, master, legend, weak divine power, weak divine power, medium divine power, strong divine power, great divine power? Bronze, silver, and gold look awkward.

By the way, does this werewolf get stuck when playing poker?

I cast 4 votes and hope you can continue writing.